Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Thí sinh
Absolute AB absolutely. I like taking pictures uh whenever travel. Taking picture helps me Remember Remember special moment and places and I also enjoy sharing pictures on social media with my friends so. I.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Thí sinh
Definitely. I prefer views in, I prefer views in urban areas. Umm, there's something about special. There's something about skyline and interesting building in the city. And I also enjoy walking.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Thí sinh
Absolutely, I like views in my own country more umm because umm I feel more connected the to the scenery in my country and I travel more cheap and easier in my.
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Điểm: 58.0Gợi ý: 回答要更自然简洁并遵循结构:先用一句主题句直接回答,然后用1–2个具体原因或例子支持,避免重复和口头禅(如“uh”、“remember remember”)。注意时态和单数/复数形式(e.g. “taking pictures”)。可以加入连接词让句子更连贯。多练习用完整句子并控制在最多5句内。
Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I enjoy taking pictures whenever I travel because it helps me remember special moments and places. For example, I often photograph landscapes and local markets, then share the best shots with my friends on social media. This way I can look back on trips and also get feedback from others.
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Điểm: 62.0Gợi ý: 回答要更流畅并避免重复,先直接给出偏好,再用一到两句具体原因支持。使用合适的词汇描述城市景观(如 “skyline”, “architecture”, “vibrant streets”),并用连接词(e.g. “because”, “for example”)增强连贯性。不要多次停顿或重复句子开头。
Ví dụ: I prefer urban views because I love the skyline and distinctive architecture of cities. The bustling streets and varied buildings make walking around exciting, and I often discover interesting cafés or photo spots while exploring.
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答需要更完整的句子并纠正语法错误(例如“travel more cheap”应为“travel more cheaply”或“it’s cheaper to travel”)。先给出直接回答,再给出两点具体原因并举例。避免结尾不完整,确保信息完整。
Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because I feel more connected to the scenery and culture. Also, it’s usually cheaper and easier to travel at home, so I can visit more places and return often to take new photos.
× Absolute AB absolutely.
✓ Absolutely.
原句“Absolute AB absolutely.” 结构混乱,包含重复和拼写错误。应使用单词“Absolutely”来完整表达肯定含义。建议简洁回答,避免重复或多余字符。
× I like taking pictures uh whenever travel.
✓ I like taking pictures whenever I travel.
原句中缺少主语“I”在从句中,导致动名词短语不完整。这里应使用一般现在时表达习惯性动作,随时间状语从句需有主语。建议在从句中加上主语:“whenever I travel”。
× Taking picture helps me Remember Remember special moment and places and I also enjoy sharing pictures on social media with my friends so. I.
✓ Taking pictures helps me remember special moments and places, and I also enjoy sharing pictures on social media with my friends.
原句存在多处问题:名词复数和大小写错误(picture -> pictures;Remember 重复且不应大写)、时态与数不一致(special moment 应为复数 special moments)、句子断裂和多余词(末尾的 “so. I.”)。已按语义重组为完整句。建议注意名词单复数、不要重复单词、句子保持完整。
× Umm, there's something about special. There's something about skyline and interesting building in the city.
✓ Umm, there's something special about the skyline and interesting buildings in the city.
原句“两句重复”且词序不当。固定表达是“there's something about X”或“there's something special about X”。名词“building”应为复数“buildings”。把形容词放在名词前并合并为一句更自然。建议学习固定搭配并注意名词单复数。
× And I also enjoy walking.
✓ I also enjoy walking in the city.
原句本身语法正确,但在上下文中略显不完整,添加“in the city”可与前句衔接更清楚(可选)。解释:句子结构无误,建议根据语境补充信息使表达更完整。
× Absolutely, I like views in my own country more umm because umm I feel more connected the to the scenery in my country and I travel more cheap and easier in my.
✓ Absolutely, I prefer views in my own country because I feel more connected to the scenery there, and traveling is cheaper and easier for me at home.
原句存在词序与介词错误(“connected the to”顺序错误)、形容词/副词使用不当(“more cheap and easier”应为“cheaper and easier”)、句子末尾不完整(缺少“home”或“my country”完整短语)。已将句子重组为自然表达。建议注意介词搭配(connected to)、比较级规则(one-word comparatives like cheaper)以及句子完整性。