Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more natural and concise: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct grammar (plural/singular, verb forms) and use more precise vocabulary (e.g., wildlife, animals, photos). Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I'm currently studying photography at school, so I take a class to improve my skills. I especially enjoy photographing wildlife, such as birds and small mammals, because I love animals and natural settings.

Gợi ý: Answer directly with a clear reason and specific details. Remove unclear or irrelevant phrases (e.g., 'watching the World War' is confusing). Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' and give a brief example of what you enjoy seeing in rural areas.

Ví dụ: I prefer rural areas because I enjoy natural scenery and wildlife. For example, I like seeing open fields, forests and birds, which I can photograph more easily than in a city.

Gợi ý: Give a single clear reason and specific examples; avoid repetition and unclear words. Use linking words (for example, because, also) and correct nouns and adjectives (e.g., forests, tall buildings, temples). Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because it offers a mix of landscapes and cultural sites. For example, we have beautiful forests, tall buildings and historic temples, so I can enjoy both nature and architecture.

× I like taking photo, so I take that class.

✓ I like taking photos, so I take that class.

Plurality error: 'photo' should be plural as a general activity: 'taking photos'. Use plural nouns after verbs expressing habitual actions. Suggestion: use 'photos' when referring to photographs in general.

× I like taking photo for the animal because I like animal.

✓ I like taking photos of animals because I like animals.

Preposition and plurality error: use 'of' to indicate the object of photographing ('photos of animals') and plural 'animals' when speaking generally. Also 'photo' -> 'photos'. Suggestion: say 'photos of animals' or 'Pictures of animals'.

× I prefer rural areas because I like watching the World War, wildlife, animals like bird or something like that.

✓ I prefer rural areas because I like seeing wildlife and animals like birds, not the city sights.

Several errors: 'watching the World War' is incorrect contextually and uses wrong verb; 'wildlife' is correct but 'animals like bird' needs plural 'birds'; phrase 'or something like that' is vague. Also 'watching' is wrong verb for observing wildlife — use 'seeing' or 'watching wildlife'. Suggestion: be specific: 'seeing wildlife and animals like birds'.

× So I prefer rural.

✓ So I prefer rural areas.

Incomplete noun phrase: 'rural' is an adjective and needs a noun: 'rural areas'. Suggestion: use the full noun phrase 'rural areas'.

× I prefer my own country because I really like my country because we can so like forest and also like building high building and temple.

✓ I prefer my own country because I really like it: we have forests, tall buildings, and temples.

Repetition and pronoun error: avoid repeating 'my country' — use 'it'. 'We can so like forest' is ungrammatical; use 'we have forests'. 'building high building' word order and duplication wrong — use 'tall buildings'. Also 'temple' should be plural if speaking generally: 'temples'. Suggestion: simplify and use correct nouns and adjective order.

× Or menacing in my country.

✓ Or many different attractions in my country.

Unclear and incorrect word choice: 'menacing' is wrong and changes meaning to threatening. Likely intended 'many scenes' or 'many attractions'. Also sentence fragment needs to be integrated. Suggestion: replace with 'many different attractions' or 'many interesting sights'.