Tidiness— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make your response clearer and more grammatical. Start with a direct topic sentence, then add one or two specific, linked details. Use correct verb forms and prepositions, avoid redundancy, and keep to 3–4 sentences. For example, say why tidiness helps (concentration, less stress), give a precise habit (organize clothes the night before), and use linking words (because, so that).

Ví dụ: Yes, I like to keep things tidy because a neat environment helps me concentrate and reduces my stress. For example, I always organize my clothes and pack my bag the night before study or work, so I can get ready quickly in the morning. This routine helps me start the day calmly and stay focused.

Gợi ý: Improve clarity and grammar by using the past tense correctly and giving one clear reason and contrast with the present. Start with a direct topic sentence about childhood, then briefly explain how habits have changed, using linking words (but, now, because). Avoid vague or incorrect words.

Ví dụ: No, I didn’t keep my room tidy when I was a child. I was quite messy and often left toys and clothes on the floor, but my mother used to tidy it for me. Now I try to keep my room neat because I know it helps me concentrate.

Gợi ý: Give a clear, structured answer with specific actions and correct vocabulary. Begin with a topic sentence describing your routine, then list 2–3 concrete methods using linking words (for example, then, also). Use correct nouns (shelf, bin, folders) and avoid unclear phrases.

Ví dụ: I keep my study space tidy by cleaning it at the end of each day. For example, I put my books back on the shelf, recycle used papers, and store stationery in a small box. I also organize my notes in labeled folders so I can find materials quickly.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and use clearer reasons and one example. State your opinion in a topic sentence, then explain why with a specific effect (better concentration, less distraction). Use conditional correctly for comparison (if... then) and keep sentences concise.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think it is important to be tidy because a tidy room helps me concentrate and reduces distractions. For example, if my desk is messy I get distracted and waste time searching for things, but when everything is organized I can focus on my work more easily.

× I like to keep things tidy because I need environment help me concentrate and reduce my stress.

✓ I like to keep things tidy because I need an environment that helps me concentrate and reduces my stress.

Missing article before 'environment', incorrect use of nouns without connector and wrong verb forms. Use 'an environment' (article), add relative clause 'that helps' to connect environment to the action, and use 'reduces' to agree with singular subject 'environment'. Suggestion: use articles with countable nouns and link nouns to clauses with relative pronouns when describing function.

× For example, I always organize my clothes and the night before the study, so I can really quickly do in my business morning and stay focused on my work.

✓ For example, I always organize my clothes the night before studying, so I can get ready quickly in the morning and stay focused on my work.

Incorrect word order and awkward phrase choices. 'The night before studying' or 'the night before my study' is correct; use gerund 'studying' to indicate the activity. 'Get ready quickly in the morning' is the natural phrasing instead of 'really quickly do in my business morning'. Suggestion: restructure sentences into clear time phrases and use common collocations (get ready, in the morning).

× While I was chill I didn't keep my room tidy.

✓ When I was a child I didn't keep my room tidy.

Wrong word 'chill' used instead of 'child'. This is a vocabulary error causing grammatical sense issues. Use past tense 'didn't keep' is correct for habit in childhood. Suggestion: use 'when I was a child' to refer to childhood habits.

× I was quite massive and often let store around.

✓ I was quite messy and often left things around.

'Massive' is incorrect adjective here; 'messy' describes untidiness. 'Let store around' is ungrammatical; correct phrase is 'left things around' using past tense 'left'. Suggestion: choose adjectives that precisely convey meaning and use correct verb forms for past actions.

× My mother used to help me keep the some time and now the order I tried to keep my room neatly.

✓ My mother used to help me keep it tidy, and now I try to keep my room neat.

Pronoun and article misuse: 'the some time' and 'the order' are incorrect. Use pronoun 'it' to refer to the room and parallel structure: 'now I try to keep my room neat.' Use present tense 'try' for current habitual action. 'Neat' is adjective used with 'keep'. Suggestion: replace unclear noun phrases with correct pronouns and use consistent tense.

× I usually keep my study space tidy by a decorating is the end of the each day.

✓ I usually keep my study space tidy by decorating at the end of each day.

Incorrect articles and extra words: 'a decorating is the end of the each day' is ungrammatical. Use gerund 'decorating' as noun and 'at the end of each day' for time expression; omit unnecessary articles. Suggestion: use 'at the end of each day' and gerunds for routines.

× For example, I put my book back on the shift and throw away screen off by paper selfies stay clear.

✓ For example, I put my books back on the shelf and throw away paper so the surface stays clear.

Multiple word choice and preposition errors: 'book' plural likely, 'shift' should be 'shelf', 'throw away screen off by paper selfies' is confused. Use 'throw away paper' and 'surface stays clear' with correct preposition and noun forms. Suggestion: proofread for typos and use collocations: 'books on the shelf', 'throw away trash', 'surface stays clear'.

× I also use labor strong box and simple fully system for note which save my time near material.

✓ I also use a sturdy storage box and a simple filing system for my notes, which saves me time when I search for materials.

Awkward noun choices and missing articles. 'Labor strong box' and 'simple fully system' are incorrect; use 'sturdy storage box' and 'simple filing system'. Add 'a' before singular nouns and use singular verb 'saves' to agree with 'which' referring to the system. Clarify purpose: 'when I search for materials.' Suggestion: choose precise vocabulary and ensure subject-verb agreement in relative clauses.

× Yes, I think keep my room tidy is most important because it's keep it's help me to concentrate better than when I study.

✓ Yes, I think keeping my room tidy is very important because it helps me concentrate better when I study.

Verb form and subject-verb agreement errors: use gerund 'keeping' after 'think', 'it helps' not 'it's keep it's help'. 'Very important' is natural phrasing. Remove extra words and fix tense. Suggestion: use gerunds after verbs that take noun forms and ensure subject-verb agreement.

× For example if my desk was mess I go distribute but everything organized I can focus on more easily.

✓ For example, if my desk is messy I get distracted, but when everything is organized I can focus more easily.

Multiple errors: 'desk was mess' should be 'desk is messy' for general condition (present tense). 'I go distribute' is incorrect; correct is 'I get distracted'. Use 'when everything is organized' and 'focus more easily' for natural phrasing. Ensure subject-verb agreement and correct word forms. Suggestion: use present simple for general statements, correct adjective forms ('messy') and common verbs ('get distracted').