Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Focus on giving a clear, relevant answer that directly addresses the question. Start with a simple topic sentence stating whether you liked parks, then give one or two concise reasons with correct tense and vocabulary. Avoid irrelevant details (e.g. marital status) and reduce repetition. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' correctly.

Ví dụ: No, I didn't enjoy going to parks as a child because my family rarely visited them. Instead, we often went to the local market, so I had little chance to play in parks.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and keep sentences short and grammatically correct. State that you still like parks, then give one clear reason (relaxation, stress relief) with a linking word such as 'because' or 'so'. Avoid repetition and correct verb forms and word order. Mention one specific activity you do there to make it more specific.

Ví dụ: Yes, I still enjoy going to the park because it helps me relax after busy days. For example, on holidays I walk or sit by the pond to clear my mind and reduce stress.

Gợi ý: Give a direct opinion and support it with one or two specific reasons. Use linking words like 'because' and 'for example'. Avoid vague phrases and repetition. Mention concrete benefits of having more parks (exercise, green space, family areas) to make your answer stronger.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like more parks in my city because they provide green space for exercise and family activities. For example, new parks could include playgrounds and walking paths so more people can enjoy outdoor recreation.

Gợi ý: Answer clearly by naming the type of park or a specific park you'd like to visit and give a concise reason. Use correct grammar (e.g. 'I want to visit parks in the future because…') and avoid vague adjectives like 'many' without context. Add one specific detail about what you would do there to make the answer concrete.

Ví dụ: Yes, I want to visit botanical gardens and coastal parks in the future because I enjoy seeing different plants and sea views. For instance, I would like to walk the flower trails and take photos of rare plants.

× No, I don't like to go with go to parks as a child because I haven't married.

✓ No, I didn't like going to parks as a child because I wasn't married.

The sentence refers to the past (childhood) so past tense should be used (didn't like, wasn't married). 'Don't like to go' is present and incorrect for a past time; 'to go with go to' is ungrammatical repetition. Use 'didn't like going to' or 'didn't like to go to' and 'wasn't married' for past state. Suggestion: Use simple past for habits in childhood and correct verb forms.

× I haven't married and so I go alone.

✓ I wasn't married, so I went alone.

Again, the sentence describes a past situation, so use past tense 'wasn't married' not present perfect 'haven't married'. 'Go alone' should be 'went alone' for past. Also combine clauses with a comma and 'so'. Suggestion: Match tense to the time reference and ensure clause linkage.

× I go alone with the market.

✓ I went alone to the market.

The original has wrong tense and incorrect preposition. Use past tense 'went' and the correct preposition 'to' for movement toward a place; 'with the market' is incorrect. Suggestion: Use 'to the market' or 'went to the market' for past movement.

× Yes, I like to still going to the park because today is a holiday and I want to enjoy with myself and I have done many work so I'm feeling stressed so I can be I can be also suffer from the depression.

✓ Yes, I still like going to the park because today is a holiday and I want to enjoy myself. I have done a lot of work so I'm feeling stressed and I can also suffer from depression.

Multiple errors: 'like to still going' mixes infinitive and -ing; correct is 'still like going'. 'Enjoy with myself' is incorrect; use 'enjoy myself' or 'enjoy being by myself'. 'Have done many work' should be 'have done a lot of work' or 'have done much work'. 'I can be I can be also suffer from the depression' is ungrammatical; correct: 'I can also suffer from depression'. Use present perfect for completed recent actions and present simple/continuous for current feelings. Suggestion: Use consistent verb forms (like + -ing), correct collocations ('enjoy myself', 'a lot of work'), and simplify the sentence into two clear sentences.

× So I I'm going to the park to feel feel me well and nice.

✓ So I'm going to the park to feel better and relaxed.

The original repeats words ('feel feel') and has incorrect reflexive phrasing ('feel me well and nice'). Use 'feel better' or 'feel well' and appropriate adjectives like 'relaxed' rather than 'nice' for describing a state. Suggestion: Avoid repetition and use natural collocations: 'feel better', 'feel relaxed'.

× Yeah, I like to see the more parks in the city because the one of the park is only good for the everyone.

✓ Yes, I would like to see more parks in the city because the only park is not good enough for everyone.

Errors: 'the more parks' should be 'more parks' (no article). 'the one of the park' is incorrect; use 'the only park' or 'one park'. 'is only good for the everyone' is wrong article use and word choice; 'not good enough for everyone' is a natural expression. Suggestion: Use 'more parks' and correct article placement; simplify comparative ideas.

× I want to enjoy the new things and to show the many things.

✓ I want to enjoy new things and see many different things.

Use 'enjoy new things' (no 'the'), and 'to show the many things' is wrong meaning and structure; likely intended 'see many things'. Use 'many different things' for variety. Suggestion: Use correct verbs with appropriate objects and drop unnecessary articles.

× So I would like to see the many parks in my in my different places.

✓ So I would like to see many parks in different parts of my city.

Remove 'the' before 'many parks'; 'in my in my different places' repeats and is awkward. Use 'different parts of my city' to express varied locations. Suggestion: Avoid repetition and choose clearer location phrases.

× So that much for today.

✓ That's all for today.

'So that much for today' is nonstandard; common closing is 'That's all for today' or 'That's it for today.' Suggestion: Use conventional closing phrases.

× Yeah, I want to go any parks in the future because it helps to make me enjoy pleasant and the many.

✓ Yes, I want to go to many parks in the future because they help me enjoy pleasant experiences and variety.

'Any parks' is incorrect here; use 'many parks' or 'some parks'. Need preposition 'go to'. 'It helps to make me enjoy pleasant and the many' is unclear; clarify to 'they help me enjoy pleasant experiences and variety'. Suggestion: Use plural pronoun agreement and clear nouns for abstract ideas.

× It is the one of the pleasant places where I want to go.

✓ They are some of the pleasant places I want to visit.

For plural intention, use 'they are some of the pleasant places' or 'it is one of the pleasant places' if singular. Also 'visit' is more natural than 'go' in this context. Suggestion: Match number (singular/plural) and use natural verbs like 'visit'.

× So I will also go the park in the future and many places that I haven't seen.

✓ So I will also go to parks in the future and visit many places that I haven't seen.

Missing preposition 'to' after 'go'. 'the park' should be plural or specified; use 'parks' for general. Use 'visit' for places. The clause 'that I haven't seen' correctly uses present perfect for experiences not yet had. Suggestion: Use 'go to' + place and 'visit' for traveling to places; ensure plurality matches meaning.