Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Reduce hesitations and redundant phrases, start with a clear topic sentence, and add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Keep answers natural and within 3–4 sentences. Also use more precise vocabulary (e.g., “capture memories,” “special moments”).

Ví dụ: Yes, I love taking photographs of different views. For example, when I travel I often capture landscapes and street scenes to record special moments; later I review these photos to remember the atmosphere and people I met.

Gợi ý: Give a direct topic sentence stating your preference, then explain briefly with clear reasons and an example. Avoid grammar errors and incomplete sentences; use linking words like ‘because’ and ‘for example’. Replace vague phrases with specific descriptions (e.g., “open landscapes,” “quiet villages”).

Ví dụ: I prefer rural views because they offer open landscapes and quieter scenes. For example, in the countryside I can photograph fields and old houses without crowds, which creates calmer and more appealing images.

Gợi ý: Respond directly with a clear position, then support it with concise reasons and a future plan. Fix grammar and reduce hesitations. Use linking phrases like ‘for now’ and ‘after that’. Be specific about what you want to photograph at home and abroad.

Ví dụ: For now I prefer photographing views in my own country because there are many places I haven’t seen yet. After I visit and document those sites, I plan to travel abroad to capture different cultures and landscapes.

× Yes, I love taking photographs of different views. Umm, I think it's a good way to, uh, record my memories of the trip and the travel and, umm, the very happy moment I take the photo, I can uh, you know, just review it uh, from my picture that makes me feel.

✓ Yes, I love taking photographs of different views. I think it's a good way to record my memories of trips and travels, and when I take a photo of a very happy moment, I can review it from my pictures and remember how I felt.

The original sentence had awkward participle and clause structure (e.g., 'the very happy moment I take the photo') and inconsistent noun forms ('the trip and the travel'). Use gerunds and noun plurals correctly: 'taking photographs', 'memories of trips and travels'. Use a clear relative/time clause: 'when I take a photo of a very happy moment' and coordinate clauses properly with conjunctions. This improves readability and grammatical correctness. Suggestion: break long sentences into shorter clauses, use plural forms for general activities (trips, travels), and place the present participle or relative clause immediately after the noun it modifies.

× To be honest, I really like the views in rural areas because I think when I was taking photos of, uh, urban views, umm, I have to taking some people into my pictures and umm, they don't show any happy expression on, on their faces. But rural areas is.

✓ To be honest, I really like the views in rural areas because when I take photos of urban views, I have to include some people in my pictures, and they often do not show happy expressions on their faces. Rural areas are nicer.

Errors: incorrect verb forms and agreement. Use present simple 'when I take' for habitual actions instead of past progressive 'when I was taking'. Use 'have to include' not 'have to taking' (modal + base verb). 'They don't show any happy expression on their faces' is improved to 'they often do not show happy expressions'. 'Rural areas is' is a subject-verb agreement error; 'areas' is plural so use 'are'. Suggestion: for habitual actions use present simple; after 'have to' use base verb; ensure subject and verb agree in number; use plural 'expressions' for general cases.

× While it depends, umm, but uh, right now I haven't see all my countries viewed. So I think maybe it's a better choice for me to uh, and just take your photos, my country's views, you know, all of it. When I was tapped down this, when I have done this, I maybe choose to go abroad.

✓ It depends, but right now I haven't seen all the sights in my country. So I think it's better for me to take photos of all the views in my country first. After I have done that, I might choose to go abroad.

Multiple tense and verb form errors: 'haven't see' should be present perfect 'haven't seen'. 'my countries viewed' is unclear; use 'the sights in my country' or 'views in my country'. 'Take your photos' is incorrect pronoun and phrasing; use 'take photos of all the views in my country'. 'When I was tapped down this' is ungrammatical; likely meant 'after I have done that' or 'after I have finished that'. 'I maybe choose to go abroad' should be 'I might choose to go abroad' (modal usage and word order). Suggestion: use present perfect for actions not completed ('haven't seen'), use 'might' for possibility in the future, and keep pronouns consistent (my country). Break ideas into clear sequential sentences: first do domestic photos, then possibly travel abroad.