Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Use correct verb tenses and articles, make sentences more natural and concise, and add linking words if giving multiple points. Also keep within 3–4 sentences. Correct errors: 'love' → 'loved', 'the park' → 'parks' or 'the park', 'lots of space' → 'lots of space' (article not needed), and 'took' → 'would take' or 'take'.

Ví dụ: I loved going to the park as a child because there was plenty of open space. I practiced riding my bike there and often took my dog for walks, which helped me be more confident on the road.

Gợi ý: Correct subject-verb agreement and verb forms, use a clear topic sentence and then supporting detail with a linking phrase. For time expressions, be specific and natural: 'for about an hour'.

Ví dụ: Yes, I still enjoy going to the park because it helps me relax. For example, when I visit, I usually walk or run for about an hour to unwind after a busy day.

Gợi ý: Make sentences grammatically correct and more concise. Use linking words (because, so) and specific reasons. Correct phrases: 'I live in Bangkok', 'there are fewer parks', 'it would be good if the government built more parks'. Avoid repetition and unclear phrasing.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because I live in Bangkok and there are fewer green spaces than the city needs. If the government built more parks, residents would have better places to exercise and relax.

Gợi ý: Organize answer with a clear topic sentence, then give specific details using correct vocabulary and grammar. Replace 'preview' with 'reviews' or 'articles', correct word order: 'a wonderful park', and describe features clearly: 'green hills, a lake, and crisp winter air'. Avoid filler sounds like 'Uh'.

Ví dụ: I would like to visit the Japanese Park because I read positive reviews online. It sounds like a wonderful place with green hills, a beautiful lake, and crisp, clear winter air.

× When I was a child, I love to go the park because there are lots of space.

✓ When I was a child, I loved to go to the park because there was a lot of space.

The speaker refers to a past time ('When I was a child') so the verb should be in the past tense (loved) not present (love). 'Go the park' is missing the preposition to. 'There are lots of space' has number agreement and quantifier errors: 'space' is uncountable, so use 'a lot of space' and match the verb to singular 'there was'. Use consistent past tense and correct preposition and quantifier: 'loved to go to the park because there was a lot of space.'

× I love to practice how to ride a bike and took my dogs for a walk.

✓ I loved to practice how to ride a bike and took my dogs for a walk.

The sentence mixes present tense 'love' with past action 'took'. Because the context is past ('When I was a child'), both verbs should be in the past tense: 'loved' and 'took'. Additionally, 'practice how to ride a bike' is acceptable but could be simplified to 'practice riding a bike.'

× Yes, I love to go to the park because it's make me feel relaxed.

✓ Yes, I love to go to the park because it makes me feel relaxed.

The main clause 'I love' is present and correct, but 'it's make' is ungrammatical: with third person singular subject 'it' the verb should be 'makes'. Also 'it's' contracts 'it is', but 'it makes' is the correct present-tense form. Change to 'it makes me feel relaxed.'

× When I go to the park I often walking and running around one hour.

✓ When I go to the park I often walk and run for about an hour.

After 'I often' use the base verb form 'walk' not the -ing form 'walking'. Also 'running around one hour' is awkward: use 'run for about an hour' or 'run around for about an hour.' Use preposition 'for' with a duration and add 'about' for natural expression.

× Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because I clearly live in Bangkok, which is the capital of Thailand.

✓ Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because I currently live in Bangkok, which is the capital of Thailand.

'Clearly live' is incorrect collocation here; the speaker likely means 'currently live'. 'Clearly' describes obviousness, not time. Replace with the adverb 'currently' to indicate present residence.

× They are less parks in there and I think it will be good if there are, if the government try to build a lot of park.

✓ There are fewer parks there, and I think it would be good if the government tried to build many parks.

'They are less parks in there' has several errors: use 'There are' not 'They are' to state existence (there be issue), and 'less' should be 'fewer' for countable nouns like parks. 'In there' is unnatural; use 'there'. 'It will be good if the government try' needs conditional/wish structure: use 'it would be good if the government tried' or 'if the government would try', and 'a lot of park' should be plural 'many parks'. This corrects subject-verb and quantifier usage and makes the conditional form appropriate.

× I would like to go to the Japanese park because I have read the preview on the Internet.

✓ I would like to go to the Japanese park because I read a preview on the Internet.

'Have read the preview' is present perfect and can be acceptable, but 'the preview' is unclear; 'a preview' is more natural. For expressing evidence seen online, simple past 'I read' is fine when referring to a completed past action. If keeping present perfect, use 'I have read a preview on the Internet.' Ensure article use 'a' for an unspecified preview.

× I saw it's very a wonderful park.

✓ I saw it's a very wonderful park.

Word order with 'very' and the article is wrong. Use the article 'a' before 'very wonderful park' and place 'very' before the adjective: 'a very wonderful park.' Alternatively, simply 'a wonderful park' is clearer.

× Uh, plenty of the green hills and good lake and the winter is really clear.

✓ It has plenty of green hills and a nice lake, and the winters are really clear.

'Plenty of the green hills' misuses the definite article; use 'plenty of green hills' or 'It has plenty of green hills.' 'Good lake' is awkward; 'a nice lake' is natural. 'The winter is really clear' should be pluralized or generalized: 'the winters are really clear' or 'the winter is very clear' depending on meaning. Also combine into a complete sentence with proper subjects and verbs.