Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Improve grammar and clarity: use correct verb forms and articles, make one clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases like "wear off my living."

Ví dụ: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. I often went there to play on the swings and to run around with my friends, which made me feel happy and energetic.

Gợi ý: Correct verb tenses and articles, and use linking words for coherence. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give specific routines or reasons. Reduce redundancy (e.g., avoid repeating "morning").

Ví dụ: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks. Usually I go in the morning for a brisk walk and some exercise, and I prefer parks that have walking paths and exercise equipment.

Gợi ý: Make the answer direct and provide a specific reason or example. Use correct articles and plural forms, and link sentences logically. Avoid vague phrases like "did all of that thing."

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because there are few green spaces at the moment. For example, if we had more small parks, families could have places to relax nearby.

Gợi ý: Use correct number agreement and clear descriptions. Give one clear topic sentence, then add specific details about why you want to visit each park using linking words. Clarify uncertain information or avoid guessing phrases like "may maybe."

Ví dụ: Yes, there are two parks I want to visit in the future. The first is Joyland in Lahore because I have heard it has many rides, and the second is a resort-style park called Marie, which I would like to visit for its gardens and relaxation facilities.

× Yes, of course I like to going park as a child because at that time it is my way of enjoying or to wear off my living because I think it is better for me.

✓ Yes, of course I liked going to parks as a child because at that time it was my way of enjoying life and relieving stress, and I thought it was better for me.

The student used present tense 'like' and incorrect verb forms 'to going' and 'park' when referring to past habitual action; this requires simple past 'liked' and plural 'parks'. 'To going' is ungrammatical; use the gerund 'going' after 'liked'. 'It is my way of enjoying or to wear off my living' is awkward and ungrammatical: 'enjoying life and relieving stress' conveys the intended meaning. Also change 'it is' to 'it was' to match past reference. Use: correct tense (past), correct gerund/complement structures, plural nouns where general.

× Yes, I still like to going to park now because I mostly going to park in morning for my morning walk or for my exercise and I'm mostly going to park where there is things to play.

✓ Yes, I still like going to parks now because I mostly go to the park in the morning for my walk or exercise, and I usually go to parks where there are things to play on.

The student mixed 'like to going' (incorrect) instead of 'like going' or 'like to go' — use gerund or infinitive, not both. 'Mostly going' should be simple present 'mostly go' for habitual action. 'To park in morning' needs articles and preposition: 'to the park in the morning'. 'My morning walk or for my exercise' is redundant; 'for my walk or exercise' is clearer. 'There is things' is subject-verb agreement error — use 'there are things'. Also pluralize 'parks' when speaking generally. Suggestions: use correct gerund/infinitive forms, correct subject-verb agreement, include necessary articles.

× Yes, I like to see more parks in my city. I visited all of parks of my city because my city is not big, so I did all of that thing.

✓ Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city. I have visited all the parks in my city because it is not big, so I have done all of that.

'Like to see' is acceptable but 'would like to see' is more natural for a preference. The second sentence mixes tenses and has article and plural errors: 'I visited all of parks of my city' should be 'I have visited all the parks in my city' (present perfect for life experience up to now). Use 'the parks' and 'in my city'. 'My city is not big' is fine but keep consistent tense: 'because it is not big'. 'So I did all of that thing' is awkward — 'so I have done all of that' or 'so there is nothing left to visit.' Suggestions: use correct articles, plural nouns, and appropriate tense (present perfect) for past actions with present relevance.

× Yes, there is 2 parks where I want to go in the future. One is named as Joyland in Lahore, capital of Punjab province in Pakistan and the other is in Marie which is may maybe a resort. I want to go to this park in future.

✓ Yes, there are two parks that I want to go to in the future. One is called Joyland in Lahore, the capital of Punjab province in Pakistan, and the other is in Murree, which may be a resort. I want to go to these parks in the future.

'There is 2 parks' is incorrect subject-verb agreement with number — use 'there are two parks'. Spell out number 'two' and use plural 'parks'. 'Named as Joyland' should be 'called Joyland'. 'Marie' likely refers to 'Murree' (a known resort); corrected to 'Murree'. 'May maybe a resort' is redundant and ungrammatical; use 'may be a resort'. 'I want to go to this park in future' should match plural/object: 'I want to go to these parks in the future' and include article 'the' before 'future'. Suggestions: ensure 'there is/are' matches number, use correct verb 'called', avoid redundant modals, and use correct place names.