Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make the answer grammatically correct, more concise, and add a specific supporting detail. Begin with a clear topic sentence in past tense, avoid redundancy, and use a linking phrase for the extra detail.

Ví dụ: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child because they made me feel relaxed and happy. For example, I often played football with my friends and had picnics with my family on weekends, which created many fond memories.

Gợi ý: Correct grammar and word choice, be concise, and clarify the reason. Use linking words to connect ideas and give a concrete example of the interaction with friends.

Ví dụ: Absolutely — I still enjoy going to parks, especially with friends from university. Because I study here with many Estonian classmates, we often sit together in the park and exchange cultural stories, which I find both fun and enlightening.

Gợi ý: Use a clear topic sentence and correct verb forms, avoid repeating phrases, and include a specific reason or example of how more parks would help the community. Use a linking word to add the supporting detail.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they provide space for picnics, walks and socialising. For instance, new parks could offer playgrounds and quiet areas for students to study outdoors, which would benefit families and young people alike.

Gợi ý: Keep sentences coherent and relevant to the question. Start with a clear statement about your plans, then give a specific park name or destination and one reason. Remove irrelevant details about the taxi unless they support the point, and correct phrasing.

Ví dụ: Yes, I plan to visit more parks in the future; for example, I want to go to the famous Toompark, which I heard is very beautiful. A local taxi driver recommended it to me, saying it has lovely gardens and scenic walking paths.

× Yes, I like going to parks as a child because it can makes me feel relaxed and happy and I usually go there with my friends and family.

✓ Yes, I liked going to parks as a child because they made me feel relaxed and happy, and I usually went there with my friends and family.

The sentence mixes past context 'as a child' with present tense verbs. Use past tense 'liked' and 'went'. 'Can makes' is incorrect: modal 'can' + base verb 'make' or simple past 'made'. Also 'parks' is plural so refer with 'they'. Suggestion: keep tense consistent and use correct verb forms.

× I can spend much time with them.

✓ I could spend a lot of time with them.

When talking about habitual past ability or possibility use 'could' rather than 'can'. Also 'much time' is used with uncountable nouns in negative/questions; in affirmative 'a lot of time' is more natural. Suggestion: use 'could' and 'a lot of time' for past habits.

× Absolutely, I still like going to park with my friends because I study at university avatar to now, so I have many Estonian friends.

✓ Absolutely, I still like going to parks with my friends because I am studying at university now, so I have many Estonian friends.

Use present continuous 'am studying' for an ongoing action. 'Park' should be plural or include article 'the park' depending on meaning; 'parks' fits general preference. Phrase 'avatar to now' is incorrect; likely intended 'up to now' or just 'now'. Suggestion: use 'am studying' and 'now', and plural 'parks' or 'the park' consistently.

× I really enjoying going there with them.

✓ I really enjoy going there with them.

After 'really' use base verb with appropriate tense: 'I really enjoy' (present simple) or 'I am really enjoying' (present continuous). 'Really enjoying' alone lacks auxiliary verb. Suggestion: choose correct auxiliary or base form depending on intended tense.

× We can exchange some cultural differences and interesting stories.

✓ We can share cultural differences and interesting stories.

'Exchange differences' is awkward; 'exchange stories' or 'share cultural differences' is better. This sentence is grammatically acceptable but word choice can improve. 'Can exchange some cultural differences' uses nominal phrasing; prefer 'share' or 'exchange cultural experiences'. Suggestion: use 'share' or 'exchange experiences'.

× I think it is very fun.

✓ I think it is very fun.

Sentence is grammatically correct. No change needed. Use 'fun' is informal but acceptable here.

× Sure, I like to see more parks in my city because when we go there we can have a picnic and for a walk or for a chat.

✓ Sure, I would like to see more parks in my city because when we go there we can have a picnic, go for a walk, or have a chat.

Use 'would like' to express desire. The phrase 'have a picnic and for a walk or for a chat' mixes structures; parallel structure needed: 'have a picnic, go for a walk, or have a chat.' Also 'like to see' is okay but 'would like to see' is more natural. Suggestion: maintain parallel verb forms and use polite conditional for wishes.

× I can spend much happy time with them there and there are more options.

✓ I can spend a happy time with them there and there are more options.

'Much happy time' is ungrammatical; use 'a lot of happy times' or 'a lot of happy moments' or 'happy time' with articles. If referring generally, say 'spend a lot of happy time' or 'spend a lot of time happily'. Suggestion: use 'a lot of happy time' or rephrase to 'have many happy times'.

× Sure, I really want to go to other parks in the future and yesterday I took a taxi.

✓ Sure, I really want to go to other parks in the future. Yesterday I took a taxi.

Two ideas in one sentence: desire for the future (present tense) and a past action. Better to separate into two sentences and keep tenses consistent. Suggestion: split sentences when switching time frames.

× The driver is from Estonia, so he is familiar with Estonia.

✓ The driver was from Estonia, so he was familiar with the area.

When narrating a past event ('yesterday I took a taxi'), maintain past tense: 'was'. Repeating 'Estonia' is redundant; 'the area' or 'the country' is clearer. Suggestion: keep tense consistency and avoid repetition by using appropriate pronoun or noun replacement.

× He told me. There is a planning park in Tattoo, which is famous for its beauty, so he recommended.

✓ He told me there is a planned park in Tartu that is famous for its beauty, so he recommended it.

Sentence fragments and word order issues: 'He told me.' should connect to the reported clause. 'Planning park' is incorrect; use 'planned park'. 'Tattoo' likely miswritten 'Tartu' (Estonian city). 'So he recommended' needs object 'it'. Suggestion: combine into one sentence, correct nouns, and include the object of 'recommended'.