Tidiness— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant and gives reasons and an example, but it has grammatical errors and is slightly redundant. Make one clear topic sentence, correct grammar (e.g. "Having everything organized helps me stay calm and saves time"), and avoid repeating the same idea twice. Use a linking word to connect the reason and the example (e.g. "for instance"). Keep it within 2–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I prefer to keep things tidy because it helps me find what I need quickly and reduces stress. For instance, when I'm preparing for work or an exam, an organized desk lets me save time and focus better.

Gợi ý: Good clear answer with a past habit and an example. Improve by using a concise topic sentence (e.g. "Yes, I did") and linking the teaching to the habit with a brief consequence. Correct minor phrasing ("bedtime" as one word) and avoid repeating "tidy" too often by using synonyms.

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. My mother taught me to put my things away every day, so I developed the habit of tidying my room before bedtime. As a result, my space was usually neat and easy to keep clean.

Gợi ý: Your answer explains a practical routine, but there are grammatical errors and a small word-order issue. Use a clear topic sentence ("I keep my study space tidy by..."), correct plural/singular agreement ("these habits help"), and fix the phrase "using and tools" to "using tools or study materials." Add one linking word to show result.

Ví dụ: I keep my study space tidy by putting tools and study materials back in their proper places as soon as I finish using them. Because of this routine, my desk stays organized and I can find things quickly when I need them.

Gợi ý: Solid answer with reasons and an example. Improve by starting with a direct topic sentence ("Yes, I do"), using consistent grammar ("reduces stress"), and adding a linking word to connect cause and effect ("therefore"). You could briefly expand with a specific result or comparison to strengthen the point.

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. Being tidy reflects good habits and helps people stay organized, so they waste less time. For example, a tidy workspace makes it easier to find items quickly and therefore reduces stress.

× Having everything organized to help me stay calm and saves time.

✓ Having everything organized helps me stay calm and saves time.

This sentence mixes two forms: an infinitive phrase 'to help me stay calm' followed by a finite verb 'saves'. Replace the infinitive phrase with a finite clause 'helps me stay calm' so both verbs are parallel and the sentence is complete. Suggestion: use parallel structure with two finite verbs ('helps' and 'saves').

× For example, she made me tidy up before bed time.

✓ For example, she made me tidy up before bedtime.

The phrase 'bed time' should be written as the single word 'bedtime'. No definite article is needed. Suggestion: use the correct compound noun 'bedtime'.

× After I finish using and tools or study materials, I always put them back in their proper place.

✓ After I finish using tools or study materials, I always put them back in their proper places.

The original has an extra 'and' creating ungrammatical structure and uses singular 'place' while referring to multiple items. Remove the stray 'and' and use the plural 'places' because different items may belong in different locations. Suggestion: proofread for stray words and ensure noun number matches context.

× These habits helps me keep my desk tidy and make it easier to find things when I need them.

✓ These habits help me keep my desk tidy and make it easier to find things when I need them.

The subject 'These habits' is plural, so the verb should be 'help' not 'helps'. The coordinated verbs 'help' and 'make' correctly follow the plural subject. Suggestion: ensure verbs agree in number with their subjects.

× Yes, I think it is important to be tidy because it reflects a person's habits and helps them stay organized.

✓ Yes, I think it is important to be tidy because it reflects a person's habits and helps them stay organized.

No grammatical correction needed; sentence is already correct in present tense and pronoun usage. Included here for completeness: confirm verb tenses and pronoun agreement are appropriate.