Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more grammatically accurate and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Use correct verb forms (past tense) and reduce repetition.

Ví dụ: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. For example, I often went with my friends to play football and run around, which helped us burn off energy and have fun instead of staying at home.

Gợi ý: Provide a direct answer first, then briefly explain reasons with linking words. Use correct present tense and avoid filler phrases. Mention frequency clearly (e.g. rarely, sometimes).

Ví dụ: I still like going to parks, but I rarely go at the moment because I'm busy with my final year at school. However, when I have a short break, I sometimes go to the park to run or play football.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and explain specific benefits using clearer vocabulary and grammar. Avoid vague phrases; use linking words like 'because' and 'for example' to add clarity.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like more parks in my city because they make urban areas more attractive and provide safe places for children to play. For example, new parks would give families places to relax and children space for sports and games.

Gợi ý: Give a clear, concise future plan with one or two specific details and correct future tense. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repetitive words.

Ví dụ: In the future I want to visit parks with my family, especially with my wife and children. We will relax, watch the kids play football and run around, and enjoy spending time together.

× Yes, when I am chilled, I like to go the park with my friend to go get out our energy and all the thing.

✓ Yes, when I am relaxed, I like to go to the park with my friend to get rid of our energy and everything.

Incorrect verb tense/word choice and missing preposition. 'am chilled' is unnatural for feeling relaxed; use 'am relaxed'. Missing preposition 'to' before 'the park'. 'to go get out our energy' is ungrammatical; use 'to get rid of our energy' or 'to burn off our energy'. 'all the thing' should be 'everything'. Improve by using natural present-tense expressions and correct prepositions.

× I go to play football, I go to run, I go to do anything.

✓ I play football, I go running, I do various activities.

Incorrect use of 'go to' with verbs; English uses simple verbs or gerunds for activities. 'go to run' should be 'go running' or 'run'. 'do anything' is vague; 'do various activities' is clearer. Use present simple for habitual actions.

× The park. I do, we do activity, we do for us activity, not only sit in the home.

✓ We do activities at the park; we are not just sitting at home.

Fragmented sentences and incorrect word order. 'The park.' is a fragment. 'we do activity' should be plural 'we do activities'. 'we do for us activity' is ungrammatical; rephrase as 'we do activities for ourselves' or simply 'we do activities'. Maintain full sentence structure and correct pluralization.

× It is not OK.

✓ It is not okay.

Stylistic rather than strict grammar; 'OK' can be written 'okay' for formality. No article issue but keep consistent spelling. No definite article needed.

× Now, OK, I want to go but I don't have a time to go because you know, I study and I have a school and I have all the things because it is a last year for me.

✓ Now, I want to go but I don't have time because I study and I am in school and it's my final year.

Incorrect use of articles and tense. 'a time' should be 'time' (uncountable). 'I have a school' is unnatural; use 'I am in school'. 'it is a last year for me' should be 'it's my final year' or 'it's my last year'. Use present simple for habitual facts and contractions for natural speech.

× I don't have a time to get a break to go the park.

✓ I don't have time to take a break and go to the park.

Article misuse ('a time' -> 'time'), missing preposition 'to' before 'the park' and awkward verb choice 'get a break' -> 'take a break'. Use natural collocations: 'have time', 'take a break', 'go to the park'.

× But when I I have a break sometime I go to the run or play football.

✓ But when I have a break sometimes I go for a run or play football.

Word order and verb form. 'sometime' should be 'sometimes' (adverb). 'go to the run' incorrect preposition; use 'go for a run'. Keep present simple for habitual actions.

× Yes, why not? I look to see a more park in our city because the park is give us give the cities a beautiful sea on the park.

✓ Yes, why not? I would like to see more parks in our city because parks give the city a beautiful look.

Pronoun and verb misuse. 'I look to see a more park' is incorrect; 'I would like to see more parks' is natural. 'the park is give us give the cities a beautiful sea on the park' is ungrammatical; likely intended 'parks give the city a beautiful appearance' or 'parks make the city look beautiful'. Correct noun plurals and verb forms.

× It is all the children go there, go to play, go to do anything with our front.

✓ All the children go there to play and do many activities with our friends.

Incorrect pronoun 'our front' should be 'our friends'. Unnecessary 'It is' and incorrect infinitive usage. Use 'to play' and 'do many activities' for clarity and correct pronouns.

× In the future I want to go with my my family, my wife, my child.

✓ In the future I want to go with my family: my wife and my child.

Repetition 'my my' is an error. Use plural 'family' followed by clarification. Pronoun use needs cleanup; list family members correctly.

× I will go with my wife to relax.

✓ I will go with my wife to relax.

Sentence is grammatically correct. No change needed. (Kept for completeness.)

× Do we talk about the future And we will see our child.

✓ If we talk about the future, we will see our child.

Incorrect question/statement mix and conjunction capitalization. Likely intended conditional 'If we talk about the future'. Use lowercase 'and' and proper clause connection. Use commas for conditional clauses.

× They play football, they are running, they do anything.

✓ They will play football, they will run, they will do various activities.

Tense inconsistency for future context. Earlier sentence uses future 'will'; here present progressive and present simple are mixed. For future events, use 'will' or 'will be' + -ing: 'they will play', 'they will be running'. 'do anything' is vague; use 'do various activities'.

× We will see him. We will be a happy.

✓ We will see them. We will be happy.

Pronoun number and article errors. 'child' could be singular but earlier 'my child' — if plural 'they'/'them' used; to be safe use 'them'. 'We will be a happy' incorrectly uses article 'a' before adjective; correct is 'We will be happy'.