Music— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and correct grammar while keeping natural phrasing. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one specific example with a linking word. Fix verb forms and redundant words (e.g., “before”, repeated “to”). Aim for 2–3 sentences and use precise vocabulary like “cheerful” or “uplifting.”

Ví dụ: I prefer happy music because it instantly uplifts my mood. For example, when I feel stressed after work, listening to cheerful songs helps me relax and improves my energy.

Gợi ý: Avoid repetition and incomplete sentences. Give a clear direct answer, then one or two specific supporting details using linking words (e.g., “because” or “for example”). Use accurate collocations (e.g., “feel joyful” or “feel over the moon”) and finish your thought. Keep it within 3 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, definitely — happy music makes me feel more excited because it lifts my spirits and increases my energy. For example, when I listen to upbeat songs I feel joyful and almost ‘over the moon,’ which makes me more motivated to exercise or dance.

× I prefer happy music before because it instantly uplift my mood and feels and makes me feel like upbeat.

✓ I prefer happy music because it instantly uplifts my mood and makes me feel upbeat.

Errors: verb form and redundancy. 'Prefer' is present simple, so the verb 'uplift' must be third person singular 'uplifts' (subject: it). Remove redundant words 'before' and 'feels and' which are ungrammatical and unnecessary. Combine 'makes me feel upbeat' instead of 'makes me feel like upbeat.' Suggestion: use correct subject-verb agreement and concise phrasing. Grammar problem type ID:6

× For instance, when I am stressed after work, listening to to cheerful songs helps me relax and puts me in a much better mood.

✓ For instance, when I am stressed after work, listening to cheerful songs helps me relax and puts me in a much better mood.

Error: repeated word 'to' (typo) and gerund phrase is correct but had duplication. The structure 'listening to cheerful songs' is correct as a gerund subject; remove the extra 'to'. Suggestion: proofread for repeated words and keep gerund phrase as is. Grammar problem type ID:8

× Yes, yes, definitely happy music makes me feel more excited because whenever I listen to the happy music then I feel very enjoyable and it also it also makes me to feel like a like a over the moon and sometimes it also raised my eyebrows when I.

✓ Yes, definitely happy music makes me feel more excited because whenever I listen to happy music I feel very pleased; it also makes me feel like I am over the moon, and sometimes it even makes my eyebrows raise.

Multiple errors: incorrect adjective/adverb choice ('very enjoyable' should be 'very pleased' or 'I enjoy it'); unnecessary 'the' before 'happy music' and repeated phrases 'it also it also'; infinitive misuse 'makes me to feel' should be 'makes me feel'; phrase 'like a like a over the moon' is ungrammatical—use 'like I am over the moon'; past tense 'raised' conflicts with present general statement — use 'raise' or 'makes my eyebrows raise'. Suggestions: use appropriate adjectives for feelings, remove duplicates, correct infinitive usage, and maintain consistent present tense. Grammar problem type ID:6