Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Reduce repetition, correct grammar, and add a clear topic sentence plus one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Keep it within four to five sentences. For example, correct verb forms ("love taking"), avoid repeating "sceneries," and give specific examples of locations or reasons why you photograph them.

Ví dụ: Yes, I love taking photos of different views because they capture unique moments and moods. For example, I often photograph gardens for their colours and waterfalls for their movement. Also, I try different angles to make ordinary scenes look dramatic, which helps me improve my composition skills.

Gợi ý: Make the answer direct, fix repetition and article errors, and add one specific reason with a linking word. Mention a concrete example (e.g., skyline, illuminated streets) to make the answer more vivid and natural.

Ví dụ: I prefer urban views because cities offer striking architecture and vibrant night scenes. For instance, I enjoy photographing skylines and illuminated streets since the lights create interesting contrasts. Moreover, the variety of buildings gives me many composition options.

Gợi ý: Avoid redundancy and correct grammar ("a lot of different places," "different kinds of views"). Provide one clear reason and a specific example or comparison with other countries to add depth. Use linking words like "because" and "for example."

Ví dụ: I usually prefer views in my own country because it has a wide variety of landscapes and well-maintained parks. For example, I can visit coastal cliffs one weekend and botanical gardens the next, which gives me diverse subjects to photograph. Although foreign places are exciting, I know local spots better and can capture them at the best times.

× I love to taking pictures in different views and angles because in different views there are many sceneries and I love to capture many sceneries and beautiful pictures like gardens, water slides, waterfalls.

✓ I love taking pictures from different viewpoints and angles because there are many scenes to capture, such as gardens, waterslides, and waterfalls.

The phrase 'love to taking' mixes the infinitive 'to' with the -ing form; after verbs like 'love' we use either the infinitive ('love to take') or the gerund ('love taking'), but not 'to' + gerund. Also 'views' is better phrased as 'viewpoints' and 'sceneries' is nonstandard; use 'scenes'. Use parallel noun forms in a list and correct 'water slides' to 'waterslides' or 'waterfalls' as appropriate. Suggestion: use 'I love taking' or 'I love to take', and prefer 'scenes' and clear, parallel lists.

× I usually prefer views in urban areas because in urban areas there are lot of buildings and night views.

✓ I usually prefer views in urban areas because there are a lot of buildings and attractive night views.

The phrase 'there are lot of' is missing the quantifier 'a' before 'lot'; also 'night views' can be described as 'attractive night views' for clarity. Ensure the plural noun 'buildings' is correct and include the article 'a' with 'lot'. Suggestion: use 'there are a lot of' when referring to many countable items.

× I always love to love to see night views and some more things.

✓ I always love to see night views and other sights.

The original repeats 'love to' and is redundant ('love to love to'); correct structure is 'love to see' or 'love seeing'. 'Some more things' is vague; use 'other sights' or specific examples. Suggestion: avoid repetition and choose either the infinitive ('love to see') or the gerund ('love seeing').

× I usually prefer views in my own country because in my country there are lot of different places and different kind of views to visit them and there are such beautiful parks to to show them and there are many of them.

✓ I usually prefer views in my own country because there are a lot of different places and kinds of views to visit, and many beautiful parks to see.

Again 'there are lot of' needs 'a'. 'Different kind of views' should be pluralized as 'kinds of views'. 'To visit them' and 'to to show them' are awkward and contain a repeated 'to'. Simplify to 'places and kinds of views to visit' and 'parks to see'. Also 'there are many of them' is redundant when 'many beautiful parks' is already stated. Suggestion: include 'a' with 'lot', pluralize 'kind' to 'kinds' when referring to multiple types, remove duplicate words, and avoid redundancy.