Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and focus on answering directly. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific reasons with a linking word. Avoid repetition and finish the answer. Also correct small grammatical errors (e.g., “a country like Nepal” → “a country like Nepal” or simply “Nepal”).

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. For example, growing up in Nepal exposed me to mountains and terraced fields, so I often photograph landscapes to capture their colors and moods. In addition, these photos help me remember special places when I travel.

Gợi ý: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence, then give specific supporting details and use a linking word. Fix grammar and fluency (e.g., remove “Nepal we have”). Mention concrete examples of rural scenes you enjoy to make the answer more vivid.

Ví dụ: I prefer rural views. For instance, in Nepal I love photographing terraced rice fields and small mountain villages because they have unique textures and peaceful light. Moreover, rural scenes often change with the seasons, which keeps my photography interesting.

Gợi ý: Be specific and avoid vague phrases and fillers (e.g., “bills”, “uh”, “that's it”). State your preference clearly, give reasons and one specific example, and use linking words to connect ideas. Use natural vocabulary such as “natural person” → “a nature lover” or “I love natural scenery.”

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because I am a nature lover and Nepal’s landscapes feel familiar and meaningful to me. For example, I enjoy watching sunrise over the Himalayas, which I rarely find elsewhere. Therefore, I usually choose local scenes when I take photos.

× I do like taking pictures of different views because I was born in the country like Nepal and I'm very happy for it.

✓ I like taking pictures of different views because I was born in a country like Nepal and I'm very happy about it.

The preposition 'in' with 'the country like Nepal' is incorrect here; use 'a country like Nepal' to indicate an example of a country (article and noun phrase correction). Also 'happy for it' is not natural; use 'happy about it' to express being pleased about something. Suggestion: use 'a' before countable singular nouns when referring to one of many, and use 'happy about' to indicate feeling pleased concerning something.

× I like, I do like taking pictures because you can.

✓ I like taking pictures because you can capture moments and scenery.

The original sentence ends abruptly with 'you can,' which is an incomplete clause (sentence structure error). Provide a clear object or action after 'can' to complete the thought. Suggestion: follow modal verbs or verbs like 'can' with an appropriate verb phrase, e.g., 'you can capture moments and scenery.'

× I prefer taking views of rural areas because Nepal we have lots of rural areas and different types of view so you can enjoy it.

✓ I prefer taking photos of rural areas because in Nepal we have many rural areas and different kinds of scenery, so you can enjoy them.

Several issues: 'taking views of' is unnatural; use 'taking photos of' or 'photographing.' The clause order 'Nepal we have' is incorrect; add 'in' to form 'in Nepal, we have.' 'Lots of' is informal but acceptable; 'many' is better. 'Different types of view' should be 'different kinds of scenery.' Also pronoun agreement: 'it' should be 'them' to match plural 'areas/scenery.' Suggestion: reorder clauses for clarity and match plural pronouns.

× I prefer bills in my own country because, uh, I'm a very natural person and I love it and I'm very grateful to be here.

✓ I prefer hills in my own country because I'm a very down-to-earth person, I love them, and I'm very grateful to be here.

'Bills' is a spelling error; context indicates 'hills.' 'A very natural person' is not idiomatic in this context; 'down-to-earth' or 'a person who loves nature' is clearer. Pronoun agreement: refer to 'hills' with 'them' not 'it.' Suggestion: correct the noun to 'hills,' choose an idiomatic adjective, and match pronouns to plural nouns.