Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Сократите и упростите ответ, избегайте грамматических ошибок и тавтологии; начните с чётного утверждения, затем добавьте одно-два конкретных примера. Обратите внимание на правильное использование времён и согласование подлежащего и глагола (например, «I usually take»), а также на артикуляцию названий и мест. Уберите повторяющиеся слова («for the for instance»).

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I usually take photos of interesting views, especially tall buildings and scenic spots. For example, last summer I photographed a place called Rainstone because its architecture and colors looked very striking.

Gợi ý: Отвечайте прямо и стройно: начните с чёткой темы, затем добавьте одно-два конкретных объяснения с логическими связками. Избегайте повторов («my my») и ненужных пауз («uh»). Используйте связки (for example, because, such as) корректно и завершайте мысль (например, укажите, почему вам нравятся высотные здания).

Ví dụ: I prefer urban views because I enjoy the dynamic feel of cities. For example, in my town and nearby city there are many impressive tall buildings and lively streets, which I find more exciting than quiet countryside scenes.

Gợi ý: Выражайте предпочтение ясно и объясняйте причину кратко и последовательно. Избегайте ошибок в словах (например, «roofs» вместо «views») и повторов («in another in other country»). Дайте конкретный пример поездки и опишите детали с использованием связок (for example, when I visited...).

Ví dụ: I prefer views in other countries because they often look different and interesting. For example, when I visited Russia last year I loved the long streets and tall buildings lit up at night, which created a very beautiful atmosphere.

× Of course, I usually are taking pictures of different views for the for instance some high buildings or beautiful places such as Rainstone in summer country.

✓ Of course, I usually take pictures of different views, for instance, tall buildings or beautiful places such as rainstones in the countryside during summer.

The original sentence incorrectly uses the present continuous 'are taking' with the adverb 'usually'. Habitual actions should use the simple present ('take'). Remove duplicate words ('for the for instance') and correct noun forms and articles: 'rainstones' (if a proper name keep capitalization; otherwise 'rainstones' or better 'rainy scenes' depending on meaning) and 'the countryside' for 'summer country'. Also add commas for clarity and correct word order. Suggestion: use simple present for habits and proofread for repeated words and article usage.

× This is I prefer views in urban areas.

✓ I prefer views in urban areas.

The phrase 'This is' is unnecessary and ungrammatical here. The speaker should use the simple present 'I prefer' to express a general preference. Remove extraneous words to make a clear statement.

× For instance my my town or nearby city.

✓ For instance, my town or a nearby city.

There is a duplicated word 'my my'. Also the noun 'nearby city' needs an article: use 'a nearby city' because the speaker refers to an unspecified city. Add a comma after 'For instance' for clarity.

× There are a lot of beautiful views of city and uh, such as tall buildings which.

✓ There are a lot of beautiful views of the city, such as tall buildings.

When referring to a specific city (the one previously mentioned), use the definite article 'the city'. The clause 'which' at the end is incomplete and should be removed. Simplify the sentence and remove filler 'uh' for clarity.

× I prefer roofs in another in other country because, uh, one year ago I went to Russia country is a lot of beautiful views such as, uh, long streets or tall buildings, uh, in the night there a lot of, uh, beautiful lights.

✓ I prefer views in other countries because, one year ago I went to Russia and there were a lot of beautiful sights, such as long streets and tall buildings, and at night there were many beautiful lights.

Multiple issues: 'roofs' is likely incorrect word choice; use 'views' or 'sights'. 'In another in other country' has duplication and wrong preposition—use 'in other countries' or 'in another country'. 'Russia country' is incorrect; use 'Russia' or 'the country of Russia' and ensure correct word order. Past events should use past tense: 'I went' and 'there were' (not 'is'). Use 'sights' or 'views' instead of repeating 'views' awkwardly. Replace 'in the night' with 'at night'. Use 'many' for countable 'lights'. Remove filler 'uh' and adjust punctuation. Suggest practicing accurate word choice (views vs roofs), correct prepositions, and consistent tense.