Tidiness— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and use correct grammar and linking words. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with connectors. Avoid hesitations and repetition. Also correct verb forms (e.g., “I’m not a fan of simply putting things away”) and word choice (e.g., “find” not “fight”).

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I prefer to keep my place tidy because it makes it much easier to find things when I need them. For example, when I study I can quickly locate my books and notes, which saves time and reduces stress.

Gợi ý: Use past habits correctly and improve sentence accuracy. Begin with a clear topic sentence about past behavior, then contrast with present using linking words (e.g., “however,” “now”). Fix tense and article errors (e.g., “I used to just leave things around”). Provide a specific example to illustrate the change.

Ví dụ: When I was a child, I used to leave my things scattered and rarely tidied my room. However, as I grew older I started organizing my belongings into boxes and shelves, so now I can find things much more easily.

× Yes, personally, I really like my place to be tidy because of easy for me to find out the thing I wanted to.

✓ Yes, personally, I really like my place to be tidy because it is easier for me to find the things I want.

The sentence uses incorrect adjective/adverb forms and awkward phrasing. 'because of easy for me' is ungrammatical; use the clause 'because it is easier for me' where 'easier' is the comparative adjective describing 'it'. 'find out the thing I wanted to' is incorrect: 'find' (not 'find out') and maintain present tense 'want' to match the general statement. Also pluralize 'thing' to 'things' for naturalness. Suggestion: use 'because it is easier for me to find the things I want.'

× I'm the I'm not that fans of uh, Simply put my thing because of it's hard to fight thing when you need that thing urgent.

✓ I'm not really a fan of simply leaving my things around because it's hard to find something when you need it urgently.

Multiple errors: 'I'm the I'm not that fans' has subject/number mismatch and extra words — correct to 'I'm not really a fan'. 'Simply put my thing' should be 'simply leaving my things around' for clarity; 'thing' must be plural 'things'. 'because of it's hard to fight thing' has wrong verb 'fight' and wrong structure; use 'because it's hard to find something'. 'when you need that thing urgent' needs adverb 'urgently' and 'it' as pronoun. Suggestions: simplify the sentence, use correct verb 'find', pluralize nouns appropriately, and use adverb form for urgency.

× When I was a child I just Simply put my thing.

✓ When I was a child I just simply left my things scattered.

The original uses present/simple base verb 'put' which doesn't fit the past-time frame 'When I was a child'. Use past tense 'left'. Also 'Simply put my thing' is awkward; 'simply left my things scattered' is more natural. Ensure verbs match the past context and pluralize 'thing' to 'things'.

× That's the reason I can't find my thing easily.

✓ That's the reason I couldn't find my things easily.

Context refers to past habit, so present 'can't' should be past 'couldn't'. Also 'my thing' should be plural 'my things' to match general reference. Use past modal 'couldn't' to indicate inability in the past. Suggestion: match tense to context and pluralize nouns when referring to multiple items.

× So since I getting older I prefer to put my things nicely.

✓ So since I got older, I prefer to put my things away neatly.

'since I getting older' is ungrammatical: use past form 'since I got older' or 'as I have gotten older'. 'prefer to put my things nicely' uses 'nicely' which is vague; 'away neatly' is clearer. Also add comma after the introductory clause. Suggestion: match tense in the 'since' clause and choose clearer adverb/phrase for arranging items.