Teachers— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and correct grammar; start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, and give one or two specific examples. Use linking words (for example, because, even though) to make reasoning clear.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have several favorite teachers because they supported me during difficult times. For example, when I struggled with math, my history teacher still spent extra hours explaining basic concepts, which helped me catch up. Because of that support, I felt more confident and motivated.

Gợi ý: Clarify the apparent contradiction and give a concise reasoned answer with linking words. Use a clear topic sentence stating your stance, then explain what you mean by "teacher in a different way" with a concrete example.

Ví dụ: I wouldn't like to be a school teacher, but I do want to teach in a different way. For instance, I hope to run workshops on photography for adults because I enjoy sharing my skills without the responsibilities of classroom management. Teaching in that form would suit my interests and lifestyle better.

Gợi ý: Be specific instead of vague praise. State one memorable teacher and describe one concrete memory or quality using linking words (for example, because, when). Avoid repetitive phrases and correct grammar errors.

Ví dụ: Yes, I still remember my primary school English teacher, Mrs. Patel, because she encouraged me to read aloud in class. When I was shy, she praised small improvements and gave me extra books, which increased my confidence and helped my English skills.

Gợi ý: Correct confusing pronouns and details; begin with a direct answer (yes/no) and then give specific information about how you keep in touch and why. Use clear sequence words (for example, every month, sometimes) and concise sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I am still in touch with one primary school teacher. We speak once a month by phone, and I visit him occasionally because he mentored me during my postgraduate studies. His ongoing advice felt like support from an older brother.

Gợi ý: Use clearer phrasing and provide a concrete example showing the teacher's method and its effect. Use linking words (for example, by, so) to connect method and result, and correct grammar (helped, let me work).

Ví dụ: My favorite teacher helped me by encouraging independent problem-solving rather than giving answers directly. For example, during a difficult assignment he gave hints and asked guiding questions, so I had to research and practice more, which improved my skills and confidence.

Gợi ý: Avoid vague or awkward phrases like "route making" and "how cruel the world is." State a clear comparison with reasons and specific examples, using linking words (for example, because, when) and more natural vocabulary (foundational, prepared me).

Ví dụ: Yes, I admire my primary school teachers more because they laid the foundation for my attitudes and work ethic. For instance, they taught me discipline and basic study habits, which prepared me for the challenges I faced later in high school.

× They are not favorite because of they give me good grades but they always help me in my difficult time.

✓ They are not my favorites because they give me good grades; they always help me in my difficult times.

The original sentence has pronoun and article problems: 'favorite' should be plural 'favorites' to match 'they'; 'because of they give' is incorrect phrase order and pronoun use. Use 'because they give me good grades' or 'not because they give me good grades'. Also 'in my difficult time' should be pluralized to 'in my difficult times' for general occasions. Suggestion: keep subject-verb structures in correct order and match singular/plural forms.'},{