Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you have a favorite teacher?
Thí sinh
Yes, of course I have a favorite teacher. She name is Sukhwinder Kaur. She is a very brilliant teacher and she name is who.
Giám khảo
Do you want to be a teacher in the future?
Thí sinh
Yes, definitely I want to be a teacher in future because I think a teacher is the best role ever in your life. And if I if I get chance and I definitely teacher.
Giám khảo
Do you have a teacher from your past that you still remember?
Thí sinh
No, I have not uh have a teacher in past still I my phone last year broken and I all all photos connect, connect contact forget and that's why I have not teacher in past in past remember.
Giám khảo
Are you still in touch with your primary school teachers?
Thí sinh
Not at all I'm not still in touch with my primary school teacher. Last year my phone has have has broken and all contact forget in my phone and I buy a new phone and that's why I still in touch my primary teacher.
Giám khảo
In what way has your favourite teacher helped you?
Thí sinh
Vividly remember in my teacher is a English teacher. She is a very brilliant teacher and she always helped me how to speak English and some odd tips.
Giám khảo
Do you like your primary school teachers more than your high school teachers?
Thí sinh
Definitely I like my primary teachers because I'm not a studied in high school and I think is a primary teacher best teacher because all all uh student, uh, uh, treat in all, uh, same procedure. I think a primary.
Do you have a favorite teacher?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: Be concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, use correct verb forms and possessives, and avoid repetition. Give one or two specific details about why she is your favourite using linking words (for example, "because" or "who").
Ví dụ: Yes, my favourite teacher is Sukhwinder Kaur. She was my English teacher and helped me improve my speaking and confidence because she gave clear explanations and lots of speaking practice.
Do you want to be a teacher in the future?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: Make a direct statement then support it with a reason. Avoid hesitations and repetition. Use correct tense and article usage, and one linking phrase such as "because" or "so" to connect ideas.
Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to be a teacher in the future because I enjoy helping others learn and I find teaching very rewarding. For example, teaching English would allow me to support students with their speaking skills.
Do you have a teacher from your past that you still remember?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: Answer the question directly, then give a clear reason. Avoid unnecessary details that confuse the message. Use past tense when talking about past events and connect devices to memory loss using simple phrases like "because I lost my contacts".
Ví dụ: I can't remember any past teachers clearly because my phone broke last year and I lost all my contacts and photos, so I no longer have their details.
Are you still in touch with your primary school teachers?
Điểm: 36.0Gợi ý: Give a short direct answer, then explain briefly. Use correct negative constructions and simple past for events that already happened. Use linking words like "because" to explain why you are not in touch.
Ví dụ: No, I'm not in touch with my primary school teachers because my phone broke last year and I lost all my contacts when I bought a new phone.
In what way has your favourite teacher helped you?
Điểm: 42.0Gợi ý: Start with a clear topic sentence describing how she helped you, then give one or two specific examples. Use correct prepositions and verbs (e.g., "helped me to speak English"), and link details with "for example" or "for instance."
Ví dụ: My favourite teacher was my English teacher and she helped me improve my speaking skills. For example, she encouraged me to speak in class, corrected my pronunciation gently, and gave practical tips for learning new vocabulary.
Do you like your primary school teachers more than your high school teachers?
Điểm: 38.0Gợi ý: Be clear and concise. State your preference directly, then explain why with specific reasons and comparisons. Use correct grammar: say "I didn't study in high school" and avoid filler words.
Ví dụ: I prefer my primary school teachers because I didn't study in high school, and primary teachers treated all students equally and created a warm, supportive environment.
× She name is Sukhwinder Kaur.
✓ Her name is Sukhwinder Kaur.
The subject 'She' cannot directly take the noun 'name' as a predicate without a copula or possessive pronoun. Use the possessive pronoun 'Her' with 'name' or use 'She is called' or 'Her name is'. This fixes subject-pronoun structure and yields a natural English sentence.
× She is a very brilliant teacher and she name is who.
✓ She is a very brilliant teacher, and her name is Sukhwinder Kaur.
The clause 'she name is who' is ungrammatical. Use the possessive pronoun 'her' with 'name' and provide the name after 'is'. Also join clauses with a conjunction and a comma for clear structure.
× Yes, definitely I want to be a teacher in future because I think a teacher is the best role ever in your life.
✓ Yes, definitely I want to be a teacher in the future because I think a teacher is the best role in life.
Add the definite article 'the' before 'future' and use the noun phrase 'in life' rather than 'in your life' to keep the sentence general. Also 'ever' is unnecessary and awkward here; removing it makes the sentence more natural.
× And if I if I get chance and I definitely teacher.
✓ If I get the chance, I will definitely become a teacher.
The original repeats fragments and omits auxiliary verbs. Use 'the chance' with the definite article, and express the future intention with 'will' plus the main verb 'become' for clarity and correct future tense formation.
× No, I have not uh have a teacher in past still I my phone last year broken and I all all photos connect, connect contact forget and that's why I have not teacher in past in past remember.
✓ No, I do not have a teacher from the past I still remember. Last year my phone broke and I lost all my photos and contacts, so I cannot remember a past teacher.
Multiple problems: incorrect tense and auxiliary use. Use simple present 'do not have' for current state and 'broke' as the past tense of 'break'. Use 'lost' for losing data and include possessive 'my' for photos/contacts. Reorder clauses for clarity and concision.
× Not at all I'm not still in touch with my primary school teacher.
✓ Not at all; I'm not still in touch with my primary school teachers.
Use plural 'teachers' if referring generally to more than one teacher and add punctuation for clarity. 'I'm not still in touch' is acceptable but more natural is 'I'm not in touch' or 'I'm not still in contact with'.
× Last year my phone has have has broken and all contact forget in my phone and I buy a new phone and that's why I still in touch my primary teacher.
✓ Last year my phone broke and I lost all my contacts. I bought a new phone, which is why I am not in touch with my primary teachers.
Use simple past 'broke' and 'lost' for completed past actions. 'Bought' is the past tense of 'buy'. Use relative clause 'which is why' to connect cause and effect and correct preposition 'in touch with'.
× Vividly remember in my teacher is a English teacher.
✓ I vividly remember that my teacher was an English teacher.
Include a subject and auxiliary 'I vividly remember that...' Use the correct article 'an' before the vowel sound 'English' and use past tense 'was' if referring to a past teacher.
× She is a very brilliant teacher and she always helped me how to speak English and some odd tips.
✓ She was a very brilliant teacher and she always helped me learn how to speak English and gave me useful tips.
Use past tense 'was' if referring to a past teacher. Replace 'helped me how to speak' with 'helped me learn how to speak' and change 'some odd tips' to 'useful tips' for correct meaning and natural phrasing.
× Definitely I like my primary teachers because I'm not a studied in high school and I think is a primary teacher best teacher because all all uh student, uh, uh, treat in all, uh, same procedure. I think a primary.
✓ I definitely prefer my primary school teachers because I did not study much in high school, and I think primary teachers are the best because they treat all students the same way.
Correct word order: 'I definitely prefer...' Use past tense 'did not study' for a past situation. Use plural agreement 'primary teachers are' and the phrase 'treat all students the same way' for clear meaning. Remove filler words and incomplete fragments.