Tidiness— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答自然且直接，但可以更简洁并加入一两句具体例子来支持观点。注意避免重复表达（如 “I'm the kind of person who likes to keep things tidy” 与前句重复），并用连接词让句子更流畅。建议保持不超过5句。

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I prefer a tidy environment because it helps me concentrate. For example, I always organize my desk supplies into trays and put away my laptop after work so I can relax without distractions.

Gợi ý: 内容清楚并给出原因，但有小错误（重复单词“were were”）和表达可以更自然。可以用更简练的句子并补充一两个具体细节来增强说服力。

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. My parents were strict and made us tidy our rooms every evening, so I learned to put toys and clothes away. As a result, keeping things neat became a habit for me.

Gợi ý: 回答包含行动步骤，但句子不完整且有语法与连贯性问题（例如句尾不完整“can relieve”）。应该把句子说完整，用连接词并提供更具体细节，如整理频率或使用的收纳方法。

Ví dụ: I usually tidy my desk right after studying: I put books back on the shelf, discard scrap paper, and sort stationery into drawers. I also spend five minutes each evening wiping the surface so the space feels fresh.

Gợi ý: 答案观点明确并给出多重理由，但可更自然地组织并用连接词衔接理由，避免笼统表述（如“self improvement”可具体化）。可以加入一两个具体例子说明如何有益于健康和自我提升。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think so. Being tidy helps me concentrate and reduces stress because I waste less time searching for things. It also supports better hygiene—clean surfaces mean fewer germs—and encourages discipline, which improves my productivity.

× My parents were were very strict with us and always required us to tidy up our room every day.

✓ My parents were very strict with us and always required us to tidy up our rooms every day.

句中有两个问题：1) 重复了“were were”，属于笔误，应删除重复词；2) 与“us”（复数）对应，名词“room”通常用复数形式“rooms”，因为每个孩子通常都有自己的房间，或表述为“our room”但此处更自然为“our rooms”。建议修改为“were very strict”并使用“rooms”。

× Now As for me, I usually tidy up my desk after I finish my study and then I put my books on the shelf and throw away some used paper. A tidy space can relieve.

✓ As for me, I usually tidy up my desk after I finish studying, then I put my books on the shelf and throw away some used papers. A tidy space can help relieve stress.

该句存在结构和用词问题：1) “Now As for me”中“Now”与“As for me”重复且首字母大小写不当，应选其一；2) “finish my study”不太地道，习惯用法是“finish studying”或“finish my studies”；3) “some used paper”应使用复数“used papers”或“some used pieces of paper”；4) 最后一句“A tidy space can relieve.”不完整，缺少宾语，需补足为“A tidy space can help relieve stress”。建议按上述修改，使表达完整自然。

× Yes, of course being tidy can help me stay focused and relieve my stress.

✓ Yes, of course, being tidy can help me stay focused and relieve my stress.

句子在口语书写中缺少逗号来分隔插入语“of course”，虽然不是严格的语法错误，但在书面语中应加逗号以提高可读性，符合英文标点习惯。建议在“of course”前后加逗号。

× What's more, it is also beneficial to our health and self improvement.

✓ What's more, it is also beneficial to our health and self-improvement.

“self improvement” 作复合名词时应用连字符“self-improvement”。另外也可改为“personal development”。建议使用“self-improvement”并在两部分之间加连字符以符合书写规范。