Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is natural, relevant and contains supporting details. To improve, make the response slightly more concise and vary vocabulary (e.g., avoid repeating similar ideas like ‘relax’ and ‘clear my mind’). Add a linking phrase to connect the habit and its benefit. Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child because they offered a break from studying. For example, I often played on the swings and rode my bike there, which helped me get fresh air and feel refreshed afterward.

Gợi ý: Your answer answers the question and gives reasons, but contains grammatical errors and some unclear wording (e.g., "going to park", "spray spending"). Improve verb forms, article usage, and remove redundant phrases. Use a linking word to show contrast or continuation (e.g., "and", "because"). Limit to 3–4 clear sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I still enjoy going to the park. I visit every day after work to exercise and unwind because my hometown park has lovely scenery and peaceful natural areas, so I usually spend some free time there.

Gợi ý: This is a clear, well-structured response with good reasons. To improve further, add a linking word between the two supporting points (e.g., "Furthermore") and correct minor punctuation/grammar (add commas). You could give a brief example to make it more specific.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would. Parks provide a place to relax and escape stressful daily life. Furthermore, they encourage exercise and socializing, so adding more green spaces would likely improve residents’ physical and mental well-being.

Gợi ý: The idea is good but the answer has multiple grammatical errors, unclear phrases and short fragmented sentences. Fix word choice (e.g., "parks" not "perks"), use articles, combine fragments into coherent sentences, and give one or two specific features. Keep under five sentences and use linking words (e.g., "because", "and").

Ví dụ: I don’t have many specific parks in mind, but I would like to visit Hazelnut River Park in New York because it has a public library, extensive greenery and long walking and cycling paths. I think it would be a relaxing place to spend a weekend and enjoy the scenery.

× Looking back on my childhood, I loved going to parks because they helped me relax after long hours of studying.

✓ Looking back on my childhood, I loved going to parks because they helped me relax after long hours of studying.

No correction needed; sentence is grammatically correct. Present participle 'going' is used appropriately to describe the activity.

× I used to play on the swings and ride my bikes there, which was a great way to get fresh air and clear my mind.

✓ I used to play on the swings and ride my bike there, which was a great way to get fresh air and clear my mind.

The student mentioned a single subject 'I' so 'bike' (singular) is more natural unless they owned multiple bikes. Use 'bike' to match the singular subject; this is a plurality/word-choice issue. If multiple bikes were intended, keep 'bikes' but context suggests one.

× Yes, I still like going to park.

✓ Yes, I still like going to the park.

The noun 'park' here is a specific place (general habit of visiting parks or a particular nearby park), so the definite article 'the' is required. Without the article the noun is uncountable/incorrect in this context.

× Actually, my hometown park has lovely scenery and beautiful natural areas, so I enjoy spray spending time there, especially when I find some free time.

✓ Actually, my hometown park has lovely scenery and beautiful natural areas, so I enjoy spending time there, especially when I have free time.

The phrase 'spray spending' is incorrect; likely a typo. Remove 'spray' and use 'spending'. Replace 'when I find some free time' with the more natural 'when I have free time'. This fixes word choice and adverbial usage.

× To be honest, yes I would like to see more parks in my city because they give people a place to relax and escape the stressful daily life.

✓ To be honest, yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they give people a place to relax and escape the stressful daily life.

Add a comma after 'yes' for clarity (punctuation). The phrase 'the stressful daily life' is awkward; better is 'stressful daily life' or 'the stresses of daily life'. This suggestion improves article and phrasing.

× Parks also encourage exercise and socializing so adding more green spaces would improve residents physical and mental well-being.

✓ Parks also encourage exercise and socializing, so adding more green spaces would improve residents' physical and mental well-being.

Missing comma before 'so' and missing possessive apostrophe in 'residents' to show their well-being. Add the comma and the apostrophe to indicate possession.

× Yeah, I don't have many specific perks in my mind, but the one really want to visit is Hazelnut River Park in New York because it has library, greenery and green.

✓ Yeah, I don't have many specific parks in mind, but the one I really want to visit is Hazelnut River Park in New York because it has a library, greenery, and green spaces.

'perks' is incorrect; should be 'parks'. Missing pronoun 'I' before 'really want'. Countable nouns need articles: 'a library'. 'Green' alone is vague; use 'green spaces' or 'greenery'. Fixed word choice, pronoun omission, and articles.

× Great working and cycling path.

✓ It has great walking and cycling paths.

Sentence fragment lacking subject and verb. 'Working' is likely a typo for 'walking'. Use 'It has' to connect to the previous sentence and pluralize 'paths' for generality. This fixes sentence structure and word choice.

× I think it would be a relaxing place to spend on weekend and enjoy the scenery.

✓ I think it would be a relaxing place to spend a weekend and enjoy the scenery.

Omit 'on' before 'weekend' and add the article 'a' to form 'a weekend'. The correct collocation is 'spend a weekend'. This corrects preposition and article usage.