Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Improve clarity, sentence structure and vocabulary. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler sounds, and give one or two concise supporting details using linking words. Use precise words (e.g., buildings, places, capture memories) and keep answers under five sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views. For example, when I visit new buildings or scenic spots, I often take quick photos to capture memorable moments. I find photos help me remember the atmosphere and share experiences with friends.

Gợi ý: Focus on answering directly and use correct vocabulary (urban, rural, rivers, mountains). Remove hesitations and give a reason with a linking word (because/so). Keep to 2–3 polished sentences with specific details.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in rural areas because they are quieter and more natural. For instance, I enjoy seeing rivers and mountains that I rarely find in Tokyo, which makes countryside scenes more relaxing and interesting to photograph.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and explain with a clear reason. Use correct terms (views in my country/other countries) and concise supporting details. Avoid irrelevant job information unless it connects clearly. Use linking words (because/when) and one concrete example.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because they feel familiar and meaningful to me. For example, when I return from work abroad, I enjoy seeing local landscapes and historical sites that remind me of home and my childhood.

× Yes, I like taking pictures at different builds and I also, uh, visit some places I never uh, visited in that place.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different buildings, and I also visit places in those areas that I have never visited before.

The student used incorrect prepositions and words: 'at different builds' should be 'of different buildings' (pictures of something). 'Visited in that place' is awkward; use 'places in those areas that I have never visited before.' Also correct article and noun form 'builds' to 'buildings' and simplify tense with present perfect 'have never visited' to indicate past experience relevant to now.

× I usually, uh, in the move to take some quick pictures, uh, to capture the uh, memorable moments I experienced with.

✓ I usually take quick pictures while I am moving to capture memorable moments I experience.

The original sentence has poor word order and missing/extra words. 'in the move' and 'experienced with' are incorrect. Use 'take quick pictures while I am moving' for the concurrent action and 'to capture memorable moments I experience' for clarity. Keep tense present simple/continuous to match habitual action.

× MMM. I prefer abuse in rural areas more, uh, because, uh, I, I staying here in Tokyo and, uh, I get used to, uh, see the views of ABBA and Rios and they're, uh, seeing their, uh, views. Laura. Yeah. I.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas because I live here in Tokyo and have become used to seeing the urban views.

The sentence contains incorrect words ('abuse' should be 'views') and pronoun/verb issues. 'I staying here' should be 'I live here' or 'I am staying here.' 'Get used to see' should be 'have become used to seeing.' Simplify and correct vocabulary and verb forms to convey the contrast between rural and urban views.

× I prefer abuse in my country than uh, my in in other countries, umm, I am the sales of machine manufacturer, uh, in charge of overseas market and uh, when I uh, get to my country, uh, to under see their abuse in my country, uh, makes.

✓ I prefer views in my country to those in other countries. I work in sales for a machine manufacturer and am in charge of the overseas market, so when I return to my country I get to see local views.

Errors include wrong comparative structure 'prefer X than' (should be 'prefer X to Y'), incorrect word 'abuse' for 'views,' and awkward phrasing 'I am the sales of machine manufacturer.' Use 'I work in sales for a machine manufacturer.' Also 'when I get to my country' should be 'when I return to my country' or 'when I go back' and 'to under see their abuse' is nonsensical; correct to 'I get to see local views.' Ensure prepositions and comparative form are used correctly.