Teachers— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make the response more natural and grammatically correct, give a clear topic sentence then one specific supporting detail, and avoid minor errors. Use linking words (e.g., because, so) and correct verb forms and plurals.

Ví dụ: Yes — I had a favorite teacher in high school. She often complimented my handwriting, saying it was very neat and attractive, and because of her praise I practiced writing more and became more confident in my work.

Gợi ý: Be concise and direct with a clear topic sentence. Fix tense and phrasing errors, and add a concrete reason or condition using linking words (e.g., although, if). Keep to 2–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: I might like to become a teacher in the future, although right now I work as a nurse. If I had the chance to study education again, I would train to teach because I enjoy helping others learn.

Gợi ý: Answer clearly with correct grammar and avoid vague or unfinished thoughts. Use specific details about what you remember and correct subject-verb agreement. Use linking words (for example, because, and) to add one clear reason or memory.

Ví dụ: Yes, I still remember a high school teacher who always valued my efforts and praised my handwriting. Because she encouraged me, I felt more motivated in class and she inspired many students with her patience.

Gợi ý: Be natural and correct small errors (use social media name correctly and clearer phrasing). Provide one specific example and use linking words to connect ideas (e.g., although, but).

Ví dụ: Not really — I don’t keep regular contact with them. Occasionally I meet a former teacher when I visit my hometown, and sometimes they comment on my posts on Facebook, but we do not communicate closely.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear topic sentence and then give a concise specific effect with correct grammar and consistent tense. Use linking words (because, so) and avoid repetition.

Ví dụ: She helped me build confidence. Because she frequently praised my handwriting, I became more confident in my abilities and practised writing more, which improved my skills.

× Back in high school, my teacher always compliment my handwriting, especially how beautiful it was.

✓ Back in high school, my teacher always complimented my handwriting, especially how beautiful it was.

The verb 'compliment' should be in the past tense 'complimented' to agree with the past time reference 'Back in high school'. Use past tense for actions that happened in the past. Suggestion: Use 'complimented' when describing repeated actions in the past (e.g., 'She complimented my handwriting').

× I was inspired to do good writing skills because of her.

✓ I was inspired to improve my writing skills because of her.

The phrase 'do good writing skills' is ungrammatical. Use 'improve' as the correct verb and 'writing skills' as the noun. 'Improve my writing skills' correctly expresses becoming better at writing. Suggestion: Use 'improve' or 'develop' plus the noun phrase 'my writing skills'.

× I hope so, but now I am currently working as a nurse.

✓ I hope so, but now I am working as a nurse.

The adverb 'currently' is redundant with 'now'. While not strictly ungrammatical, it is better to avoid redundancy. The present continuous 'am working' is correct for current employment. Suggestion: Use either 'now' or 'currently', not both.

× That is my job to be in this profession.

✓ That is my job; I work in this profession.

The original sentence has awkward structure. 'That is my job to be in this profession' is incorrect. A clearer expression is 'That is my job' or 'I work in this profession'. Use a semicolon or separate sentences to connect related ideas. Suggestion: Say 'That is my job' or 'I work in this profession'.

× But if I have given opportunity to study again, it is also my dream to become a teacher.

✓ But if I am given the opportunity to study again, it would also be my dream to become a teacher.

The passive construction requires 'am given' (present passive) not 'have given'. Also 'the opportunity' needs the article 'the'. To match the hypothetical meaning, 'would also be my dream' is more natural. Suggestion: Use 'if I am given the opportunity' for passive and 'would' for hypothetical results.

× Yes, I do have a teacher. I remember them especially in my high school teacher who always value and compliment me.

✓ Yes, I do have a teacher. I especially remember my high school teacher who always valued and complimented me.

Pronoun 'them' is incorrect when referring to a singular teacher; use a noun phrase 'my high school teacher' or 'her'. Verb forms 'value' and 'compliment' should be past tense 'valued' and 'complimented' to match past reference. Also word order improved by placing 'especially' earlier. Suggestion: Use consistent singular references and past tense for past events.

× I hope that she will probably need to do good things, especially teaching, to inspire a lot of.

✓ I hope that she will continue to do good things, especially teaching, to inspire many people.

The original sentence is unclear and incomplete ('inspire a lot of' is unfinished). 'Will probably need to' is incorrect for expressing hope about future actions. Use 'will continue to do' or 'will keep doing', and complete the object with 'many people'. Suggestion: Use a clear verb phrase like 'continue to do' and specify the object 'many people'.

× Not really, but sometimes I do encounter them physically if I go home.

✓ Not really, but sometimes I encounter them in person when I go home.

'Encounter them physically' is unnatural; 'in person' is the correct idiom. Use 'when I go home' rather than 'if' to indicate a recurring situation. Also 'do' is unnecessary here. Suggestion: Use 'encounter them in person when I go home'.

× Sometimes in Facebook they comment on my post, but not so deeply because we really see each other now.

✓ Sometimes on Facebook they comment on my posts, but not deeply because we do not really see each other now.

Use the preposition 'on' with Facebook, and plural 'posts' fits general statements. 'Not so deeply' is awkward; 'not deeply' is better. 'We really see each other now' meaning is negative, so use 'do not really see each other now'. Suggestion: Say 'on Facebook' and 'posts', and make the negative explicit if intended.

× In a way that it gives me more confidence and self esteem.

✓ In a way that it gave me more confidence and self-esteem.

The context refers to a past teacher, so past tense 'gave' is appropriate. Also hyphenate 'self-esteem'. Suggestion: Use past tense when describing effects that occurred in the past.

× She always compliment my handwriting and because of that I gained more self-confidence and inspires me to do well on writing.

✓ She always complimented my handwriting, and because of that I gained more self-confidence and was inspired to write well.

'She always compliment' should be past tense 'complimented'. 'Inspires me' conflicts with the past context; use 'was inspired'. 'Do well on writing' is awkward; 'write well' is more natural. Suggestion: Use past tense consistently for past events and prefer 'was inspired to write well'.