Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer communicates the idea but has grammatical errors, redundancy and unnatural phrasing. Keep answers concise (max 5 sentences), start with a clear topic sentence, then give one specific supporting detail using a linking word. Correct common mistakes: say “I’m a photography lover” or “I love photography,” use “I like taking pictures” not “like to clicking,” and say “memories that are unforgettable” or simply “cherished memories.”

Ví dụ: I love photography, so yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. For example, I often photograph sunsets at the beach because they create beautiful colours and calm memories. This habit helps me preserve moments I can look back on later.

Gợi ý: The answer is understandable but hesitant and repetitive. Avoid fillers (MMM, uh) and redundant phrases (“like to prefer both”). Begin with a clear choice or balanced opinion, then use a linking word (e.g., “however” or “on the other hand”) and give one specific contrast. Use correct verb forms: “we see” or “you see.”

Ví dụ: I prefer both urban and rural views for different reasons. Urban areas offer modern architecture and vibrant city scenes, while rural areas provide peaceful landscapes like mountains and rivers, so I enjoy photographing both depending on my mood.

Gợi ý: Good idea but speech is long, grammatically weak and slightly unclear. Start with a direct statement (e.g., “I prefer views in my own country”), then give one or two specific reasons with linking words like “because” or “for example.” Correct grammar: “every state has different views,” “green plains” or “green fields,” and use comparative correctly: “compared to other countries.”

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because India has a great variety of landscapes. For example, each state offers different scenery—Himalayan mountains in the north and tropical beaches in the south—so I find plenty of places to photograph without traveling abroad.

× Well to be honest I'm a photo lover person and that's why I like to clicking pictures of different views and I think taking pictures is a very good habit because in the pictures we collect memories and that is can't forgettable.

✓ Well, to be honest, I'm a photography lover and that's why I like taking pictures of different views. I think taking pictures is a very good habit because in pictures we collect memories and those memories are unforgettable.

The sentence uses awkward adjective-noun combinations and incorrect verb forms. 'photo lover person' is incorrect; use 'photography lover' or 'a person who loves photography' (Incorrect use of adjectives/adverbs). 'like to clicking' mixes infinitive with -ing; correct is 'like taking' (Verb + -ing issue but covered here by adjective phrasing). 'in the pictures' -> 'in pictures' is more natural (article use). 'that is can't forgettable' is ungrammatical: use 'those memories are unforgettable' (adjective usage and sentence structure). Suggestion: use natural noun phrases ('photography lover'), correct verb forms ('like taking'), and proper adjective placement ('unforgettable').

× MMM. Well, to be honest, I like to prefer both in rural areas or in urban areas, because in the urban areas we've seen a lot of modern technology, but in the other side, in the rural area we seen, uh, mountains, rivers, etcetera.

✓ Well, to be honest, I prefer both rural and urban areas, because in urban areas we see a lot of modern technology, but on the other hand, in rural areas we see mountains, rivers, etc.

Multiple agreement and grammatical issues: 'I like to prefer' is redundant; use 'I prefer' (sentence structure). 'both in rural areas or in urban areas' should be 'both rural and urban areas' (conjunction and order). 'we've seen' and 'we seen' are incorrect verb forms for habitual present; use simple present 'we see' (present tense and subject-verb agreement). 'in the other side' should be 'on the other hand' (preposition/conjunction). Also ensure plural consistency: 'rural areas' not 'rural area'. Suggestion: use simple present for general statements, correct verb forms ('see'), and proper connective phrases ('on the other hand').

× Yeah, I am from India and in India there are different States and every state have their different views and according to me it is the best place for different view because in the area there are many mountains, rivers or green grains and that's why I like to prefer my country has a fantastic view in as compared to other country.

✓ Yes, I am from India and in India there are different states and every state has its own views. According to me, it is the best place for different views because there are many mountains, rivers and green fields, and that's why I prefer my country; it has more fantastic scenery compared to other countries.

Several subject-verb agreement and article errors: 'every state have' should be 'every state has' (singular subject with singular verb). 'their different views' is incorrect with 'every state'—use 'its own views' (pronoun agreement). 'different view' -> 'different views' (number). 'in the area there are' is awkward; use 'there are' (sentence structure). 'green grains' is wrong choice of noun; likely 'green fields' (word choice/adjective use). 'I like to prefer my country has a fantastic view in as compared to other country' is ungrammatical: use 'I prefer my country; it has more fantastic scenery compared to other countries' (comparison and article use). Suggestion: match singular subjects with singular verbs, use appropriate possessive pronouns ('its'), choose correct nouns ('fields' not 'grains'), and use standard comparative structures ('compared to other countries').