Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more natural and concise: start with a clear topic sentence, use correct tense and singular/plural forms, and add one specific supporting detail. Use linking words to improve flow. Avoid repetition and trimming unnecessary words.

Ví dụ: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. I often played with my friends on the swings and rode my bicycle around the pond, so I have many happy memories from those visits.

Gợi ý: Use correct verb forms and clearer expressions. Begin with a direct statement, then add a specific reason and a linking word. Replace awkward phrases like "refreshing the air" with natural expressions.

Ví dụ: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks now because they help me relax. For example, I often walk there to get some fresh air and clear my mind after work.

Gợi ý: Clarify your meaning and avoid confusing or irrelevant words. State your opinion clearly, give a specific reason and an example, and correct country/place references. Use linking words to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because there are many children who need safe places to play. For instance, more small parks with playgrounds would benefit families in my neighborhood.

Gợi ý: Avoid fillers and informal contractions. Give a clear topic sentence, then specify the park features you want and why. Use linking words and correct grammar (e.g., "want to" not "wanna").

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to visit parks that have sports facilities in the future. For example, a park with basketball and badminton courts would be ideal because I enjoy playing those sports with friends.

× Yes. When I was a child, I liked going to park there.

✓ Yes. When I was a child, I liked going to the park there.

Missing definite article before a specific noun 'park'. Use 'the park' when referring to a particular park. Also kept past tense 'liked' to match 'When I was a child'. Suggestion: use 'the' before singular countable nouns when both speaker and listener know which one is meant.

× I always play with my friends in playground or ride a bicycle around that, Yes.

✓ I always played with my friends in the playground or rode a bicycle around it.

Tense inconsistency: 'always' with past reference 'When I was a child' requires past tense verbs 'played' and 'rode'. Also missing article 'the' before 'playground' and incorrect pronoun 'that' for place; use 'it'. Ensure verb tense matches time frame and use correct articles and pronouns.

× So in park I had a lot of my memories.

✓ So I have many memories of the park.

Awkward structure and incorrect tense: 'had a lot of my memories' is unnatural. Use present perfect 'have' to express lasting memories, or past 'had' if referring to past possession. Also add 'the' before 'park' and use 'memories of the park'. Suggest: 'I have many memories of the park.'

× Yes, I still like going to park when I need to refresh or rest sometimes.

✓ Yes, I still like going to the park when I need to relax or rest sometimes.

Missing definite article 'the' before 'park'. 'Refresh' is not typically used as a verb for a person; 'relax' is more natural. Tense 'still like' is correct for present preference. Keep adverb 'sometimes' at end or after verb for clarity.

× I used to going to park refreshing the air.

✓ I used to go to the park to enjoy the fresh air.

Incorrect use of 'used to' + gerund: after 'used to' the base form of the verb is required ('go', not 'going'). Also missing 'the' before 'park' and awkward phrase 'refreshing the air' — use 'enjoy the fresh air'. Structure: 'used to' + base verb; use 'to' + verb phrase for purpose ('to enjoy').

× Yes, I think I would like to see more parks in my city.

✓ Yes, I think I would like to see more parks in my city.

Sentence is grammatically correct. 'Would like' appropriately expresses hypothetical desire. No changes needed.

× Actually in my city there are many children.

✓ Actually, there are many children in my city.

Word order improved for natural English: place adverbial 'in my city' usually follows 'there are' or comes at end. Original not ungrammatical but reorder for clarity. No article issues.

× So so the many parks need are needed for Poland.

✓ So many parks are needed in Poland.

Redundant words 'so so' and doubled verbs 'need are needed' create confusion. Correct order: 'many parks are needed' with passive or 'we need many parks' active. Also 'in Poland' is the correct prepositional phrase. Suggest simplifying: 'So many parks are needed in Poland.'

× Yes, in my city I wanna go to in the future, uh, which parks, umm, where parks set up the code for basketball and badminton.

✓ Yes, in my city I want to go in the future to the parks that have courts for basketball and badminton.

Informal 'wanna' should be 'want to'. Word order and relative clause wrong: 'which parks, where parks set up the code' is ungrammatical. Use 'parks that have courts' or 'parks with courts'. Also add 'the' before 'parks' if specific. 'Set up the code' is incorrect phrase; 'have courts' or 'provide courts' is natural.

× So sometimes I, I wanted to enjoy that.

✓ So sometimes I wanted to enjoy them.

Pronoun agreement: 'that' is vague for plural 'parks' or 'courts'; use 'them'. Tense 'wanted' is past; if referring to future desire use 'want' or 'would like'. Remove stuttering repetition. Suggest: 'Sometimes I wanted to enjoy them' (past) or 'Sometimes I want to enjoy them' (present/future).