Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and correct grammar; open with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, and use linking words for coherence. Correct verb forms (e.g., “I take pictures,” “I took pictures”) and use plural/singular correctly. Add one specific example to make your answer more concrete.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views when I travel. For example, I often photograph coastlines and mountain panoramas because they remind me of peaceful moments; later, when I'm stressed, I look at these photos to relax. Overall, I prefer capturing natural scenes that evoke strong memories.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear preference statement and use correct vocabulary and grammar (e.g., “depends on my mood,” “see” not “saw,” “calm atmosphere” is fine but check collocations). Use linking words like “however” and give a brief reason and a specific detail about each option.

Ví dụ: It depends on my mood: sometimes I enjoy urban views for their bright lights and modern architecture; however, I usually prefer rural areas because the clear night sky and quiet surroundings feel very calming and let me stargaze peacefully.

Gợi ý: Give a direct topic sentence and avoid filler words like “uh.” Use correct articles and plural/singular forms (e.g., “a lot of natural attractions,” “greenery” as uncountable). Mention one specific feature and explain why it appeals to you to add depth.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because we have many natural attractions. For instance, places like Lalbaghchilla and Rangamati offer lush greenery and tranquil village scenery, which I find more relaxing and authentic than many foreign tourist spots.

× Yes, most of the time while travelling I am taking most of the pictures of different views because I think everything goes but memories stay.

✓ Yes, most of the time while travelling I take most of the pictures of different views because I think everything passes but memories remain.

The student used the present continuous 'I am taking' to describe habitual action; English uses the simple present for habits. Also 'goes' and 'stay' are incorrect verb choices for this context; 'passes' and 'remain' fit better. Suggest using simple present for regular activities and choosing verbs that collocate with 'memories'. Grammar problem type ID: 6

× So for memorization I took picture.

✓ So for remembering, I took pictures.

The original sentence has word choice and number errors. 'For memorization' is awkward—use 'for remembering' or 'to remember'. 'Took picture' is singular; the context implies plural 'pictures'. The past tense 'took' is acceptable if referring to a past event. Suggest: 'So to remember, I took pictures.' Grammar problem type ID: 5

× Then when I was so stressed I saw them and feel relaxed and unwind.

✓ Then when I was very stressed I saw them and felt relaxed and unwound.

The sentence mixes past ('was', 'saw') with present ('feel', 'unwind'). Maintain past tense for a past event: 'felt' and 'unwound'. Also replace 'so' with 'very' for naturalness. Suggest keeping verb tense consistent. Grammar problem type ID: 6

× That's why I love to take picture of different views especially natural one.

✓ That's why I love to take pictures of different views, especially natural ones.

'Take picture' should be plural 'take pictures' to match general activity. 'Natural one' should be plural 'natural ones' to agree with 'views'. Ensure noun number agreement. Grammar problem type ID: 1

× It depends on my board because sometimes I want to enjoy the lighting view of the modern city, but most of the time I go to the rural area to saw the night view of the sky which was really amazing because it wears a calm atmosphere.

✓ It depends on my mood because sometimes I want to enjoy the lit-up view of the modern city, but most of the time I go to rural areas to see the night sky, which is really amazing because it has a calm atmosphere.

Multiple issues: 'board' is incorrect word choice; use 'mood'. 'Lighting view' is awkward—use 'lit-up view' or 'illuminated view'. 'Rural area' should be plural 'rural areas' to match general preference. 'To saw' is wrong form; use infinitive 'to see'. 'Night view of the sky' simplifies to 'night sky'. 'Which was' should be 'which is' if describing a general quality; 'wears a calm atmosphere' is incorrect collocation—use 'has a calm atmosphere'. Correct verb forms and prepositions and choose appropriate collocations. Grammar problem type ID: 11

× I would prefer my country because our country is surrounded by a lot of natural things like Lalbaugchilla and the Rangamati, which provides A greenery view for the visitors and most of the time, uh, I really enjoy the greenery scenery of the village also.

✓ I prefer my country because it is surrounded by many natural attractions like Lalbaugchilla and Rangamati, which provide a green view for visitors, and most of the time I really enjoy the green scenery of the villages.

'I would prefer' suggests conditional; simple present 'I prefer' fits general preference. 'A lot of natural things' is informal—use 'natural attractions'. 'Which provides' must agree in number with plural antecedent, so use 'provide'. 'A greenery view' is ungrammatical; use 'a green view' or 'green scenery'. Remove filler 'uh' and correct 'village' to plural if speaking generally. Ensure subject-verb agreement and more natural noun choices. Grammar problem type ID: 4