Tidiness— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise, correct grammar, and organize answer with a clear topic sentence plus one or two specific supporting details. Use linking words (for example, ‘because’ and ‘for example’) and correct noun forms (things → things/rooms). Avoid redundancy and keep to 2–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I like to keep things tidy because it helps me stay focused and reduce stress. For example, I organize my office desk every morning and put documents in labeled folders so I can find them quickly.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and explain briefly with clear reasons in past tense. Fix grammar (use ‘didn’t’ and past simple) and give a specific example from childhood and a contrast with now using linking words like ‘but’ and ‘now’. Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: No, I didn’t keep my room tidy as a child because I liked playing and often left toys on the floor. But now I tidy my room every week and put my belongings in boxes so it stays organised.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear topic sentence outlining your method, then give specific steps and use linking words (for example, ‘first’, ‘then’, ‘after that’). Use correct verb forms and concise phrasing. Limit to 2–4 sentences and avoid unclear phrases.

Ví dụ: I keep my study space tidy by following a simple routine: first I clear my desk of unrelated items, then I file paperwork into folders, and finally I set out only the materials I need for that study session. This helps me work more efficiently.

Gợi ý: Give a direct opinion with a clear reason and a short example or consequence. Use correct grammar and more natural phrasing (e.g. ‘necessary to be tidy’ → ‘being tidy is necessary’). Keep it to 2–3 sentences and avoid absolute claims without support.

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe being tidy is necessary because it improves productivity and reduces stress. For example, students who keep their notes organised are less likely to miss deadlines and perform better in exams.

× Yes, of course I like to keep thing tidy because it is very important part of my life.

✓ Yes, of course I like to keep things tidy because it is a very important part of my life.

The noun 'thing' should be plural 'things' to match general reference to multiple items. Also add the article 'a' before 'very important part' because singular countable nouns require an article. Suggestion: use 'things' for general items and include 'a' before 'very important part'. ID:1

× I like to keep things tidy in my office, like to manage my office work at proper time, like to room.

✓ I like to keep things tidy in my office, manage my office work at the proper time, and tidy my room.

Pronoun and phrase structure are unclear. 'Like to' was repeated ungrammatically and 'like to room' is incorrect. Use parallel verbs ('keep', 'manage', 'tidy') and add the definite article 'the' for 'proper time'. Also replace the vague phrase with 'tidy my room'. ID:12

× I like want to learn to keep my room thing tidy.

✓ I want to learn to keep my room tidy.

The phrase 'I like want' is ungrammatical; choose one verb ('I want' or 'I would like'). 'Room thing' is incorrect; use 'room' or 'room things' depending on meaning. Suggestion: 'I want to learn to keep my room tidy.' ID:12

× No, I did not use to keep my room tidy as a child because at that time I don't have any information of them or at that time I mostly damage that thing.

✓ No, I did not use to keep my room tidy as a child because at that time I did not have any information about it, and I often damaged things.

Mixing past reference with present 'don't have' is incorrect; align tense to past: 'did not have'. 'Information of them' is unidiomatic; use 'information about it' or 'about that'. 'Mostly damage that thing' should be 'often damaged things' to express habitual past action. Use past tense for consistency. ID:4

× But now when I am the adult I like to keep things tidy mostly of my room things.

✓ But now that I am an adult, I like to keep my room items mostly tidy.

Use 'that' for conjunction 'now that I am an adult'. 'The adult' is wrong; use 'an adult'. 'Things tidy mostly of my room things' is awkward; reorder to 'keep my room items mostly tidy' or 'keep most of my room tidy'. Improve word order and article use. ID:12

× I keep my work or study space study by doing the my all thing on proper place while I studying and I'm mostly keep my office things tidy or my work thing tidy by put all my paperwork on perfect place and then I start my work.

✓ I keep my work or study space tidy by putting all my things in the proper place while I study, and I usually keep my office items tidy by putting my paperwork in the right place before I start work.

Original sentence has multiple structure issues: 'study by doing the my all thing' is ungrammatical, tense inconsistency 'while I studying' should be 'while I study', and verb forms like 'by put' must be gerund: 'by putting'. Fix word order, use 'usually' instead of 'mostly' for frequency, and ensure consistent present simple tense for habitual actions. ID:26

× It is it took very beautiful when I.

✓ It looks very nice when I do.

Sentence is fragmented and ungrammatical. 'It is it took very beautiful when I' has incorrect verb forms and missing object. Likely intended meaning: 'It looks very nice when I do.' Use 'looks' for appearance and 'do' to complete the clause, or specify action: 'It looks very nice when I finish.' ID:26

× Yes, I think it is necessary to be tidy of everything because it is important aspect of personal life.

✓ Yes, I think it is necessary to be tidy about everything because it is an important aspect of personal life.

Use 'about' or 'with' instead of 'of' after 'tidy' when indicating scope: 'tidy about everything'. Also 'important aspect' needs the indefinite article 'an'. ID:11

× If it did not keep anything tidy, it is the main cause of failure of that person.

✓ If a person does not keep anything tidy, it is a main cause of that person's failure.

Original mixes conditional forms and unclear subjects. Use 'If a person does not keep anything tidy' for general conditional (present simple). 'It is a main cause of that person's failure' clarifies subject and possessive. Alternatively use 'If they do not keep things tidy, it can cause failure.' Ensure consistent tense and correct possessive form. ID:12