Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you have a favorite teacher?
Thí sinh
OK, that's interesting question. We think about the fairy teacher. I actually don't have my favorite teacher. I don't know why, but I don't have any detail or information to tell that supporting the reason why I have furry tissue here. But I like all of my tissue, whoever taught me.
Giám khảo
Do you want to be a teacher in the future?
Thí sinh
Oh, this question is also quite interesting. I absolutely not want to be a teacher that's not going to be on my dream job ever because I feel like I'm not. Yeah, I have a capable, a good capable to tease or, you know, lead some student to give them a.
Giám khảo
Do you have a teacher from your past that you still remember?
Thí sinh
Yeah, she's my senior projects teacher that she helped me guide a lot of knowledge when I have to do my senior project. She touched me a lot and guide me a lot of things when I struck on my doing project. Yeah, thank you to her for the reasons why I success my project.
Giám khảo
Are you still in touch with your primary school teachers?
Thí sinh
Oh no, that was a long time ago. So I, I, I don't have in touch of any teacher in my primary school, but it would be great if I go back to my primary school and say hi to Tom T-shirt that that they ever taught me back then when I was a kid. It would be a great opportunity.
Giám khảo
In what way has your favourite teacher helped you?
Thí sinh
Umm I can not answer this question because I don't have my favorite teacher but if you say it in general way, I would love to say that I love being the teacher. Having guideline to make me understand what the topic of the lessons or lecture is about. Absolutely winning the difficult lesson such as the chemistry.
Giám khảo
Do you like your primary school teachers more than your high school teachers?
Thí sinh
Oh, yeah, I think about it. I do like my primary school tissue more than high school tissue because, yeah, they are very kind. And it was a long time ago. I still get, you know, not that good, not that glorious. How to say that? I'm still thinking about them. I know one of them is named Tisha **** and miss her so much.
Do you have a favorite teacher?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: Be direct and clear: state whether you have a favourite teacher, give one or two specific reasons or an example, and use correct vocabulary. Keep answers concise (max 4–5 sentences) and avoid repetition. Use linking words (for example, because, therefore) to connect ideas and correct key word errors (teacher, not tissue).
Ví dụ: I don't have a single favorite teacher; I like several teachers for different reasons. For example, my science teacher always explained difficult topics clearly and gave helpful examples, so I enjoyed her classes. Because of that, I respect many of my teachers rather than choosing just one.
Do you want to be a teacher in the future?
Điểm: 25.0Gợi ý: Answer directly (Yes/No) and give a clear reason with one supporting detail. Avoid filler words and unfinished sentences. Use linking words (because, so) and correct phrases (I am not capable, not 'tease'). Keep it within 3–4 sentences.
Ví dụ: No, I don't want to be a teacher in the future because my dream job is in software development. Teaching requires patience and communication skills, which I don't feel are my strongest areas. Therefore, I prefer to pursue a career that better matches my interests.
Do you have a teacher from your past that you still remember?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: Provide a clear topic sentence and two specific supporting details (what she did and how it helped). Use correct verb forms and linking words (for example, when, so). Avoid repetition and ensure pronouns are correct (she helped me, not she helped me guide).
Ví dụ: Yes, I remember my senior project supervisor who helped me a great deal. She gave clear feedback on my research design and taught me useful data-analysis techniques, which helped me overcome problems during the project. As a result, I completed the project successfully and learned valuable skills for future work.
Are you still in touch with your primary school teachers?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: Answer directly then give a brief reason or a wish. Use correct expression: 'in touch with' and avoid repetition. Be specific about who you would like to contact and why. Limit to 2–3 sentences and use linking words like 'but' or 'however'.
Ví dụ: No, I'm not in touch with my primary school teachers because it's been many years since I left that school. However, I would like to visit the school someday and say hello to a teacher named Ms. Tisha, because she was very kind to me as a child.
In what way has your favourite teacher helped you?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: Even if you don't have a favourite teacher, answer generally with specific examples of help teachers gave (explanations, feedback, motivation). Use clear sentences and linking words (for instance, for example). Avoid confusing phrasing like 'I love being the teacher' when you mean 'I appreciate teachers'.
Ví dụ: Although I don't have a single favorite teacher, teachers have helped me by giving clear guidance on difficult subjects. For example, my chemistry teacher explained complex concepts with simple experiments, which made it much easier for me to understand and pass the exams.
Do you like your primary school teachers more than your high school teachers?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: Answer clearly (Yes/No) and state reasons with specific examples or memories. Use correct vocabulary (teachers). Avoid vague phrases and keep to 2–4 sentences. Use linking words (because, so) to connect ideas.
Ví dụ: Yes, I prefer my primary school teachers because they were very kind and supportive when I was young. For instance, Ms. Tisha helped me build confidence in class by encouraging my answers, so I still remember her fondly.
× 'OK, that's interesting question.'
✓ 'OK, that's an interesting question.'
'An' is required before a singular countable noun starting with a vowel sound. The sentence also needs the article to be grammatically complete. Suggestion: include the correct indefinite article.'
× 'We think about the fairy teacher.'
✓ 'We thought about our favorite teacher.'
'Think' should match past or present context; here student is trying to introduce the topic and likely meant 'thought' or 'think'. Also "fairy teacher" is incorrect word choice; likely 'favorite teacher'. Subject-verb agreement and word choice corrected.'
× 'I actually don't have my favorite teacher.'
✓ 'I actually don't have a favorite teacher.'
'My favorite teacher' implies a specific person already known; more natural is 'a favorite teacher' when stating none exist. Use the indefinite article 'a'.'},{
× 'I don't know why, but I don't have any detail or information to tell that supporting the reason why I have furry tissue here.'
✓ 'I don't know why, but I don't have any details or information to explain why I don't have a favorite teacher.'
'Furry tissue' and 'that supporting' are nonsensical and incorrect pronoun/reference use. The sentence needed correct pronouns and noun choices: 'details' (plural), 'explain why', and 'favorite teacher'. Clarify meaning and use proper referents.'
× 'But I like all of my tissue, whoever taught me.'
✓ 'But I like all of my teachers, whoever taught me.'
'Tissue' is a wrong word choice (homophone error); should be 'teachers'. Plural 'teachers' matches 'all of'.'
× 'Oh, this question is also quite interesting.'
✓ 'Oh, this question is also quite interesting.'
'This sentence is acceptable as is; no correction needed.'
× 'I absolutely not want to be a teacher that's not going to be on my dream job ever because I feel like I'm not.'
✓ 'I absolutely do not want to be a teacher; that is not going to be my dream job because I don't feel suited to it.'
'Do not' is required for negation with 'want'. The original has double negatives and awkward clauses. Use 'do not want' and rephrase after semicolon to clarify reason.'
× 'Yeah, I have a capable, a good capable to tease or, you know, lead some student to give them a.'
✓ 'I don't have the ability or skill to teach or lead students.'
Original contains word choice errors ('capable' used as a noun), repetition, and incomplete ending. Recast the idea using correct noun phrase 'ability or skill' and correct verb 'teach'.'
× 'Yeah, she's my senior projects teacher that she helped me guide a lot of knowledge when I have to do my senior project.'
✓ 'Yes, she was my senior project teacher and she helped guide me and taught me a lot when I did my senior project.'
'That she' is redundant; tense should be past ('was', 'did') to match completed action. 'Guide a lot of knowledge' is unnatural; use 'helped guide me and taught me a lot.'
× 'She touched me a lot and guide me a lot of things when I struck on my doing project.'
✓ 'She influenced me a lot and guided me through many things when I struggled with my project.'
Tense and verb forms wrong: use past tense 'influenced'/'guided' and correct verb 'struggled' instead of 'struck on'. Also 'doing project' should be 'my project'.'
× 'Yeah, thank you to her for the reasons why I success my project.'
✓ 'Yes, I am grateful to her because she helped me succeed in my project.'
'Thank you to her' is unnatural; use 'I am grateful to her'. 'Success' is a noun; need verb 'succeed' and preposition 'in'.'
× 'Oh no, that was a long time ago.'
✓ 'Oh no, that was a long time ago.'
'This sentence is correct; no article change needed.'
× 'So I, I, I don't have in touch of any teacher in my primary school, but it would be great if I go back to my primary school and say hi to Tom T-shirt that that they ever taught me back then when I was a kid.'
✓ 'So I am not in touch with any teachers from my primary school, but it would be great if I could go back and say hi to the teachers who taught me when I was a kid.'
Idiomatic expression is 'in touch with', not 'have in touch of'. Remove repetition and correct tense/modal 'could go back'. 'Tom T-shirt' is likely a misheard name; replace with 'the teachers who taught me'.'
× 'Umm I can not answer this question because I don't have my favorite teacher but if you say it in general way, I would love to say that I love being the teacher.'
✓ 'Um, I cannot answer this question because I don't have a favorite teacher, but speaking in general, I would say that I appreciate teachers.'
'Cannot' is one word. 'My favorite teacher' should be 'a favorite teacher'. 'In general way' should be 'speaking in general'. 'I love being the teacher' is unclear; likely intended appreciation for teachers.'
× 'Having guideline to make me understand what the topic of the lessons or lecture is about.'
✓ 'Having guidance helped me understand what the lesson or lecture topics are about.'
Use 'guidance' (noun) instead of 'guideline' and correct preposition/verb structure 'helped me understand'. Ensure plural agreement 'topics are'.'
× 'Absolutely winning the difficult lesson such as the chemistry.'
✓ 'This helped me to overcome difficult subjects, such as chemistry.'
'Absolutely winning' is incorrect collocation; use 'helped me to overcome' or 'made difficult subjects easier'. 'Chemistry' as example should be 'subjects such as chemistry.' '
× 'Oh, yeah, I think about it.'
✓ 'Oh, yeah, I have thought about it.'
Tense adjustment: 'think about it' present progressive is odd here; 'have thought about it' indicates consideration in past leading to current opinion.'
× 'I do like my primary school tissue more than high school tissue because, yeah, they are very kind.'
✓ 'I do like my primary school teachers more than my high school teachers because they were very kind.'
Replace 'tissue' with 'teachers'. Use plural 'teachers' and adjust tense to past if referring to past kindness; ensure possessive 'my high school teachers.'
× 'And it was a long time ago. I still get, you know, not that good, not that glorious.'
✓ 'It was a long time ago, but I still remember them fondly.'
Original fragmented and unclear; recast to express intended meaning succinctly and grammatically.'
× 'How to say that? I'm still thinking about them.'
✓ 'How can I say that? I'm still thinking about them.'
Add auxiliary 'can' to form question and make phrase natural.'
× 'I know one of them is named Tisha **** and miss her so much.'
✓ 'One of them was named Tisha, and I miss her so much.'
Consistency of tense: use past 'was named' if referring to past teachers, and include subject 'I' before 'miss'.