Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng rõ ràng nhưng còn lặp từ, cấu trúc lủng củng và quá dài so với quy tắc (nhiều hơn 5 câu và nhiều từ lặp). Hãy mở đầu bằng câu chủ đề ngắn gọn, sau đó đưa một hoặc hai chi tiết cụ thể, dùng liên từ hợp lý và tránh lặp từ. Ngoài ra cần chú ý phát âm và ngữ pháp (thì và số ít/đại từ).

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views because they capture the atmosphere of a place. For example, I often photograph both animals and landscapes to show how nature and surroundings interact. This gives me a more complete memory of where I’ve been.

Gợi ý: Bạn trả lời rõ ý thích nhưng lặp từ, ngữ pháp và ngắt nghỉ kém (nhiều từ thừa như “most likely”, “bustling bustling”, “from from”). Hãy nói ngắn gọn: nêu preference, đưa một lý do cụ thể và một ví dụ, dùng liên từ như “because” hoặc “for example”. Chú ý câu đơn và tránh lặp lại.

Ví dụ: I prefer urban views because the city skyline and busy streets are more interesting to photograph. For example, I often visit rooftops to capture the contrast between tall buildings and people below.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn không rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi lặp, ngữ pháp và mơ hồ (“refer”, “to see how to see”). Hãy đưa câu chủ đề rõ ràng (ví dụ: I like both, but I prefer...), lý do cụ thể cho mỗi lựa chọn và kết luận ngắn. Tránh lời nói thừa và sửa các động từ/đại từ cho đúng.

Ví dụ: I enjoy views both in my country and abroad, but I prefer visiting other countries because I like observing different cultures and city layouts. For instance, seeing how people use public spaces in Tokyo or Barcelona often inspires my photography.

× I do like taking pictures from different views because it would give me a overall view.

✓ I do like taking pictures of different views because it gives me an overall view.

The verb 'give' should be in present simple 'gives' to match the habitual present 'I do like'; also use 'of' with 'pictures' and 'an' before 'overall view'. Use singular verb for 'it' and correct article usage. Suggestions: use present simple for habitual actions, use 'pictures of' not 'from', and include the article 'an' before a noun beginning with a vowel sound.

× Overall picture of the view of the place that I take that I have taken picture from the animals to to a scenery.

✓ An overall picture of the place I have taken pictures of, including animals and scenery.

Original has fragmentary structure and redundant words. Use a complete noun phrase with correct preposition 'of' and plural 'pictures' when referring to multiple items. Remove duplicate words and reorder for clarity. Suggestions: form complete sentences with a clear subject and verb, avoid repetition, and use plural when appropriate.

× It would be great to have it all into a picture.

✓ It would be great to have it all in one picture.

Use the fixed expression 'in one picture' rather than 'into a picture'. 'In one picture' correctly indicates inclusion. Keep conditional 'would' is acceptable here as a hypothetical. Suggestions: learn common collocations such as 'in one picture'.

× I prefer views in the urban areas most likely, Most likely because of the bustling bustling environment atmosphere and also from from this phone views from tall buildings for example, I I like to go, I like going to the rooftops to watch the view.

✓ I prefer views in urban areas, most likely because of the bustling atmosphere and the views from tall buildings. For example, I like going to rooftops to see the view.

Remove unnecessary definite article 'the' before 'urban areas' when speaking generally. Eliminate repeated words and use the noun 'atmosphere' without 'environment' duplicate. 'From from this phone views' is unclear and likely incorrect; simplified to 'the views from tall buildings.' Use consistent verb form 'like going.' Suggestions: avoid repetition, remove unnecessary articles for general statements, and simplify unclear phrasing.

× Most likely because of the bustling bustling environment atmosphere and also from from this phone views from tall buildings for example, I I like to go, I like going to the rooftops to watch the view.

✓ Most likely because of the bustling atmosphere and the views from tall buildings. For example, I like going to rooftops to see the view.

Preposition 'from' was duplicated and misused ('from this phone views' is incorrect). Use 'views from tall buildings' to indicate vantage point. Use 'to see' rather than 'to watch' for scenery. Suggestions: use 'from' once to indicate origin of view; choose 'see' for viewing a landscape.

× I refer views in other countries and in my own country because I want to see the bustling views from from other cities, from other country cities, and to see how to see what their people were doing.

✓ I prefer views in other countries as well as in my own country because I want to see the bustling scenes in other cities and observe what people there are doing.

Use 'prefer' not 'refer'. 'Other country cities' is ungrammatical; use 'other cities' or 'cities in other countries'. Replace 'to see how to see what' with 'observe what' and correct tense agreement ('are doing' for present ongoing actions). Suggestions: choose correct verbs ('prefer'), use clearer noun phrases for locations, and use present continuous for ongoing activities.

× Another thing to do is trying to see from yeah.

✓ Another thing I do is try to see the local life.

After 'Another thing to do is' use the base form 'try' (not the -ing form) or rephrase as 'I try to...'. 'Trying' after 'is' creates a nonstandard structure here. Also clarify 'from yeah' to a meaningful phrase. Suggestions: use 'is to + base verb' or 'I do + verb-ing' consistently, and avoid filler words like 'yeah' in formal answers.