Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Give a direct, present-tense response with one clear reason, avoid repetition, and keep it within 3–4 concise sentences. Use linking words like "because" or "so" to connect ideas, and correct basic grammar (e.g., use present simple: "I don't like"). If necessary, mention one specific detail to support your opinion.

Ví dụ: No, I don't usually take pictures of views because photography is not one of my hobbies. I also don't have a camera or a spare phone, so I rarely take photos when I travel.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear topic sentence stating your preference (e.g., "I prefer rural areas"). Provide 1–2 specific reasons using linking words such as "because" and "also," and correct grammar (subject-verb agreement and prepositions). Avoid contradictory points (you mentioned good technology and less population together—explain clearly).

Ví dụ: I prefer rural areas because they are quieter and have less noise pollution. I also like them because living costs are lower and communities feel more relaxed compared with busy cities.

Gợi ý: Answer directly using present simple or conditional ("I would prefer"). Give one or two clear reasons, avoid repetition, and use linking words like "because" and "so". Improve grammar (use "there are not many good job opportunities" rather than "not better opportunities"). Keep it concise and specific—mention a concrete reason or example.

Ví dụ: I would prefer to go to another country because there are more job and study opportunities abroad. For example, many countries offer higher salaries and better training programs, so I could improve my career prospects.

× No, I didn't like to take pictures of different views as that is not come in my hobby and I never liked that much activities and and I didn't have any camera to take pictures and I have not my personal spare phone to take any other pictures for that.

✓ No, I didn't like taking pictures of different views because that is not part of my hobbies. I never liked those kinds of activities, and I didn't have a camera or a spare personal phone to take pictures.

Multiple past-tense and verb form errors: 'didn't like to take' is awkward; use 'didn't like taking' for preference in past. 'is not come in my hobby' is incorrect phrasing and tense; correct to 'is not part of my hobbies'. 'that much activities' should be 'those kinds of activities' (plural and correct determiner). 'I have not my personal spare phone' mixes present perfect and word order; correct to 'I didn't have a camera or a spare personal phone'. Suggestion: keep consistent past tense, use correct noun phrases (part of my hobbies, those kinds of activities), and simplify coordinating conjunctions to avoid run-on sentences.

× I will choose your areas because it have good opportunities of job, better salary options and good technology and less population is so the noise pollution is also less as compared to the urban India so I love rural areas.

✓ I prefer rural areas because they have good job opportunities, better salary options, and good technology. With a smaller population, there is also less noise pollution compared to urban India, so I love rural areas.

Tense and agreement issues: 'I will choose your areas' is inappropriate for a general preference; use present simple 'I prefer'. 'it have' is subject-verb disagreement; 'they have' matches plural 'rural areas'. 'opportunities of job' should be 'job opportunities'. 'less population is so the noise pollution is also less' is ungrammatical order; rephrase to 'With a smaller population, there is also less noise pollution'. Keep present simple for general facts and ensure subject-verb agreement and correct noun phrases.

× I will prefer to go to the other country because in my country there is not better opportunities of job and not not good, not good salary options and we have to do so much hard work in the office. So I will prefer to go to the other country for my study and for job opportunities also.

✓ I would prefer to go to another country because there are not as many good job opportunities or good salary options in my country, and we have to work very hard in the office. So I would prefer to go to another country for my studies and for job opportunities.

Modal/tense and grammatical issues: Repeated use of 'I will prefer' is unnatural for preference; use 'I would prefer' or present 'I prefer'. 'in my country there is not better opportunities of job' has number and article errors; use 'there are not as many good job opportunities'. Repetition 'not not good, not good salary options' is incorrect; simplify to 'not as many good ... or good salary options'. 'for my study' should be plural 'for my studies'. Suggestion: use conditional 'would prefer' for polite hypothetical preferences, correct subject-verb agreement ('there are'), and use standard collocations ('job opportunities', 'salary options', 'for my studies').