Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make the answer more natural and concise: use past tense consistently, state a clear topic sentence, and give one specific example with a brief detail. Avoid repetition (don’t repeat “with my mom” twice) and correct grammar mistakes.

Ví dụ: Yes, I loved going to parks with my mother when I was a child. We often played soccer together and sometimes played hide-and-seek with other neighborhood children, which made weekends really fun.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and naturally, use concise reasoning and linking words. Correct grammar (e.g., “going to parks”), avoid repetition, and limit to two or three sentences. Add a brief contrast if relevant.

Ví dụ: Not really; I rarely go to parks now because I prefer spending my free time playing video games or studying. However, I might visit a park when I need a break from studying.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear opinion, then give a specific reason and one concrete benefit. Improve grammar and cohesion by using linking words like “because” and “so” appropriately, and avoid repeating phrases.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would. More parks would help balance the many high-rise buildings in our city because green spaces reduce stress and provide places for exercise and relaxation.

Gợi ý: Give a single clear answer, correct awkward phrasing, and provide one or two specific details about the park and why you want to visit. Keep it concise and natural.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to visit Sydney Park because I’ve heard it has large green spaces and wetlands. I think it would be a peaceful place to relax and take long walks.

× Yes, I like to go to parks with my mom because I liked doing outdoor sports with my mom.

✓ Yes, I liked going to parks with my mom because I enjoyed doing outdoor sports with her.

The student mixes present 'like' with past activities; context asks about childhood so past tense should be used consistently. Also avoid repeating 'with my mom' twice and use 'her' for conciseness. Suggestion: keep past tense for childhood memories and use pronouns to avoid repetition.

× For example, I enjoyed playing soccer with my mom or did hide and seek with.

✓ For example, I enjoyed playing soccer with my mom or playing hide and seek with her.

After 'enjoyed' use the -ing form (gerund). The original mixes 'enjoyed' + base verb 'did', which is incorrect. Also include the object 'her' to complete the sentence.

× No really, I don't like going parks right now because I prefer playing video games at home or studying.

✓ No, not really. I don't like going to parks right now because I prefer playing video games at home or studying.

Missing 'to' in the phrase 'going to parks' is a prepositional error related to verb use; also 'No really' is unnatural—'No, not really' fits conversational response. Maintain present tense for current preference.

× I usually use most time for studying and sleeping so I don't prefer to go parks right now.

✓ I usually spend most of my time studying and sleeping, so I don't prefer to go to parks right now.

Use 'spend time' not 'use time', and include 'most of my' before 'time'. Also 'go to parks' requires the preposition 'to'. These corrections fix collocation and preposition errors.

× Yes, I like it's better to have more parks in my city because these days we have a lot of buildings, so I feel it's stressful surrounded by high buildings, so it's better to have greens.

✓ Yes, I think it's better to have more parks in my city because we have many buildings these days, and being surrounded by tall buildings feels stressful, so having green spaces would be better.

Multiple issues: 'I like it's better' is incorrect; use 'I think' or 'I like' separately. 'A lot of buildings' is acceptable but 'many' is more natural before plural noun. 'Stressful surrounded by high buildings' needs passive/gerund structure: 'being surrounded by tall buildings feels stressful'. Avoid repeating 'so' and use 'and' to connect ideas. Use 'green spaces' instead of 'greens.'

× Yes, we have. I, yes I have.

✓ Yes, we do. Yes, I have.

Answers are disfluent and ungrammatical. For the question 'Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?' a simple affirmative is 'Yes, we do' (if referring to parks in the city) or 'Yes, I have' for personal plans. Clean, concise responses are preferred.

× I really want to go to Sydney Park in Sydney because I've heard it's a special park.

✓ I really want to go to Sydney Park because I've heard it's a special place.

'Sydney Park in Sydney' is repetitive; 'Sydney Park' implies location. 'It's a special park' is acceptable, but 'special place' sounds more natural. The present perfect 'I've heard' is correctly used to express information received before now.

× They have green spaces and I can feel more relaxed when I visit here, that's why.

✓ It has green spaces, and I feel more relaxed when I visit, which is why I want to go.

Use singular 'it' for 'Sydney Park' not 'they'. 'Visit here' is awkward; use 'visit' or 'visit there'. 'That's why' should be integrated into sentence: 'which is why I want to go.' Avoid mixing tenses; simple present 'I feel' fits general truth about the park.