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Giám khảo

Do you like taking pictures of different views?

Thí sinh

Of course, I like taking pictures of different views because I can record the beautiful reviews and I can share photos with my friends after I can think the beautiful phrase and can make me happy.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?

Thí sinh

I prefer like country because I think there are many mountains and rivers. It's make me think quiet and I like to see these beautiful views.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

Thí sinh

I like in other countries but I also like own country because I want to travel in other country and see many things and I can then eat and I also can look other countries culture.

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Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Do you like taking pictures of different views?

Điểm: 48.0

Gợi ý: 回答要更直接并注意语法与用词错误。可以用1句主题句回答喜好,再用1-2句举例说明拍照的原因或带来的感受。避免重复表达,注意单词拼写(reviews→views/ memories)和句子连贯。建议语句不超过5句,使用连接词如 because / so / and then 提高流畅性。

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views because they help me preserve special memories. For example, when I visit a scenic spot I often take wide shots of the landscape and close-ups of interesting details, so I can share them with friends and remember how I felt.

Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?

Điểm: 52.0

Gợi ý: 回答应直接表明偏好并提供具体原因与细节,注意语法(例如“I prefer the countryside”而非“I prefer like country”),时态与主谓一致。可以用连接词 like because / which makes me / so 来增强连贯性,注意句子不要过短或不完整。

Ví dụ: I prefer rural views because the countryside has mountains and rivers that make me feel calm. For instance, walking by a river or looking at distant hills helps me relax and clear my mind.

Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: 回答要更有条理:先给出总体偏好,然后说明至少一两个具体原因并举例。注意词序和搭配(例如“other countries”前加冠词或指代,使用“my own country”),避免重复‘can’的滥用。使用连接词 such as however / also / because 来组织句子。

Ví dụ: I generally prefer views in other countries because travelling abroad allows me to see new landscapes and experience different cultures. For example, I enjoy trying local foods and visiting historic sites, which gives me a deeper understanding of how people live elsewhere.

Ngữ pháp

13: Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× Of course, I like taking pictures of different views because I can record the beautiful reviews and I can share photos with my friends after I can think the beautiful phrase and can make me happy.

Of course, I like taking pictures of different views because I can record the beautiful views and share photos with my friends. Afterwards I can think of beautiful phrases which make me happy.

句中使用了不恰当的名词“reviews”及短语结构混乱。应使用“views”(景色)而不是“reviews”(评论);去掉重复的情态动词“can”并调整句子连贯性,使用“Afterwards I can think of beautiful phrases”表示随后会想到美好的句子,最后用“which make me happy”作定语从句修饰短语。建议:注意名词语义,避免重复冗余的助动词,理清从句关系。

11: Incorrect use of prepositions

× I prefer like country because I think there are many mountains and rivers.

I prefer the countryside because I think there are many mountains and rivers.

原句中“prefer like country”搭配错误。动词prefer后直接加名词或动词不定式,不能接“like”。另外应使用“the countryside”或“the country”表示乡村。建议:学习常见动词搭配,prefer + 名词/动词-ing,避免误用like。

27: Subject-verb agreement errors

× It's make me think quiet and I like to see these beautiful views.

It makes me feel calm and I like to see these beautiful views.

主谓不一致:“It”作为主语时谓语应为“makes”而不是“make”。另外“think quiet”不符合表达习惯,改为“feel calm”更自然。建议:注意主语单复数决定动词形式,并使用正确的形容词搭配动词(feel + 形容词)。

6: Present tense issue

× I like in other countries but I also like own country because I want to travel in other country and see many things and I can then eat and I also can look other countries culture.

I like other countries, but I also like my own country because I want to travel to other countries and see many things. I can try different foods and also learn about other countries' cultures.

原句时态与介词使用混乱:“like in other countries”不正确,应该说“I like other countries”;“travel in other country”应为“travel to other countries”;“can then eat”不自然,改为“try different foods”;“look other countries culture”应为“learn about other countries' cultures”并用所有格。建议:注意介词用法(travel to),复数一致(countries),以及更自然的短语搭配(try food, learn about culture)。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

BeautifulAttractive
DifferentDissimilar; Distinct; Unusual
HappyCheerful; Glad; Fortunate
ManyNumerous; A great/good deal of
QuietSilent; Soft; Peaceful; Unobtrusive
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