Music— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be careful with grammar and sentence structure. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons using correct verb forms and linking words. Avoid repetition (e.g., "happy music" repeated) and keep it within 2–3 concise sentences.

Ví dụ: I prefer happy music because it makes me feel energetic and more positive. For example, upbeat songs with a fast tempo lift my mood and help me focus when I'm working.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and use consistent tense. Use a topic sentence (Yes/No + reason), then add a specific example with linking words (for example, when...). Correct modal/auxiliary usage ("will" is unnecessary here) and avoid tense shifts.

Ví dụ: Yes, happy music definitely makes me feel more excited because the lively rhythm lifts my mood. For example, when I'm feeling down I play upbeat songs while driving, and they usually cheer me up.

Gợi ý: Organize your answer: give a clear topic sentence about past lessons, then provide specific details (instrument, duration, reason). Use correct past tense and avoid awkward phrasing like "used to" combined incorrectly. Keep it concise (2–3 sentences).

Ví dụ: Yes, I took a few music lessons when I was younger. I had a short drumming course for a couple of months, but it ended early because the teacher was too busy, and I also attended a few beginner guitar classes.

Gợi ý: Use correct verb tenses and clearer connectors. Start with a direct answer, then give a specific activity and explain why using linking words (because, so). Fix negatives ("will won't" incorrect) and plural/singular ("things" → "thing").

Ví dụ: Yes, I often listen to music while doing other things, especially when I'm showering. Listening to upbeat songs makes the shower less boring and helps me relax after a long day.

× I happy music will makes me feel energetic and it also make me feel positive.

✓ I prefer happy music because it makes me feel energetic and it also makes me feel positive.

The student used incorrect verb forms with third person singular subjects. 'Makes' must agree with singular subject 'it' and 'make' should be 'makes' when referring to 'happy music'. Also 'I happy music' is ungrammatical; replace with 'I prefer happy music'. Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement by using 'makes' after singular nouns like 'happy music'. ID:2

× Yes, it is. When I was down I actually listened. Happy music Will makes me feel very uplifting and I love to listen to happy music when I was driving too.

✓ Yes. When I feel down, I actually listen to happy music. Happy music makes me feel uplifted and I love to listen to it when I am driving too.

Mixed and incorrect tenses were used. 'Was down' and 'actually listened' suggest past but speaker means a habitual or present response, so use present simple: 'feel' and 'listen'. 'Will makes' is incorrect: modal 'will' + 'makes' is wrong; use simple present 'makes'. 'Very uplifting' used as result should be 'makes me feel uplifted' for correct adjective use. Also use 'when I am driving' for present habitual action. Suggestion: use present simple for habitual reactions and ensure correct verb forms without unnecessary modals. ID:6

× I used to learn a little drum but just a little because the teacher was busy to teach me so I don't have class at the end and also have used to learn guitar before but it's just for a few classes.

✓ I used to learn a little drumming, but only a little because the teacher was too busy to teach me, so I didn't continue the classes. I also used to learn guitar before, but it was only for a few lessons.

Problems include incorrect infinitive 'to teach me' after 'busy' (should be 'too busy to teach me'), incorrect present 'don't have class at the end' for past continuation (use 'didn't continue the classes'), and awkward phrasing 'have used to learn' (correct is 'used to'). Use past tense consistently for past habits. Suggestion: use 'used to' for past habitual actions and past simple for completed actions; use 'lessons' or 'classes' consistently. ID:11

× Yeah, of course I love to listen music, especially when I was showering.

✓ Yeah, of course I love to listen to music, especially when I am showering.

Missing preposition 'to' after 'listen' (correct: 'listen to music'). Also tense 'was showering' should be present habitual 'am showering' to match general preference. Suggestion: remember verb 'listen' requires preposition 'to'; use present simple or present continuous for habitual actions depending on context. ID:13

× It's because it will won't make me feel like showering is such a boring things.

✓ It's because it won't make showering feel so boring.

Redundant and incorrect modal combination 'will won't'; choose 'won't' alone. Word order and noun form: 'showering is such a boring things' is wrong: 'things' should be singular 'thing' or better rephrase to 'make showering feel so boring.' Use adverb 'so' before adjective 'boring'. Suggestion: avoid double modals, use correct noun number, and place adjectives/adverbs correctly (e.g., 'so boring' or 'very boring'). ID:27}]}