Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Thí sinh
Indeed, I like taking pictures of different views. Well, I have also passion of taking picture of different views because they give peace to my mind and my heart. I love taking pictures of different views.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Thí sinh
Are you always prep prefers using rural areas? Because in rural areas there's various type of trees and plants so the view is so good that we can't see in urban areas.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Thí sinh
I prefer viewing my own country because there are many places that I visited and see many type of views which looks really amazing and fantastic. I love seeing you in my own country.
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Điểm: 64.0Gợi ý: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repeating the same idea, and correct phrases (e.g., "I have a passion for taking pictures"). Add one brief specific detail about what kinds of views you enjoy and why using a linking word.
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. For example, I especially like coastal sunrises because the changing light creates peaceful colors that relax me.
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Điểm: 52.0Gợi ý: Answer directly and use correct grammar and linking words. Begin with a clear preference, then give one or two specific reasons with a linking word like "because" or "so". Avoid unclear phrases and questions addressed back to the examiner.
Ví dụ: I prefer views in rural areas because there are many trees, fields and open spaces, so the scenery feels more peaceful and natural than in the city.
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Điểm: 56.0Gợi ý: Give a direct, grammatical response and include a specific reason or example. Use linking words like "because" and avoid vague or incorrect phrases (e.g., "I love seeing you"). Keep it concise and mention a particular place or type of view.
Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because I know many beautiful spots, such as the mountain lakes near my hometown, which look amazing and familiar to me.
× Well, I have also passion of taking picture of different views because they give peace to my mind and my heart.
✓ Well, I also have a passion for taking pictures of different views because they bring peace to my mind and heart.
The sentence uses incorrect prepositions and articles: 'have also passion of' should be 'also have a passion for'. 'Taking picture' needs plural 'pictures' to match general activity. 'Give peace to my mind and my heart' is grammatical but 'bring peace to my mind and heart' is more natural and concise. Suggestion: use 'a passion for' and plural 'pictures' for general activities.
× I love taking pictures of different views.
✓ I love taking pictures of different views.
This sentence is correct and needs no grammatical change. It already uses proper plural 'pictures' and no article errors. No action required.
× Are you always prep prefers using rural areas?
✓ Do you always prefer rural areas?
The original mixes question forms and contains an irrelevant fragment 'prep' and wrong verb form 'prefers' after an auxiliary. For present simple questions use 'Do you' + base verb: 'Do you always prefer rural areas?'. Remove the extraneous word 'prep'.
× Because in rural areas there's various type of trees and plants so the view is so good that we can't see in urban areas.
✓ Because in rural areas there are various types of trees and plants, the views are so beautiful compared to those in urban areas.
Problems: 'there's' (there is) is singular but should be plural for 'various types', so use 'there are' (subject-verb agreement). 'Various type' should be 'various types' (plural). 'So the view is so good that we can't see in urban areas' is awkward and ungrammatical; better to say 'the views are so beautiful compared to those in urban areas.' Also replace 'can't see' with 'are not found' or 'are less common'. Suggestion: match plurality and use comparative phrasing.
× I prefer viewing my own country because there are many places that I visited and see many type of views which looks really amazing and fantastic.
✓ I prefer visiting my own country because there are many places I have visited and seen, and many types of views that look really amazing and fantastic.
Mixed and incorrect verb tenses: 'there are many places that I visited and see' mixes past and present; use present perfect 'I have visited and seen' to connect past actions to the present preference. 'Many type of views' should be 'many types of views' (plural). 'Which looks' refers to 'views' (plural) so verb should be 'look'. Also 'prefer viewing my own country' is unnatural; 'prefer visiting my own country' is clearer.
× I love seeing you in my own country.
✓ I love showing you my country. OR I love seeing you in my country if addressing the listener visiting me.
The original likely intends either 'I love showing you my country' (offering to show someone around) or 'I love seeing you in my country' (if the listener visits). 'Seeing you in my own country' is ambiguous; 'own' is unnecessary if context is clear. Choose wording to match intended meaning and ensure pronoun 'you' fits the situation.