Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise, correct grammar, and give specific supporting details. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific reasons or an example. Use linking words (e.g., because, so, for example) and avoid filler words like “uh.” Also correct tense and count nouns (friends, socialise).

Ví dụ: I didn’t go to parks much as a child because my parents wouldn’t let me go out unless they came with me. As a result, I felt bored and missed chances to play with other children, so I mostly stayed at home and read books.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and use correct verb forms; avoid confusion and vague phrases. Begin with a clear statement about your current preference, then add a specific reason or example and use linking words (for example, although). Remove repetitions and fillers.

Ví dụ: Yes, I do like going to parks now because I enjoy spending quality time there with someone special. For example, I would go for a walk or a picnic with a partner to relax and talk.

Gợi ý: Provide a clear topic sentence and then specific reasons with correct grammar and linking phrases. Correct verb forms and noun forms (go to the parks, work schedule). Mention concrete benefits of more parks to strengthen your answer.

Ví dụ: Absolutely. I would like to see more parks in my city because they would give people more space to exercise and relax. However, I often struggle to visit parks because I work Sunday to Friday and only have weekends free, so more nearby parks would help.

Gợi ý: Be direct and give specific reasons with correct structure and tense. If you say you won’t go, explain why and offer a conditional plan using linking words (because, although, if). Avoid vague wording like “not going anywhere” and fix noun forms (park).

Ví dụ: Not really — I don’t have any specific parks in mind right now because I’m focused on my job and building client relationships. If I have free time in the future, I would probably visit a nearby park to unwind.

× No, I didn't go to parks when I was a kid because my parents always prohibited me to go out outside unless uh, they accompanied me.

✓ No, I didn't go to parks when I was a kid because my parents always prohibited me from going outside unless they accompanied me.

Use 'prohibit someone from doing something' (verb + from + -ing). Also use 'going outside' instead of 'go out outside' which is redundant. Replace infinitive 'to go' with gerund 'going' after 'prohibited from'. Suggestion: Learn verbs followed by 'from' + -ing (e.g., 'prevented me from going').

× Sometimes I feel bored because I didn't have friend and I cannot a socialization.

✓ Sometimes I felt bored because I didn't have any friends and I couldn't socialize.

Plural 'friends' is required when referring to people in general; use 'any' with negative past. 'Cannot a socialization' is ungrammatical: use past form 'couldn't' to match past context and the verb 'socialize' rather than the noun 'socialization'. Suggestion: Use appropriate noun number and verbs: 'didn't have any friends', 'couldn't socialize'.

× Yes, if there is a time with my special person, I would go to the past to spend uh, my, my quality time with her.

✓ Yes, if I have time with my special person, I would go to the park to spend quality time with her.

'If there is a time' is awkward; use 'if I have time'. The phrase 'go to the past' is incorrect for visiting a park — likely meant 'go to the park'. 'Quality time' doesn't need repetition or commas. Also conditional 'would' is acceptable but ensure the condition is realistic; keep tense consistent. Suggestion: Use clear time expressions ('if I have time') and correct destination ('park').

× But I haven't find my girlfriend yet.

✓ But I haven't found my girlfriend yet.

After 'have' in present perfect, use past participle 'found', not base form 'find'. Suggestion: Use present perfect structure: 'have/has + past participle'.

× Absolutely yes. However I find it difficult to split my time between go to the parts and work because I work from Sunday until Friday so as I must go to part at the Saturday or Sunday.

✓ Absolutely yes. However, I find it difficult to split my time between going to the parks and work because I work from Sunday until Friday, so I must go to the park on Saturday or Sunday.

When using 'between', follow with gerunds or nouns: 'between going to the parks and work'. Use plural 'parks' if referring generally. Use 'go to the park' (singular) or 'go to the parks' consistently; 'at the Saturday' is wrong—use 'on Saturday or Sunday'. Also 'so as I must' is incorrect; use 'so I must'. Suggestion: Use gerunds after 'between' and correct prepositions for days ('on Saturday').

× No, I'm not going anywhere, especially the newest part because I focus on my job and building relationship with the clients.

✓ No, I'm not going anywhere, especially to the newest park, because I'm focusing on my job and building relationships with clients.

Use 'going to' + place: 'to the newest park'. Maintain consistent progressive present 'I'm focusing' for current ongoing action. 'Building relationship' should be plural 'building relationships' and drop 'the' before 'clients' unless specific clients are meant. Suggestion: Use correct preposition 'to', form progressive for ongoing actions, and pluralize 'relationships'.

× How and if there is a time when I go to park I would go.

✓ If there is a time when I go to the park, I will go.

The original mixes conditional forms and word order. For a real future possibility, use 'If there is a time... I will go.' Also include article 'the' before 'park'. Suggestion: Use consistent conditional/future structure: 'If... I will...' and include necessary articles.