Tidiness— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more fluent and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Correct grammar (e.g., “I prefer to keep my room tidy”) and avoid repetitions. Aim for 2–3 sentences, use linking words like “because” or “so that,” and give a brief specific example of how tidiness helps concentration.

Ví dụ: Yes, I prefer to keep my room tidy because a neat environment helps me concentrate better. For example, when my desk is organized, I can find my notes quickly and focus on studying without distractions.

Gợi ý: Give a clear direct response then explain with a concise supporting detail. Use correct tense and simpler phrasing: “I didn’t usually” or “Not really.” Avoid filler words and fix word order. Include a brief example of your parents’ reminders or how your habits changed.

Ví dụ: Not really. When I was a child, my parents often asked me to clean my room, but I usually ignored them. As I grew older, I started tidying more because I realized it made studying easier.

Gợi ý: Provide a clear topic sentence describing your routine, then give 1–2 specific actions using linking words. Remove hesitations and repetitions, use correct verb forms (e.g., “I try to keep it tidy” and “before I start working, I organize my desk”), and keep it within 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: I try to keep my study space tidy by organizing my desk before I start working. For example, I put away unnecessary items, arrange my books and stationery, and keep only what I need for that session.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and concisely with a reason and avoid repetition. Use correct comparative forms (e.g., “helps me concentrate better and think more clearly”). Offer a brief example or result to support your opinion and use linking words like “because” or “so.”

Ví dụ: Definitely. Being tidy is important because it helps me concentrate better and think more clearly. For instance, when my room is organized I waste less time looking for things and can study more efficiently.

× I prefer keep.

✓ I prefer keeping.

The verb 'prefer' is commonly followed by a gerund (-ing form) when discussing general preferences. Use 'keeping' after 'prefer' rather than the base form 'keep'. Suggestion: say 'I prefer keeping' or 'I prefer to keep' (both are acceptable, but gerund is natural here).

× I prefer keeping my room tidy because tidy room is quite important in our life.

✓ I prefer keeping my room tidy because a tidy room is quite important in our lives.

'Tidy room' needs the article 'a' and 'in our life' should be plural 'in our lives' to refer generally to people's lives. Also word order for 'tidy room' is more natural as 'a tidy room'. Suggestion: use 'a tidy room is quite important in our lives'. Use plural 'lives' for general statements.

× When I. When I something concentrate.

✓ When I concentrate on something.

The original is fragmentary and the verb 'concentrate' requires the preposition 'on' when linked to an object. Rearranged to form a complete subordinate clause: 'When I concentrate on something.' Suggestion: complete the clause and include 'on' after 'concentrate'.

× When I was chapter when I was child, my parents sometimes are no always told me hey please clean, please keep your room tidy.

✓ When I was a child, my parents didn't always tell me to clean; sometimes they asked me to keep my room tidy.

Many errors: 'chapter' is incorrect word, use 'a child'. For past habitual actions, use past tense: 'didn't always tell' or 'didn't always ask'. 'Are no always told me' is ungrammatical. Also reported requests use 'tell/ask me to ...'. Suggestion: simplify: 'When I was a child, my parents didn't always tell me to clean; sometimes they asked me to keep my room tidy.'

× Umm always I try to keep tidy.

✓ I always try to keep it tidy.

Word order in English places adverbs like 'always' before the verb: 'I always try'. Also need an object 'it' to indicate what is kept tidy. Suggestion: 'I always try to keep it tidy' or 'I always try to keep my workspace tidy.'

× For example when I when I sit the sit the desk before concentrate something or work, I always organize my desk.

✓ For example, when I sit at my desk before working or concentrating, I always organize my desk.

Correct preposition is 'sit at my desk'. Use gerund 'working' or 'concentrating' for actions. Remove repeated words and reorder for clarity. Suggestion: 'when I sit at my desk before working or concentrating, I always organize my desk.'

× I think, uh, keeping, keeping tidy is quite important because it helps me more concentrate better and more clear, clearer.

✓ I think keeping things tidy is quite important because it helps me concentrate better and be clearer.

Reduce repetition and choose correct adverb 'better' to modify 'concentrate'. 'More concentrate' is ungrammatical; 'be clearer' or 'think more clearly' expresses intended meaning. Use 'things tidy' or 'my room tidy' for clarity. Suggestion: 'keeping things tidy helps me concentrate better and think more clearly.'