Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific details using linking words. Avoid repetition and fix verb forms (e.g., "taking pictures", "it improves my energy").

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. For example, when I have free time I often go to a nearby park to photograph trees, flowers and ponds, which helps me relax and recharge.

Gợi ý: Give a clear topic sentence and support it with specific reasons. Use linking words (because, also, for example). Avoid hesitations and unclear phrases; replace vague words with precise vocabulary (e.g., "wildlife", "meadows").

Ví dụ: I prefer views in rural areas because I enjoy natural landscapes. For example, the countryside often has diverse wildlife, wide meadows and colorful wildflowers, which feel peaceful compared with noisy city streets.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and give specific reasons with coherent linking. Correct grammar ("I prefer views in my own country", "a balance between modernity and nature"). Add a short example of a place in your country to make it concrete.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because it offers a good balance between modern cities and natural areas. For instance, I enjoy visiting coastal parks near my city where I can see both contemporary architecture and peaceful beaches, so I feel comfortable and inspired.

× Of course, I really like taking a picture of different view because I I love natural scenery, so when I have when I have some free time, I usually go to park to taking a picture various natural scenery. It is improve my energy and it makes.

✓ Of course, I really like taking pictures of different views because I love natural scenery, so when I have some free time I usually go to the park to take pictures of various natural scenes. It improves my energy and makes me feel better.

Multiple errors: incorrect use of -ing after 'go to the park to' (use base verb 'take'); singular/plural mismatch for 'picture'/'pictures' and 'view'/'views' and 'scenery'/'scenes'; missing article 'the' before 'park'; repetition and filler words removed. Suggestions: use plural nouns when referring to multiple items (pictures, views), use 'go to the park to take' (infinitive after 'to'), and use 'improves my energy' or 'makes me feel better' for correct subject-verb agreement and clear expression.

× I prefer view in rural areas because I really like natural, natural scenery.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas because I really like natural scenery.

Singular/plural and article errors: 'view' should be plural 'views' when speaking generally about preferences, and the repeated word 'natural' is unnecessary. Suggestions: use plural nouns for general preferences and avoid repetition.

× And then and then, uh, noodle noodle Bill has a very, very barrier species view, like animal and like grasses, like flower it is.

✓ Also, rural areas have a wide variety of species and landscapes, such as animals, grasses, and flowers.

Original sentence is unclear and contains repetition and incorrect word choice ('noodle noodle Bill', 'barrier species view'). Restructure the sentence to state the idea clearly: use 'have a wide variety of species and landscapes' and list examples. Suggestions: avoid placeholders or nonsense words, remove filler repetitions, and use clear nouns and phrases.

× I prefer a view in my country because I really like country.

✓ I prefer views in my country because I really like my country.

Article and noun errors: 'a view' is too specific; use plural 'views' for a general preference. 'Country' needs a possessive 'my' to refer to the speaker's country. Suggestions: use 'my country' and pluralize when speaking generally.

× I think my country has a good balance between modern and natural natural so I this this attraction is very beneficial for me.

✓ I think my country has a good balance between modern development and nature, so this is very attractive to me.

Repetition ('natural natural', 'this this') and awkward phrasing ('attraction is very beneficial for me') make the sentence incorrect. Use clearer nouns ('modern development and nature') and expressions ('attractive to me') to convey preference. Suggestions: remove repeated words and choose idiomatic phrases.

× I usually enjoy my contribute.

✓ I usually enjoy visiting and contributing to its preservation.

The phrase 'enjoy my contribute' is ungrammatical: 'contribute' is a verb and needs to be part of a verb phrase. Clarify the intended meaning: if the speaker means they enjoy visiting and helping preserve nature, use 'visiting and contributing to its preservation'. Suggestions: use correct verb forms and complete verb phrases.