Tidiness— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Improve grammar and word choice, make sentences more natural and concise, and correct specific vocabulary (e.g., 'coffin' -> 'closet' or 'wardrobe'). Use linking words briefly and keep within 3–4 sentences. Also avoid repetition and ensure subject-verb agreement.

Ví dụ: Yes, I like to keep things tidy because it helps me find items quickly and makes me feel calm. For example, I always clean my desk after work and put my clothes back in the closet. I do this almost every day so my space stays organized.

Gợi ý: Correct past-tense forms and verbs, and clarify meaning (e.g., 'after my mom teach me' should be 'until my mom taught me'). Remove unclear phrases like 'after paying'. Keep answer focused: topic sentence + brief supporting detail using a linking word.

Ví dụ: No, I wasn't very tidy as a child. However, my mother taught me to be more organized, so she made me put my toys away and helped me create a simple homework routine. Over time I became neater.

Gợi ý: Use consistent tense and complete sentences; avoid repetition and finish unfinished phrases. Provide specific methods and use linking words for coherence. Correct grammar (e.g., 'It make me' -> 'It makes me') and finish the final thought.

Ví dụ: I usually tidy my desk before I start working because it helps me relax and focus. For example, I put away loose papers, arrange textbooks neatly, and keep only the materials I need on the desk. This routine improves my concentration.

Gợi ý: Replace incorrect phrases ('release destruction') with intended ideas (e.g., 'reduce distractions'). Be precise and concise, and add a linking word to connect reason and example. Use a variety of vocabulary like 'concentrate', 'reduce distractions', 'efficient'.

Ví dụ: Yes, I definitely think being tidy is necessary because it helps people concentrate and reduces distractions. For example, when my desk is organized I can find important papers quickly and complete tasks more efficiently.

× Yes, I do like keep things tidy because I can find things quickly and then it can make me calm.

✓ Yes, I do like keeping things tidy because I can find things quickly and it makes me feel calm.

The verb 'like' when followed by another verb in this context should use the -ing form ('keeping'). Also 'it can make me calm' is awkward; use 'it makes me feel calm' to match subject-verb agreement and natural phrasing. Suggestion: use 'like + -ing' for general preferences and use 'it makes me feel calm' for natural expression.

× I always clean my desk after work and put back my clothes in the coffin and I do this almost every day.

✓ I always clean my desk after work and put my clothes back in the wardrobe, and I do this almost every day.

The phrase 'put back my clothes in the coffin' uses the wrong noun; 'coffin' is incorrect for clothing storage. Use 'wardrobe' or 'closet'. Also word order 'put my clothes back' is more natural. Suggestion: use appropriate noun for storage and typical verb-object order 'put X back'.

× No, I wasn't very tidy as a kid. I used to leave my toys and homework all over the floor after my mom teach me to be more organized.

✓ No, I wasn't very tidy as a kid. I used to leave my toys and homework all over the floor before my mom taught me to be more organized.

The clause refers to a past action by the mother, so 'teach' must be in the past tense 'taught'. Also 'after' was incorrect logically because leaving things happened before the mother taught; 'before' fits better. Suggestion: match tense to past events and use logical time connectors ('before'/'after') correctly.

× She made me put my toys away after paying and help me make a simple routine for doing homework.

✓ She made me put my toys away, help me pay attention to tidiness, and helped me make a simple routine for doing homework.

The original sentence is unclear: 'after paying' is inappropriate here. Also mixed verb forms ('made me put' then 'help me') need parallel structure and correct past tense 'helped'. Clarify intent: mother enforced tidiness and assisted with a routine. Suggestion: keep verbs parallel and consistent in tense; clarify ambiguous phrases.

× When I was a university student I used to clean up my desk and then start working. It make me feel more relaxed and calm down and focus on studying.

✓ When I was a university student I used to clean up my desk and then start working. It made me feel more relaxed, helped me calm down, and helped me focus on studying.

Talking about past habits requires past tense 'made' not 'make'. Also list items should use parallel verb forms ('helped me calm down', 'helped me focus'). Suggestion: use past tense for past routines and keep parallel structure.

× And when I work I usually clean my desk it make me more.

✓ And when I work I usually clean my desk because it helps me concentrate.

The original sentence is incomplete and ungrammatical ('it make me more' is vague and wrong tense). Provide a clear result clause and correct subject-verb agreement: 'it helps me'. Suggestion: state the intended effect clearly ('helps me concentrate'/'helps me be productive') and ensure subject-verb agreement.

× Yes, I definitely think it is necessary to be tidy because a tidy environment helps people concentrate and release destruction.

✓ Yes, I definitely think it is necessary to be tidy because a tidy environment helps people concentrate and reduce distractions.

The phrase 'release destruction' is incorrect and likely a wrong word choice. The intended meaning is 'reduce distractions'. Use 'reduce' (verb) and 'distractions' (noun). Suggestion: choose appropriate collocations ('reduce distractions' or 'avoid distractions').

× For example, when my desk is organized, I can find important papers quickly and finish tasks more effectively.

✓ For example, when my desk is organized, I can find important papers quickly and finish tasks more effectively.

This sentence is correct and needs no change. It correctly uses 'is' to describe the state and appropriate verb forms. Suggestion: continue using this clear structure to describe benefits.