Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be grammatically correct, concise and coherent. Start with a clear topic sentence using past tense, then add one or two specific supporting details linked with simple connectors. Avoid repetition and filler sounds.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoyed going to parks when I was a child. I often played on the swings and slides with my sister, and sometimes we made new friends from the neighborhood, which made the visits very fun.

Gợi ý: Use present tense and clear time expressions. Give a short topic sentence then explain reasons with linking words (for example, because, so). Fix verb forms and avoid trailing off—finish the sentence with a time phrase or frequency.

Ví dụ: Yes, I still like going to parks, but because of my busy school schedule I rarely visit them nowadays. For example, I haven't been to a park in several months due to exams and homework.

Gợi ý: Be more direct and organized: give a clear opinion then list two specific reasons using linking words (such as because, for example). Reduce hesitations and use precise vocabulary (facilities, variety, design).

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they offer different facilities and atmospheres. For example, some parks might have playgrounds for children while others offer jogging paths and gardens, which would give people more choices.

Gợi ý: Give a clear short answer then support it with a reason and an example. Avoid contradictions (saying parks are the same then too relaxed). Use correct grammar and finish sentences clearly.

Ví dụ: I don't have a particular park in mind; I am happy to visit any of them. I feel that most parks offer similar features like green spaces and benches, so I choose a park based on convenience rather than reputation.

× Yes, I enjoy go.

✓ Yes, I enjoyed going.

The student mixed present simple 'enjoy' with an infinitive 'go' and the context is about childhood, so past tense should be used. 'Enjoy' takes a gerund (verb+ing), and for a past habit use 'enjoyed going'. Improve by using the past tense verb and the gerund form: 'enjoyed going'.

× I enjoy going park when I was a kid because I can play in a I, I can play with my sister and also I can meet new friends.

✓ I enjoyed going to parks when I was a kid because I could play, I could play with my sister, and I could meet new friends.

Multiple issues: 'going park' needs the preposition 'to' and plural 'parks' for general places; the time frame is past so verbs should be past (could/played); 'can' is present modal and inconsistent with 'when I was a kid'. Use gerund 'going' plus 'to' and past modal 'could'. Improve by using 'enjoyed going to parks' and changing 'can' to 'could'.

× I do still like going to parks now but due to my busy schedule like and then the school work I need to do, I don't have time to go out much often so I haven't go to a park for.

✓ I still like going to parks now, but due to my busy schedule and the schoolwork I need to do, I don't have much time to go out, so I haven't been to a park for a long time.

Errors: unnecessary 'do' emphasis, 'school work' should be one word 'schoolwork', 'much often' is ungrammatical, and 'haven't go' should be present perfect 'haven't been'. Also add 'for a long time' to complete the phrase. Use present perfect 'haven't been' for experiences up to now.

× Yes I would umm I would wonder what other parks would look like, if it's the same, and then what facility they have and the difference between each of them.

✓ Yes, I would like to know what other parks would look like, whether they are the same, what facilities they have, and the differences between them.

'Would wonder' is awkward; use 'would like to know' to express desire. 'It's the same' should be 'whether they are the same' and 'facility' should be plural 'facilities'. Also 'difference' should be plural 'differences'. Maintain conditional/modal consistency using 'would' appropriately.

× No, I don't mind what parks it is. Uh, I would like to go to any parks. Uh, I think parks are all the same. It's too relaxed. So I don't, I don't have a specific park to wanted to go.

✓ No, I don't mind which park it is. I would like to go to any park. I think parks are all similar and very relaxing, so I don't have a specific park I want to go to.

Pronoun errors: 'what parks it is' should be 'which park it is' or 'which parks they are'; 'any parks' should be 'any park' for singular reference after 'go to'; 'wanted to go' mixes past tense—use present 'want to go'. 'It's too relaxed' is unclear—use 'very relaxing' or 'similar and relaxing'. Fix pronouns and verb tense consistency.