Tidiness— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be concise and grammatical. Start with a clear topic sentence that directly answers the question, then give one brief reason or example. Avoid repetition and incorrect word forms (e.g., 'room' not 'loom' or 'looms'). Use linking words like 'but' or 'however' correctly.

Ví dụ: Yes, I like things to be tidy, but I struggle to keep my bedroom organized. For example, I prefer a clean living area because it helps me relax, yet I often leave clothes on the floor after a busy day.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and provide a clear past-tense explanation. Reduce hesitation and avoid speaking fragments. Use correct tense and simple linking words like 'because' and 'so' to connect ideas. Give a specific brief example of what being messy meant.

Ví dụ: No, I wasn't tidy as a child because I preferred playing to cleaning. For instance, I often left toys and clothes on the floor, and my mother would remind me to tidy up, but I rarely did.

Gợi ý: Make your answer coherent: state one method clearly, then give a specific example. Use correct verbs and avoid contradictions (you said workplace is tidy but room has many things). Use linking words 'for example' or 'therefore' to clarify actions.

Ví dụ: At work I keep my desk tidy by storing papers in folders and clearing it at the end of each day. For example, I file emails and put documents in labelled trays so my workspace stays uncluttered.

Gợi ý: Give a clear opinion with two concise reasons, using correct nouns and verbs. Avoid repeating words and correct pronunciation errors in writing (e.g., 'room' not 'loom', 'focus' not 'focusing focus'). Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' to connect reasons and result.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think being tidy is important because you can find things quickly and it helps you concentrate. Therefore, I try to keep my study area organized so I can work more efficiently, although it can be difficult sometimes.

× Yes, I like to keep the tidy with everything, every loom, but unfortunately for my perspective for me I can't do that because I'm messy person so I couldn't do clean up my rooms but I prefer the tidy looms.

✓ Yes, I like to keep things tidy, every room, but unfortunately from my point of view I can't do that because I'm a messy person, so I can't keep my rooms clean although I prefer tidy rooms.

The sentence uses incorrect adjectives/nouns (the tidy, loom/looms) and word forms. Replace 'the tidy' with 'things tidy' and 'loom/looms' with 'room/rooms'. Use 'from my point of view' instead of 'for my perspective for me'. Use the correct article 'a messy person', and correct verb forms: 'I can't keep my rooms clean' rather than 'I couldn't do clean up my rooms'. Also use conjunctions/commas to improve clarity. Grammar problem type ID:13

× No, I didn't because as I said, I'm quite messy, uh, since I, I was child, so my room is always, was always a messy and my mom always talks me to clean up my rooms, but I don't wanna do that because I, it's very hassle for me. So my room always, uh, keep messy.

✓ No, I didn't because, as I said, I'm quite messy. Since I was a child, my room was always messy and my mother always told me to clean up my rooms, but I didn't want to do that because it was very much of a hassle for me. So my room was always messy.

Multiple tense and form errors. 'Since I was a child' sets past context, so use past 'was' and 'was always messy'. 'Mom always talks me' should be 'my mother always told me' (past reporting). 'I don't wanna' in a past narrative becomes 'I didn't want to'. 'It's very hassle' should be 'it was a hassle' or 'very much of a hassle'. Use consistent past tense when describing childhood habits. Grammar problem type ID:5

× MMM In the workplace I tend to not to blame the the stuff to the workplace. So my room is tidy and there are not a lot of stuff. But in my room there are a lot of stuff such kind of photo albums, clothes. So I usually threw it away.

✓ In the workplace I tend not to bring too many things to work. So my workspace is tidy and there are not a lot of things. But in my room there are a lot of things such as photo albums and clothes, so I usually throw them away.

Prepositions and phrases are incorrect: 'blame the the stuff to the workplace' is wrong — likely meant 'bring things to the workplace'. Use 'bring to work' or 'bring to the workplace'. Also use 'such as' for examples. 'Threw it away' mixes past with present; use 'throw them away' if habitual. Use plural pronoun 'them' to match 'things'. Grammar problem type ID:11

× Yes, I definitely think so because if tidy loom if you have the tidal room. We can find everything I want as soon as possible and I can focusing focus on my jobs in the workplace and study rooms.

✓ Yes, I definitely think so because if you have a tidy room, you can find everything as soon as possible and I can focus on my work at the workplace and in study rooms.

Wrong word forms: 'tidy loom' and 'tidal room' should be 'tidy room'. 'We can find everything I want' is awkward; change to 'you can find everything'. 'I can focusing focus' should be 'I can focus'. 'My jobs' is better as 'my work'. Correct adjective/adverb use and verb form for clarity. Grammar problem type ID:13

× So I try to keep my room steady, but it's hard for me.

✓ So I try to keep my room tidy, but it's hard for me.

Word choice error: 'steady' is not appropriate for describing cleanliness or order; use 'tidy'. Sentence structure is otherwise fine; ensure word choice matches meaning. Grammar problem type ID:26