Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct tense and reduce hesitations. Add one specific detail and a linking word to connect ideas. Avoid repeating phrases.

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I often went to the park with my father to practice volleyball because he used to coach me. For example, he taught me how to serve and gave tips on footwork, which helped me improve quickly.

Gợi ý: Clarify meaning and correct mistakes (e.g., 'play' not 'pray'). Use a clear topic sentence, link reasons coherently, and give specific routine details. Keep answers within 3–4 sentences and reduce fillers.

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I take my two children to the park regularly because my three-year-old loves playing there. For instance, we usually go on weekends and sometimes in the evenings after work so she can run around and play on the swings.

Gợi ý: Give a direct, coherent answer and avoid unclear or repetitive phrases. Use linking words to explain reasons and correct unclear place names or phrasing. Provide a specific reason why more parks would be useful or unnecessary.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like more parks, because even though Fukuoka has many green spaces, additional small parks would benefit families living in dense neighborhoods. For example, more local playgrounds would make it easier for parents with young children to visit without travelling far.

Gợi ý: Be specific and structured: name a park or type of park, explain why you want to go, and give one concrete detail about the activities. Use correct vocabulary ('children', 'older children') and a linking word for coherence.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to visit several parks in Saga near Fukuoka because they have larger play areas. For instance, one park has climbing frames and long slides designed for older children around six years old, so it would be great for my family.

× I usually went to the park with my family, especially my dad, uh, when I want to practice playing volleyball.

✓ I usually went to the park with my family, especially my dad, when I wanted to practice playing volleyball.

The sentence mixes past 'went' with present 'want'. Use past tense 'wanted' to keep past-time consistency when talking about childhood habits. Suggestion: keep all verbs in the same past timeframe for past routine descriptions. (Grammar problem type ID: 6)

× I asked my father to come to the park together and I asked him for some advice.

✓ I asked my father to come to the park with me and asked him for some advice.

Redundant 'together' is unnecessary and 'come to the park with me' is more natural. Maintain past simple 'asked' which is correct; just refine phrasing for clarity. (Grammar problem type ID: 5)

× Uh, this is because I have two children to pray with.

✓ This is because I have two children to play with.

The verb 'pray' is incorrect for the intended meaning; 'play' fits context. The present tense 'have' is correct for current possession. Ensure verb choice matches intended activity. (Grammar problem type ID: 6)

× Uh, she turned 3 years old this year.

✓ She turned three years old this year.

Numerals are acceptable, but not a grammar error; however, ensure consistency in number expression. No grammatical change required beyond style. If treating as grammatical, maintain singular 'she' with 'turned'. (Grammar problem type ID: 1)

× So we usually go to the park on weekend and sometimes weekdays after.

✓ So we usually go to the park on weekends and sometimes on weekdays afterwards.

Use plural 'weekends' for general habitual actions and add preposition 'on' before 'weekdays'. 'After' should be 'afterwards' to mean 'at other times'. This fixes pluralization and preposition use. (Grammar problem type ID: 1)

× Yes, I would, but I see many parks around here since like a lot of families living here in Fukuoka City, Coca City is uh, supporting for families to provide essential, essential.

✓ Yes, I would, but there are many parks around here because many families live in Fukuoka City, and the city supports families by providing essential services.

Original sentence has fragmented structure, tense and article issues. Replace 'I see' with 'there are' to describe existence, use present simple 'live' for general fact, and clarify 'supports families by providing essential services' for meaning. This corrects sentence structure and 'there be' usage. (Grammar problem type ID: 26)

× Yes, there are some parks in Saga next to Fukuoka city.

✓ Yes, there are some parks in Saga next to Fukuoka City.

Sentence is mostly correct; capitalize 'City' for proper noun consistency. 'There are' correctly expresses existence of parks. Minor correction: capitalization. (Grammar problem type ID: 3)

× There are some activities and swings and slides for bigger chi children like 6 years old.

✓ There are some activities, swings, and slides for older children around six years old.

Replace 'bigger chi children' with 'older children' and 'like 6 years old' with 'around six years old' for natural adjective use and age phrasing. Also add commas to separate list items. This fixes adjective choice and age expression. (Grammar problem type ID: 13)