Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more natural and concise: use present tense, correct grammar, and avoid redundancy. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details with linking words. Fix unclear phrases (e.g. “a splendid 1”) and incorrect verb forms.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. For example, I often photograph the city’s riverfront at sunset because the light creates beautiful colors. I also like candid shots of people and animals, as they capture real emotions and everyday life.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and correct confusing phrases. State your preference clearly, then give 1–2 specific reasons using linking words (e.g. ‘because’, ‘however’). Avoid contradictory statements in the same answer.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in rural areas because they are quieter and more natural. For example, countryside landscapes offer wide open fields and traditional villages, which are less crowded and more peaceful than busy urban streets.

Gợi ý: Be concise and use correct tense and fewer repetitions. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give specific reasons and an example. Use linking words like ‘because’ and ‘for example’ to organize ideas.

Ví dụ: At the moment I prefer views in my own country because I haven’t traveled abroad yet. For example, India has diverse landscapes and rich cultural scenes that I still want to explore, such as historic cities and mountain regions.

× I loved taking pictures of different views, especially as sceneries present at my city which is a splendid 1.

✓ I love taking pictures of different views, especially the scenery in my city, which is splendid.

The sentence has tense inconsistency and awkward adjective use. 'Loved' suggests past; the question asks general preference so present 'love' is appropriate (Present tense issue ID 6 applies but only correcting types from list—here main problem is adjective/adverb use and wording). 'Sceneries present at my city' is incorrect English; use 'the scenery in my city'. The clause 'which is a splendid 1' is ungrammatical — replace with 'which is splendid'. Suggestion: use simple, natural noun phrases ('the scenery in my city') and keep verb tense consistent with the question (present simple for habits).

× And I also love to take real life pictures of how humans and other animals go on with their lives.

✓ I also like to take candid photos of people and animals going about their lives.

Use of 'real life pictures' and 'how humans and other animals go on with their lives' is awkward. 'Candid photos' or 'real-life photos' are more natural. Replace 'humans' with 'people' for naturalness and use the present participle 'going about their lives' to show ongoing actions. Maintain present simple habit context.

× I prefer using rewrite us over urban areas as the views are most scenic and they are just very simple for and.

✓ I prefer rural areas to urban areas because the views are more scenic and simpler.

Sentence is garbled: 'using rewrite us' is nonsensical and likely intended 'rural areas'. Use comparative structure 'prefer X to Y'. 'Most scenic' vs 'more scenic' depends on comparison between two types; 'more scenic' is correct when comparing rural and urban. 'Simpler' is a clearer adjective than 'just very simple for and'. Suggestion: choose correct words ('rural') and use 'prefer X to Y' for comparisons (Comparative/sentence structure).

× For example, urban areas are so overcrowded, but On the contrary, rural areas are not so crowded and they offer a more natural way of presentation.

✓ For example, urban areas are very overcrowded; in contrast, rural areas are less crowded and offer a more natural setting.

'But On the contrary' is redundant and capitalized incorrectly. Use 'in contrast' or 'on the other hand'. 'A more natural way of presentation' is unnatural; 'a more natural setting' is idiomatic. Also use consistent punctuation. Suggestion: avoid redundant conjunctions and choose idiomatic phrases.

× For now I prefer views in my own country as I have not visited any other countries and also I would like to visit even more parts of our country and and explore the views which are present in my own country because my country India is a very beautiful and cultural one for us especially.

✓ For now I prefer views in my own country because I have not visited other countries, and I would like to visit more parts of India to explore the views here, since India is a very beautiful and culturally rich country.

Sentence is long, repetitive and has errors: double 'and and', repeating 'my country' and 'present in my own country'. Use 'because' for reason, remove repetition, and use 'culturally rich' instead of 'cultural one for us especially'. Keep present tense 'prefer' and use present perfect 'have not visited' correctly. Suggestion: simplify sentences, avoid repetition, and use idiomatic adjectives ('culturally rich').