Teachers— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and fix verb forms (e.g., 'she is always willing to help me').

Ví dụ: Yes, my favourite teacher is my primary school English teacher because she helped me build confidence in speaking. For example, she gave me extra practice after class and encouraged me to speak in front of others, so I felt less nervous and improved quickly.

Gợi ý: Give a direct answer first and then briefly explain reasons. Use clear grammar and avoid unclear phrases. Replace hesitations with short pauses and connect ideas with linking words (e.g., 'however', 'because').

Ví dụ: No, I don't plan to be a teacher. Instead, I want to become a professional music producer and rapper because I enjoy creating music and performing, and I have been working on songs and beats for several years.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and give a specific example. Correct grammar (e.g., 'whose name is Lan' and 'I can improve my English by sending messages to her'). Finish sentences and avoid trailing off.

Ví dụ: Yes, I still remember my favourite teacher, whose name is Lan. She helped me a lot during my childhood, and even now I practice English by messaging her; her corrections help me improve my grammar and vocabulary.

Gợi ý: Provide a clear topic sentence and one specific supporting detail. Fix redundancy and word choice (e.g., 'contact most' not 'contact most is'). Use linking words like 'because' to explain why you contact her more.

Ví dụ: Yes, I keep in touch with some of my primary school teachers, but I contact my English teacher most often because she always answers my questions and gives helpful feedback on my English.

Gợi ý: Give a clear, grammatical topic sentence and one or two concrete examples of how she helped. Use correct vocabulary ('extroverted' or 'shy') and link cause and effect with 'so' or 'therefore'.

Ví dụ: She helped me improve my communication skills because she noticed I was shy, so she gave me regular speaking practice in class and encouraged me to join group activities, which made me more confident speaking English.

Gợi ý: Start with a direct, concise answer and then give one reason with a specific detail. Use natural phrasing ('respect all my teachers' and 'played an important role in my development').

Ví dụ: No, I respect all my teachers equally because each one played an important role in my development; for example, primary teachers built my basics while high school teachers helped me prepare for exams.

× I have my old plan, so uh, to being a teacher in the future is not my right, My Ali for ex.

✓ I have my old plan, so being a teacher in the future is not my right; for example, I want to be a professional producer and rapper.

The original used 'to being' which is incorrect. After verbs or expressions like 'so' when stating a plan, use the gerund 'being' without 'to'. Also the sentence was fragmented; I combined and reordered phrases for clarity and correctness. Suggestion: use 'being' (gerund) after expressions of preference or plan, and link related clauses with commas or conjunctions.

× I really prefer my primary school English teacher because she helped me a lot when I was a child and moreover when whenever I need help she's she's away willing to help me.

✓ I really prefer my primary school English teacher because she helped me a lot when I was a child and whenever I need help she's always willing to help me.

The phrase had repetition ('when whenever') and incorrect word 'away' and duplicated 'she's'. The auxiliary 'she's' is fine but needs the adverb 'always' to indicate frequency in third person singular present. Suggestion: remove duplicated words and use 'she's always willing' for correct present-tense habitual meaning.

× I still remember my favorite teachers whose name LAN She helped me a lot, uh, during my childhood and, and now I can improve my English whenever I sending message to her in English.

✓ I still remember my favorite teacher whose name is Lan. She helped me a lot during my childhood, and now I can improve my English whenever I send messages to her in English.

There are several problems: 'teachers' should be singular 'teacher' to match 'whose name', missing copula 'is' after 'name', and wrong verb form 'sending' instead of 'send'. Also plural 'messages' fits natural usage. Suggestion: ensure noun and relative clause agree in number, include 'is' after 'name', and use base form for habitual actions ('send').

× Whenever I need backup she she's always willing to help me to answer me.

✓ Whenever I need backup, she's always willing to help answer my questions.

Redundant and ungrammatical phrasing 'help me to answer me' should be 'help answer my questions' or 'help me answer questions'. Also remove duplicate 'she she's'. Suggestion: use 'help' followed by base verb ('answer') or 'help me + base verb'.

× She helps me improve my communication skills because she find that I I'm quite an extroversial my my communication is so bad and she teach me during my childhood so I still remember her until now.

✓ She helped me improve my communication skills because she found that I was quite introverted and my communication was poor, and she taught me during my childhood, so I still remember her now.

Multiple issues: tense consistency (use past 'helped','found','taught' for past events), wrong adjective 'extroversial' (use 'introverted' or 'shy'), repeated words, and incorrect pronouns. Suggestion: keep past tense for past events, choose correct adjective ('introverted' or 'shy'), and avoid repetition.

× No, I always give the respect for all teachers who taught me during my childhood until now because I think each teacher plays a good role in my maturation.

✓ No, I always respect all the teachers who have taught me from my childhood until now because I think each teacher has played a good role in my development.

'Give the respect' is unnatural; use 'respect'. Use present perfect 'have taught' to indicate an action from past until now. 'Maturation' is awkward; 'development' is more natural. Suggestion: use appropriate verb collocation ('respect') and present perfect for continuous past-to-present actions.

× For example.

✓ For example, she helped me with pronunciation and confidence.

The fragment 'For example.' is incomplete and needs an object or clause to explain the example. Suggestion: always complete such discourse markers with a full clause describing the example.