Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make tense and grammar consistent, avoid repetition, and produce a clear topic sentence with one or two specific supporting details. Use past tense for childhood and correct verbs and prepositions (e.g. 'loved going to parks', 'I lived near the Summer Palace', 'I visited three times a week'). Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. I lived near the Summer Palace in Beijing and visited it about three times a week because I enjoyed the ponds and gardens.

Gợi ý: Correct grammar (use present tense and correct prepositions), remove repetitions, and make the reason for visiting clear and concise. Use linking words if adding a reason (e.g. 'because' or 'although'). Keep answers to 2–3 sentences and include a brief reason or detail.

Ví dụ: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks. My favorite is Shakespeare Park, which I visit about four times a week because I like its walking paths and quiet atmosphere despite it being quite far from where I live.

Gợi ý: Be specific and coherent: name parks clearly, avoid fragmented sentences, and connect ideas with linking words. Give a concise reason why more parks are desirable and include one specific detail about what you enjoy (e.g. scenery, historical buildings). Limit to 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would love more parks in the city because they provide green space and places to relax. For example, I enjoy parks with historic architecture and scenic views, which make walks peaceful and interesting.

Gợi ý: Combine sentences for fluency, use accurate information and tenses, and avoid vague phrases. State why you want to visit using specific details (e.g. lakes, temples, views). Keep it to 2–3 sentences and use linking words like 'because' or 'as'.

Ví dụ: Yes, I'd love to visit Hoan Kiem Lake and West Lake in Hanoi because I've seen photos in travel books that show beautiful lakeside scenery and historic temples. I think the views and cultural sites there would be unforgettable.

× Yes, I love to go into parks as a child.

✓ Yes, I loved going to parks as a child.

The question asks about past habit ('as a child'), so the verb should be in the past tense. Use 'loved' and the gerund 'going' to describe habitual action in the past. Suggestion: use 'loved going to parks' for natural phrasing.

× During my childhood in Beijing, I live near the Summer Palace.

✓ During my childhood in Beijing, I lived near the Summer Palace.

Time phrase 'During my childhood' indicates past time, so the verb must be past tense. Change 'live' to 'lived'.

× I went there three times every week.

✓ I went there three times every week.

This sentence is already correct: it uses past simple to describe a habitual past action. No change needed.

× Yes, I still love to go into park.

✓ Yes, I still love going to parks.

'Still' indicates present habit so present tense is fine, but use the gerund 'going' for natural phrasing. Also 'park' needs an article or plural; plural 'parks' is natural when speaking generally. Suggestion: 'I still love going to parks.'

× Now my favorite park is Shakespeare's Park.

✓ Now my favorite park is Shakespeare Park.

This sentence is mostly correct grammatically; change 'Shakespeare's Park' to 'Shakespeare Park' if that is the actual name. Tense 'is' is correct for present time.

× I I go there around 4 times every week, although it's quite far from the place that I I left.

✓ I go there around four times a week, although it's quite far from the place where I live.

Remove the duplicate 'I'. Use present simple 'go' for current habitual action and write numbers in words for formality ('four'). 'Every week' is better as 'a week'. The clause 'the place that I left' is incorrect: use 'the place where I live' to indicate current residence. If intended past, use 'lived' but context indicates present.

× The Deal, the original park and the Winter Home original park are all places of great interest to me.

✓ The Deal, the Original Park and the Winter Home Original Park are all places of great interest to me.

The sentence has awkward naming and capitalization. Use consistent proper names and commas. Ensure each park name is clearly separated. Grammar is acceptable but clarity and proper noun capitalization improve readability.

× I love to contemplate the scenery. As far as the ancient architectures within the park.

✓ I love to contemplate the scenery, especially the ancient architecture within the park.

The fragment 'As far as the ancient architectures within the park.' is incomplete. Combine into one sentence and use 'architecture' (uncountable) rather than 'architectures'. 'Especially' links the idea smoothly.

× Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?

✓ Are there any parks you would like to visit in the future?

Question is fine but 'want to go to' is informal. Using 'would like to visit' is more natural for expressing future desire. 'Visit' is more appropriate than 'go to' when talking about parks.

× Yes, I'd love to go to the Huang Kim Lake Park and Westlake Park in Hanoi, which is the capital city of Vietnam.

✓ Yes, I'd love to go to Huang Kim Lake Park and West Lake Park in Hanoi, which is the capital city of Vietnam.

Sentence is grammatically correct. Minor corrections: remove 'the' before park names unless part of official name, and separate 'West Lake' as two words. 'I'd love to' correctly uses the modal contraction to express desire.

× I have seen these two places on the travel books.

✓ I have seen these two places in travel books.

Use present perfect 'have seen' correctly for experience. Change preposition 'on' to 'in' for books, and use plural without 'the' unless referring to specific books. 'Travel books' is the correct collocation.

× They were beautiful places.

✓ They look like beautiful places.

If referring to pictures in books and present impression, use present tense 'look like'. If referring to past visits, 'They were beautiful' is fine. Choose tense to match intended meaning. Here student likely means appearance from books, so use present.

× I'm sure that the scenery will take my breath away.

✓ I'm sure that the scenery will take my breath away.

This sentence correctly uses future tense 'will' to express expectation. No change needed.