Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be clearer and more concise. Start with a direct topic sentence (Yes, I do.), then give one or two specific reasons using correct grammar and linking words. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases (e.g. “the size that I met”). Use concrete details about what you remember (feelings, memories, places) and keep your answer to no more than five sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I enjoy taking photos because they help me remember places I have visited and the emotions I felt there. For example, a picture of a seaside sunset reminds me of the sound of waves and the warm breeze. Also, photos let me share those memories with friends later.

Gợi ý: Improve grammar and clarity; give a clear preference sentence followed by specific reasons with linking words. Avoid unintelligible phrases like “love medicine is less rare.” Mention concrete features you like in rural areas (e.g. quiet, green fields, fresh air) and use linking words such as because or because of.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in rural areas because they are quieter and greener. For example, I love seeing wide fields, forests and small rivers because they feel peaceful and refresh my mind. In contrast, urban views are often noisy and crowded.

Gợi ý: Give a complete, grammatically correct response: state your preference, then support it with specific reasons and an example. Complete any unfinished thoughts (e.g. “I feel much” is incomplete). Use linking words like because and for example, and limit to up to five sentences.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because it has many historic sites and beautiful landscapes. For example, visiting an ancient temple makes me feel connected to my culture and curious about the past. These sites often have detailed architecture and interesting stories that I don't want to miss.

× Yes, I like taking pictures of different views and the main reason is let's take picture can help me can help me remember the size that I met and I.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views, and the main reason is that taking pictures helps me remember the scenes I saw.

The original sentence has sentence structure errors and redundancy. 'let's take picture' is incorrect here; the intended idea is 'taking pictures helps me...'. Use a noun clause 'that taking pictures helps me...' and correct verb form 'helps' to agree with singular noun 'taking pictures' as a singular activity. Remove repeated phrases 'can help me' and unclear phrase 'the size that I met' and replace with 'the scenes I saw' for clarity. Suggestion: simplify to a clear subject + verb + object structure and avoid repetition.

× From my perspectives, I prefer rural areas view and love medicine is less rare, is much more, it's much more vivid and has I love the green.

✓ From my perspective, I prefer rural views because nature is more abundant; it is much more vivid and I love the green scenery.

Multiple errors: use singular 'perspective' not 'perspectives' when stating personal view. 'rural areas view' should be 'rural views' or 'views in rural areas'. The phrase 'love medicine is less rare' is incorrect and appears to be a mis-selection of words; likely intended 'nature is more abundant' or similar. Rephrase to logical clauses: 'because nature is more abundant; it is much more vivid and I love the green scenery.' Also fix pronoun/order. Suggestion: choose appropriate nouns (nature, scenery) and use clear conjunctions ('because') to connect reasons.

× I prefer the view in our country because my country has many historic sites and it's very beautiful and full of the story. Every time when I go through the site, I feel much.

✓ I prefer the views in my country because it has many historic sites; it is very beautiful and full of history. Whenever I visit a site, I feel very moved.

Errors include awkward noun phrases and incomplete clause. Use 'views' plural or 'the view' consistently; 'in our country' is acceptable but 'my country' is more natural here. 'Full of the story' is ungrammatical; use 'full of history'. 'Every time when I go through the site' is awkward; use 'Whenever I visit a site'. 'I feel much' is incomplete—specify emotion, e.g. 'I feel very moved' or 'I feel deeply touched'. Suggestion: complete the emotion and use idiomatic verbs like 'visit' and nouns like 'history'.