Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 문법과 표현을 더 정확하게 고치고 응답을 한두 문장으로 명확히 정리하세요. 예를 들어 시제와 단어 선택 오류(«Specially», «went to travel», 소유격 처리 등)를 수정하고 연결어를 사용해 문장을 자연스럽게 이어야 합니다. 또한 불필요한 반복을 줄이고 구체적 예시(어떤 나라, 어떤 랜드마크)를 하나 추가하면 좋습니다.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views. For example, when I travel abroad I often photograph natural scenery and famous landmarks, such as mountains and historic buildings, because I like capturing unique scenes.

Gợi ý: 응답의 구조는 괜찮지만 문법(단수/복수, 관사)과 어휘 선택을 다듬으세요. 또한 이유를 하나로 좁히고 구체적 세부사항(어떤 자연 요소가 좋은지, 어떤 계절에 촬영하는지 등)을 추가하면 더 설득력 있습니다. 연결어로 이유를 명확히 제시하세요.

Ví dụ: I prefer rural views because I enjoy photographing natural landscapes with my digital camera. For instance, I like capturing colorful fields and forests in autumn, which offer rich textures and warm tones.

Gợi ý: 의미 전달이 불명확하고 문법 오류가 많습니다(‘prepare bills’ 같은 표현 오류, 어순 및 불완전한 문장). 질문에 직접 답한 뒤 이유와 구체적 예를 덧붙이세요. 또한 ‘because’ 이하 문장을 명확하고 자연스럽게 고쳐야 합니다.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in other countries because I find historic landmarks and natural scenery abroad very inspiring. For example, when I visited Europe I was impressed by medieval cathedrals and picturesque coastlines, which were wonderful to photograph.

× Specially I went to travel to other countries.

✓ Especially, I have traveled to other countries.

'Specially' is incorrect here; the intended word is 'especially'. Also, 'I went to travel to other countries' is awkward and ungrammatical. Use present perfect 'I have traveled to other countries' to show experience. Suggestion: replace 'Specially' with 'Especially' and use 'I have traveled' or 'I travel' depending on context.

× I took many pictures of the country's nature or their landmarks.

✓ I took many pictures of the country's natural scenery and its landmarks.

Mixing singular 'the country's' with plural pronoun 'their' is inconsistent. 'Nature' is better expressed as 'natural scenery'. Use parallel structure: 'natural scenery and its landmarks'. Ensure pronoun agreement with 'country' (use 'its').

× I prefer views in rural areas because I like taking picture of nature with my digital camera and I like nature's colorful view.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas because I like taking pictures of nature with my digital camera, and I like nature's colorful views.

'Taking picture' should be plural 'taking pictures'. 'Nature's colorful view' should be plural 'views' to match general meaning. Add a comma before 'and' for clarity. Suggestion: use plural nouns when referring to general activities and multiple scenes.

× I prepare bills in other countries because when I travel to Europe, their history landmarks are very beautiful and the nature is more beautiful to make.

✓ I prefer visiting other countries because when I travel to Europe, the historic landmarks are very beautiful and the natural scenery is even more beautiful.

'I prepare bills' is incorrect and likely a wrong word choice; 'I prefer visiting' fits the question about preference. 'Their history landmarks' should be 'the historic landmarks' or 'its historic landmarks' with correct article and adjective order. 'The nature is more beautiful to make' is ungrammatical; use 'natural scenery is even more beautiful'. Suggestion: choose verbs that match meaning ('prefer visiting') and correct adjective-noun order ('historic landmarks', 'natural scenery').