Tidiness— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答比较直接，但有些冗长和重复。建议用更自然简洁的表达，先给主题句，然后用一到两句具体理由，并用连接词使逻辑更清晰。可改进词汇多样性，避免重复“it can”。

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. Keeping things tidy makes daily life more orderly, and it also saves time because I don’t have to look for things. For example, when my desk is organized I can start work immediately.

Gợi ý: 回答有诚实的内容但表达不够自然且有语法问题（时态和重复）。建议先用一句清晰的主题句（用过去时），然后用一两句具体例子或原因，避免口语化的填充词。

Ví dụ: No, I didn’t. My room was usually very messy when I was a child because I preferred playing to tidying up. For instance, toys and clothes were often scattered on the floor.

Gợi ý: 回答包含具体方法，但有犹豫语气（umm）和小语法问题。建议去掉犹豫词，用更流畅的句子并补充说明效果或例子以显得更充分。

Ví dụ: I use storage boxes of different sizes and a small shelf on my desk to keep things organized. This way, stationery and documents have their own place and my workspace stays clutter-free.

Gợi ý: 回答立场明确但第一句有重复且逻辑不够紧密。建议用一到两句说明原因并加上具体结果或例子，使用更自然的连接词如“because”或“so”。

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe tidiness is important because it creates a good impression and makes daily tasks easier. For example, guests feel comfortable in a neat room, and I can quickly locate items when studying.

× Yes, I think it is very necessary to keep things tidy in your life because it can make your life more stable and it can also save a lot of time for you.

✓ Yes, I think it is very necessary to keep things tidy in your life because it can make your life more stable and can also save you a lot of time.

句子主要是一般现在时，原句中“it can also save a lot of time for you”在表达上有冗余的介词短语“for you”，更自然的表达是“save you time/or save you a lot of time”。同时去掉重复的“it”连接从句，改为并列谓语“can also save you...”，使句子更简洁流畅。建议避免多余的介词，保持主语和谓语一致。

× Actually, I don't think so. And in my childhood I think my room is such a mess.

✓ Actually, I didn't think so. And in my childhood my room was such a mess.

问句是过去习惯（Did you use to...），回答应使用过去时。原句使用现在时（don't think; is），与时间状语“in my childhood”不一致。将动词改为过去时（didn't think; was）以保持时态一致。建议注意根据时间状语选择正确时态。

× Although it is a bad habit, I just like to make my room untidy, such a disaster.

✓ Although it was a bad habit, I just liked to make my room untidy — it was such a disaster.

这仍然描述过去的习惯，应使用过去时（was, liked）。另外“such a disaster”单独放置不完整，改为“It was such a disaster”使句子完整自然。建议用完整句子表达感叹。

× Well, I'd like to buy every size of the box I need to tidy my work or study space, and especially in the study space I'd like to, umm, put a small shelf on the table.

✓ Well, I'd like to buy boxes of every size that I need to tidy my work or study space, and especially in the study space I'd like to put a small shelf on the table.

原句中“buy every size of the box”结构不自然，应改为“buy boxes of every size”或“buy every size of box”。另外去掉口语填充词“umm”。建议使用更自然的名词短语排列并避免口头语。

× Yes, of course it is necessary to be tidy, because it is. It may be a good impression for other people who visit your home or your study place and you can find things in these place very easily.

✓ Yes, of course it is necessary to be tidy, because it is. It may create a good impression on other people who visit your home or your study place, and you can find things in these places very easily.

原句中“be a good impression for other people”用词不当，应使用动词短语“create a good impression on somebody”。“in these place”中“place”应为复数“places”。因此修正为“create a good impression on... ”并将“place”改为复数。建议注意固定搭配（create an impression on）和名词单复数一致。