Tidiness— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be clearer and more natural: start with a direct topic sentence, correct grammar, avoid unclear phrases like "we can spend at the end of the each day." Use one or two supporting details and a linking word. Also keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I like to keep things tidy because I am an organised person and it helps me relax. For example, I clear my workspace every evening so I can start the next day focused.

Gợi ý: Give a clear past-topic sentence and concise supporting details. Fix tense and word order ("used to" for past habit) and avoid redundant phrases. Use linking words to connect reason and example.

Ví dụ: Yes, I used to keep my room tidy when I was a child. My parents encouraged me to clean up, and I also liked showing my neat room to friends, which motivated me to keep it clean.

Gợi ý: Be precise and correct contradictions (you wrote "cannot study if it is not cluttered" — likely meant "if it is cluttered"). Use linking words and two specific actions. Avoid run-on sentences by splitting sentences or using connectors.

Ví dụ: I keep my study space tidy by putting items back in their place after use and wiping my desk regularly. As a result, I can concentrate better and avoid distractions.

Gợi ý: Start with a direct opinion sentence, then give clear reasons. Avoid incorrect word choices like "declare my room" — use "tidy" or "clean". Use linking words (for example, because, so) appropriately and keep answers concise.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think being tidy is important because it helps me find things quickly and reduces stress. For example, when my room is clean I feel more productive and ready to start the day.

× Yes I do. I like to keep things tidy because I'm very organized and I always do the things we can spend at the end of the each day.

✓ Yes, I do. I like to keep things tidy because I'm very organized and I always do the things we can do at the end of each day.

The sentence contains incorrect verb usage and an extra article. 'do the things we can spend' is ungrammatical; likely intended 'do the things we can do' or 'finish the things we can do'. Also 'the each day' uses an unnecessary definite article before 'each'; correct form is 'each day'. Suggestion: use 'do' for general present actions and remove 'the' before 'each'.

× Absolutely, I was always keeping my room tidy as a child because my parents always encouraged me to do this and I like to show my room to my friends how is it is tidy and clean.

✓ Absolutely, I always kept my room tidy as a child because my parents encouraged me to do so, and I liked to show my room to my friends to demonstrate how tidy and clean it was.

Multiple issues: 'was always keeping' is an awkward past continuous; habit in the past should use simple past 'always kept' (habitual past). 'Encouraged me to do this' is acceptable but 'do so' is more natural. 'I like to show... how is it is tidy and clean' has word order and tense problems; indirect questions must follow statement order and past reference requires past tense 'it was'. Suggestion: use simple past for past habits and proper clause order 'how tidy and clean it was'.

× I always keep my work and study space tidy, I put my things back to their own place after using them and I always wipe down my desk because I cannot study if it is not cluttered.

✓ I always keep my work and study space tidy: I put my things back in their places after using them, and I always wipe down my desk because I cannot study if it is cluttered.

Several preposition and meaning errors: 'put my things back to their own place' should be 'put my things back in their places' (use 'in' and plural 'places'). The clause 'I cannot study if it is not cluttered' is opposite of intended meaning; should be 'cannot study if it is cluttered'. Also replace comma splice with appropriate punctuation. Suggestion: use correct preposition 'in', pluralize 'places' when items have multiple locations, and ensure logical negation for 'cluttered'.

× I think yes, it is very necessary to be tidy because for example, I cannot do anything if I don't declare my room. So I feel more productive and I can start my day more energized.

✓ I think so; it is very important to be tidy because, for example, I cannot do anything if I don't clear my room. I feel more productive and can start my day more energized.

Word choice and verb issues: 'I think yes' is better as 'I think so'. 'Necessary to be tidy' is acceptable but 'important' is more natural. 'Don't declare my room' is incorrect collocation; use 'clear my room' or 'tidy my room'. Also avoid redundant 'I' in second clause and keep verbs consistent: 'can start my day more energized'. Suggestion: use appropriate collocations ('clear' or 'tidy') and concise phrasing.