Teachers— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Give a direct, grammatical topic sentence, avoid fragments, and add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Keep it concise (max 5 sentences).

Ví dụ: I don't have a favourite teacher now because I am very busy with my current job. As a result, I rarely think about my school days, so I can't single out anyone in particular. If I had more free time, I might remember some teachers more clearly.

Gợi ý: Avoid absolute or rude statements; answer directly, explain reasons politely, and use linking words to connect ideas. Fix grammar (e.g., 'School is a place I hate' is awkward).

Ví dụ: No, I would not like to be a teacher in the future because I don't enjoy working with young children. Moreover, I prefer a job that involves independent research rather than classroom management.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear topic sentence, then give a brief reason and one specific detail. Use linking words (e.g., 'because', 'however') and correct phrasing ('remember' not 'remind').

Ví dụ: No, I can't think of any particular teacher from my past because I focus on my current life and work. However, I do occasionally remember a few lessons that influenced how I work today.

Gợi ý: Answer directly with correct tense and clearer reasons; avoid fillers like 'uh'. Use linking words and a specific detail about communication methods or reasons.

Ví dụ: No, I am no longer in touch with my primary school teachers because I am very busy and we have lost contact over the years. If I needed to, I could try to find them on social media, but I haven't felt the need.

Gợi ý: Clarify who 'he' is and be specific about the help. Use linking words to connect cause and result, correct phrasing (e.g., 'express my emotions through Chinese characters'), and complete the sentence.

Ví dụ: My favourite teacher taught me how to express my emotions through Chinese calligraphy. Because of his guidance and practice assignments, I improved my technique and later won several prizes in a writing contest.

Gợi ý: Give one clear comparative topic sentence, then provide a concise reason with a linking word. Avoid repetition and fillers, and correct phrasing ('it's a long time ago' rather than 'it is so far').

Ví dụ: No, I prefer my high school teachers because I can remember them more clearly and they had a bigger impact on my studies. Since primary school was many years ago, their faces and names are harder for me to recall.

× I don't have a favorite teacher because.

✓ I don't have a favorite teacher.

The sentence ends with an unfinished subordinate clause 'because' that has no following clause. Remove 'because' to make a complete declarative sentence. Alternatively, provide the reason after 'because', e.g. 'I don't have a favorite teacher because I am busy.' Use complete clauses to avoid sentence fragments.

× I'm busy my current work so there are no time to remember them.

✓ I'm busy with my current work, so I don't have time to remember them.

Missing preposition 'with' after 'busy' and incorrect use of 'there are no time'. Use 'I don't have time' for correct subject-verb agreement and countable/uncountable time. Add a comma before the coordinating conjunction 'so'.

× No, I definitely don't want to be a teacher because I don't like children and the school.

✓ No, I definitely don't want to be a teacher because I don't like children or school.

Using 'and the school' is unnatural; 'or school' is more idiomatic when expressing dislike of either. Also drop the definite article 'the' before 'school' when speaking generally.

× School is hate place for me.

✓ School is a hateful place for me.

'Hate' is a verb; the adjective form 'hateful' or the noun phrase 'a place I hate' is required. Also include the indefinite article 'a' before 'hateful place.' Alternative: 'School is a place I hate.'

× No, I don't because I'm not interested in them and I I'm so busy that I have no time to remind about my past.

✓ No, I don't because I'm not interested in them and I'm so busy that I have no time to think about my past.

'I I'm' is a typo/repetition; use single 'I'm'. 'Remind about my past' is incorrect — use 'think about my past' or 'be reminded about my past.' Also ensure pronoun reference 'them' is clear (teachers).

× I think it is important how we've got now.

✓ I think it is important how we are now.

'We've got' is informal and ambiguous here. The present tense 'we are now' or 'what we have now' fits better. For clarity, use 'what we have now' if referring to current situation or 'how we are now' for state.

× No, I haven't been still in touch with my primary school teachers because uh have no time to think about my past, so I don't want to contact with them.

✓ No, I am not still in touch with my primary school teachers because I have no time to think about my past, so I don't want to contact them.

'Haven't been still in touch' is awkward; use 'am not still in touch' or 'am no longer in touch.' Missing subject 'I' before 'have no time.' 'Contact with' is incorrect — use 'contact them' or 'get in contact with them.' Also remove filler 'uh' in formal answers.

× He told me how to express my emotion to like Chinese characters.

✓ He taught me how to express my emotions, such as liking Chinese characters.

'Told me how to' is acceptable but 'express my emotion to like Chinese characters' is ungrammatical. Use 'taught me' for instruction, plural 'emotions', and rephrase the example 'such as liking Chinese characters' for clarity.

× So because of his thought, I won a lot of prizes in a contest in.

✓ Because of his guidance, I won many prizes in a contest.

'So because' is redundant; choose 'because' or 'so'. 'His thought' is unnatural — use 'his guidance' or 'his teaching'. 'A lot of prizes' is informal; 'many prizes' is better. Remove the trailing 'in' and place 'in a contest' correctly.

× No, I don't. Uh, I prefer my high school teachers because I can't recall my primary school teachers.

✓ No, I don't. I prefer my high school teachers because I can't recall my primary school teachers.

Remove filler 'Uh' in a formal response. The rest is acceptable; ensure tense 'can't recall' is present and matches context.

× Because it is so far.

✓ Because it is so long ago.

'It is so far' is unclear; to refer to time, use 'long ago'. If referring to distance, specify 'far away.' Use a full sentence or attach to previous sentence to avoid sentence fragment.