Teachers— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise, directly state who your favorite teacher is, then give one or two clear, specific reasons. Use correct grammar and simple linking words (for example, “because” and “also”). Avoid repetition and unclear phrases.

Ví dụ: My favorite teacher is my high school math teacher. He explained difficult problems in a simple way and always encouraged students to think creatively. Because of his patient teaching and genuine passion for math, I became more confident and interested in the subject.

Gợi ý: Answer directly whether you want to be a teacher in the future (yes/no/uncertain) and briefly explain. Keep sentences short and on-topic; avoid unrelated details about cryptocurrency unless they directly explain your teaching role.

Ví dụ: Yes. I am already a teacher — I work as an IELTS instructor and mentor. I enjoy teaching because it allows me to help people improve their language skills and make better career decisions.

Gợi ý: Pick one memorable teacher and describe them clearly: who they were, what they taught, and one specific thing they did that impressed you. Use coherent sentences with linking words like “for example” or “because.” Avoid listing multiple people in a short response.

Ví dụ: I still remember my fitness coach, Scott Herman. He taught me how to exercise safely and encouraged me to set realistic goals. For example, he helped me lose weight while gaining muscle by giving a structured workout and clear diet advice.

Gợi ý: State your answer directly (“No” or “Not really”) and give one or two specific reasons for losing contact. Use correct vocabulary and simple linking words such as “because” and “so.” Avoid confusing phrases and unnecessary words.

Ví dụ: Not really. We lost contact because I moved away after school and have been busy with work and family. Because of tight schedules and different locations, it has been difficult to keep in touch.

Gợi ý: Give a clear, specific example of how the teacher helped you — mention a skill or topic and a concrete result (for example, improved grades or confidence). Use concise sentences and link ideas with words like “for example” or “as a result.” Avoid vague or convoluted phrases.

Ví dụ: My math teacher helped me understand mechanics and problem solving. For example, after his lessons I could solve complex physics problems more confidently, and my exam scores improved significantly as a result.

Gợi ý: Answer directly which you prefer (primary or high school teachers) and give 1–2 specific reasons. Use clear linking words (“because,” “so,” “for example”) and avoid long, unclear lists. Keep to three sentences maximum.

Ví dụ: I prefer my high school teachers because I was more mature then and the lessons were more challenging. For example, my literature and chemistry teachers helped me develop critical thinking and better study habits.

× Me from being I'm completely honest with you, my math teacher has always been my perennial favorite.

✓ To be completely honest with you, my math teacher has always been my perennial favorite.

The original begins with an incorrect fragment 'Me from being I'm', which is ungrammatical. Reordering to 'To be completely honest with you' fixes sentence structure and provides a correct introductory phrase. Suggestion: Use standard introductory phrase 'To be completely honest' and follow with the main clause.

× He would have a very unique way of looking at problems and from his vantage point, everything can be solved with a little wit and wisdom and kindness like in geometry, in algebra, so on and so forth.

✓ He has a very unique way of looking at problems, and from his vantage point everything can be solved with a little wit, wisdom, and kindness, whether in geometry, algebra, or other subjects.

Using 'would have' is unnecessary here; present simple 'has' better describes a habitual characteristic. The list needed clearer conjunctions and punctuation. 'So on and so forth' is informal; replace with 'or other subjects.' Suggestion: Use present simple for habitual traits and clear conjunctions when listing items.

× He just like breathe and the passion of math and into me and nurturing me towards.

✓ He just breathed the passion for math into me and nurtured me.

The original mixes tenses and uses ungrammatical phrases ('just like breathe and the passion of math and into me and nurturing me towards'). Change to past simple 'breathed' and 'nurtured' to describe actions the teacher performed. Remove extraneous words. Suggestion: Use clear verb phrases and consistent tense; 'breathed the passion for math into me' is idiomatic.

× I am right now, but if I'm not mistaken, I am an IELTS instructor and I'm kind of a mentor on on the market trends in terms of cryptocurrency arts clashes and to give people some sort of guidance on the next big thing and the trajectories of different cryptocurrency asset classes like Bitcoin and Etherium or showing them the hidden gem and the hidden gold.

✓ I am one right now; if I'm not mistaken, I am an IELTS instructor and a mentor on market trends in cryptocurrency, giving people guidance on the next big developments and the trajectories of different cryptocurrency asset classes like Bitcoin and Ethereum, and showing them hidden gems.

Problems: repetition ('on on'), awkward noun phrases ('cryptocurrency arts clashes'), mixed infinitive structures. Use 'I am one' to answer 'Do you want to be a teacher' when you already are. Use present simple for current roles and clean up list structure. Correct spelling 'Ethereum' and use plural 'gems.' Suggestion: Keep parallel structure when listing roles and correct technical terms.

× What my math and teacher, my fitness instructors, and especially Scott Herman from scotthermanfitness.com and the last one being my most respected and vulnerable teacher who have helped me to share a few pounds and at the same time gaining quite like a few pairs of muscle mass as as well.

✓ My math teacher, my fitness instructors (especially Scott Herman from scotthermanfitness.com), and finally my most respected and vulnerable teacher have helped me lose a few pounds while also gaining some muscle mass.

Original has wrong word order and incorrect verb agreement 'who have helped me to share a few pounds' and awkward phrases ('gaining quite like a few pairs of muscle mass as as well'). Correct pronoun and verb agreement and use idiomatic expressions 'lose weight' and 'gain muscle mass.' Suggestion: Use clear subject lists and correct verbs ('have helped me lose').

× And he or that guy is just very principled and disciplined in his own sense. I'm trying to.

✓ He is just very principled and disciplined in his own way. I'm trying to be like him.

'He or that guy' is informal and confusing; 'in his own sense' is non-idiomatic. 'I'm trying to.' is an incomplete sentence. Provide a complete second clause 'I'm trying to be like him.' Suggestion: Use idiomatic expressions 'in his own way' and complete the clause.

× Not really because I have live trips apart and we drifted away from each other much as I I adore them and I would love to keep in contact with them, but things get in the way.

✓ Not really, because our lives took us in different directions and we drifted apart, even though I adore them and would love to keep in contact, but things get in the way.

'I have live trips apart' is incorrect; correct phrase is 'our lives took us in different directions' or 'we drifted apart.' Reorder for clarity and remove repeated words. 'Keep in contact' is fine but 'with them' is redundant after 'contact.' Suggestion: Use idiomatic expressions for drifting apart and avoid repetition.

× Deadlines, assignments and also life responsibilities like child rearing and chat bearing actually take the majority of my term and living me with no chance actually pick up.

✓ Deadlines, assignments and life responsibilities like child-rearing and caregiving take up most of my time and leave me with no chance to reconnect.

Original uses wrong nouns ('chat bearing') and 'term' instead of 'time.' 'Living me' should be 'leaving me.' Use 'take up most of my time' and 'leave me with no chance to' for clarity. Suggestion: Use correct vocabulary and common collocations: 'take up time,' 'leave me with no chance to'.

× Well, my math teacher, like I have previously mentioned, I have actually drilled my head with mathematical knowledge and those principles related to dynamics and mechanics and to help me to actually walk through numerous problems and issues related to the forces in nature and the type of serviceable laws and debt loads of life, low exertion on the building. So me.

✓ Well, my math teacher, as I mentioned, filled my head with mathematical knowledge and principles related to dynamics and mechanics, which helped me work through numerous problems about forces in nature and practical laws related to load and stress in structures.

The original is disfluent, uses wrong idioms ('drilled my head' can be 'drilled into my head' but better 'filled my head'), and has many unclear phrases ('debt loads of life, low exertion on the building'). Rephrase for clarity and appropriate technical terms: 'load and stress in structures.' Suggestion: Use clearer technical terms and avoid literal translations; keep relative clauses concise.

× I would prefer the latter because I have already like grown up quite a bit and when I come to high school actually.

✓ I would prefer the latter because I had already grown up quite a bit by the time I came to high school.

Tense mismatch: the speaker refers to past growth before attending high school, so past perfect or simple past ('had already grown' or 'had grown') is appropriate. Remove filler 'like' and complete the clause. Suggestion: Use past perfect to show earlier action relative to another past event.

× So by learning about mathematics and chemistry, literature, English as a second language, from the way that I remember them, the way that they drew my head with grammar exercises, narratives and fictional narratives and Vietnamese literature have been.

✓ By learning subjects such as mathematics, chemistry, literature and English as a second language, I remember how they taught me with grammar exercises, narratives and Vietnamese literature.

Original sentence is fragmented and repeats ('narratives and fictional narratives') and ends abruptly. Reorder to subject-verb-object structure and remove redundancy. Suggestion: Keep sentences complete and avoid repetition; list subjects clearly and use a main clause to state the memory.