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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you prefer sad or happy music?

Thí sinh

I prefer happy music because I can feel happy when I listen happy music.

Giám khảo

Does happy music make you feel more excited?

Thí sinh

Yes.

Đánh giá

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Part 1

Do you prefer sad or happy music?

Điểm: 58.0

Gợi ý: 回答は簡潔ですが不自然な表現や繰り返しがあります。まず、主題文を自然な英語に直し、理由を具体的に示すことを勧めます。例えば「I prefer happy music because it lifts my mood and helps me concentrate」など感情や状況(気分が上がる・集中できる)を明示し、接続語(because, so, therefore, which)を使って論理的に繋げてください。また、文法的に正しい形(listen to happy music)に直し、語彙の幅を広げるために“uplifts / energises / soothing”などの語を使う練習をしてください。回答は最大5文に収め、不要な反復を避けてください。

Ví dụ: I prefer happy music because it lifts my mood and helps me focus when I’m working. For example, upbeat songs with a strong rhythm make me feel more energetic, so I often play them while studying or exercising.

Does happy music make you feel more excited?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: 単語一つだけの返答は情報が少なく、会話として不十分です。簡潔に「はい、〜です」と理由や具体例を付け加える練習をしてください。接続語(because, when, so)を使って説明を広げ、具体的な状況(通勤中や運動中など)や程度(a little, very)を示すと高得点につながります。可能なら感情の変化や行動の例も添えてください。

Ví dụ: Yes, it often makes me feel more excited because upbeat melodies and fast tempos increase my energy. For instance, when I listen to lively pop songs while jogging, I tend to run faster and feel more motivated.

Ngữ pháp

Verb + -ing form

× I prefer happy music because I can feel happy when I listen happy music.

I prefer happy music because I can feel happy when I listen to happy music.

The verb 'listen' requires the preposition 'to' when referring to what is being heard (listen to something). This is a preposition + verb collocation rather than a verb taking an -ing form. Add 'to' before 'happy music' to form the correct phrase 'listen to happy music'. Suggestion: Practice common verb-preposition combinations (e.g., listen to, look at, depend on) and pay attention to patterns in example sentences.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

HappyCheerful; Glad; Fortunate
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