Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is natural and expressive, but it's a little long and slightly repetitive. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two concise supporting details using linking words. Also watch small grammar issues (e.g., use a conjunction correctly and avoid run-on sentences).

Ví dụ: Yes, I love taking photos of beautiful views because it gives me a lot of pleasure. For example, I often rewatch old pictures to remember trips and special moments, which suits my nostalgic personality.

Gợi ý: Your meaning is clear but the answer is repetitive and contains grammatical errors and long clauses. Give a direct topic sentence, then one reason with a linking word. Avoid repeating the same idea and correct verb/tense and pronoun usage.

Ví dụ: I prefer urban views to rural ones because I live mostly in the countryside and want a change. For instance, I enjoy city architecture and busy streets when I visit towns, which feel more exciting than my everyday surroundings.

Gợi ý: Good idea but the answer has awkward phrasing and minor grammar mistakes. Provide a clear topic sentence, one or two specific reasons, and avoid unclear words like 'static aesthetically pleasant.' Use linking words (e.g., because, for example) and correct word order.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in other countries because I enjoy foreign cultures and diverse architecture. For example, when I visit big cities abroad I see a variety of styles and details that we don't have in my small Russian town.

× Yes, moreover, I adore taking pictures of picturesque views, it always gives me pleasure and I do love rewatching pictures from the past as I'm a really nostalgic person.

✓ Yes. Moreover, I adore taking pictures of picturesque views; it always gives me pleasure, and I love rewatching pictures from the past because I am a very nostalgic person.

Run-on sentence and awkward adverb/adjective use. The original combines independent clauses with commas, so use a period or semicolon and add a coordinating conjunction. Replace 'I do love' with the simpler 'I love' and 'a really nostalgic person' with 'a very nostalgic person' for more natural adjective use. Suggested improvement: split long sentences into shorter clauses and use standard adverb/adjective choices.

× Frankly speaking, I would rather watch urban views more than rural ones because I'm already fed up with the villages and countryside because I most of the time I live in such areas that's why I would prefer urban ones.

✓ Frankly speaking, I would rather see urban views than rural ones because I am already fed up with villages and the countryside; I live in such areas most of the time, so I prefer urban scenes.

Multiple sentence-structure problems: redundant comparative expressions ('would rather...more than'), repeated 'because', misplaced phrases, and informal 'watch' for 'see' or 'photograph'. Improve by removing redundancy, placing time phrase 'most of the time' correctly, and joining ideas with appropriate conjunctions or punctuation. Suggested improvement: avoid repeating conjunctions, use precise verbs ('see' or 'photograph'), and reorder time expressions near the verb they modify.

× To be completely honest, I am a big fan of abroad culture and architecture.

✓ To be completely honest, I am a big fan of foreign culture and architecture.

Incorrect adjective form 'abroad' used before a noun; 'abroad' is an adverb. Use the adjective 'foreign' to modify 'culture and architecture'. Suggested improvement: choose the correct adjective form ('foreign') when describing nouns.

× Since I live in Russia and in a small town, the architecture here is not really a static aesthetically pleasant.

✓ Since I live in a small town in Russia, the architecture here is not really aesthetically pleasing.

Awkward word order and wrong word choice: 'static aesthetically pleasant' is ungrammatical. Use the adjective phrase 'aesthetically pleasing' and place 'small town in Russia' together to avoid the dangling modifier. Suggested improvement: keep modifiers close to the nouns they describe and use established adjective collocations like 'aesthetically pleasing'.